~Madhoshi maaneet thread # 2~ - Page 72

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MAAN LEAVES GEET??? 😲 OMG..sounds heartbreaking, can't wait for the update!!

Thanks di! 🤗

Loved the update😊

This was trullllllly amazing. I have spent the entire weekend reading your FFs only . You write very well and also gives the readers a beautiful feeling about their relationship . Thank and geat effort.Waiting for the next part.😊

SUPER HIT.. MUSHKAN TUMHARI UPDATE..DO CONTINUE..

hi genius what to say to you ? just God bless you for giving us such wonderful updates .... you made my week end special.... i read your ff's at the end of the day...

~madhoshi~
part 32

suddenly maans grip tightened .. Geet looked at maan...he seemed angry at something
Geet got confused...& caressed his hand to sooth him...but nothing seemed to
calm him down his grip was harder...she looked at him in pain & followed
his view...which was on a lady who just entered the hall from the entrance
geet watched her closely excogitating why he was so disturbed with her presence
the lady walked into the middle of the hall & clapped catching every ones attention
maans restlessness was felt all over geet...his hold was almost crushing her bones
Dev - NT tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?
NT - aapne husband ko congratulate karne aayee hoon
Dev insisted - ex-husband
NT - not yet sweet heart
Dev - Monday we will be
NT - which we shall see on Monday
Maan snapped away her hand to slap NT
Smashed a tight one on her left cheek
NT - Vedi Veer ji..rubbing her cheeks with almost moist eyes
Maan - tum ek bar mere bhai ki zindhaghi karab kar chuki hoo
bus aab aur nahi..is bar it will be me between u & dev
daadi tries to pull maan away...maan was spitting fire in his words
daadi told geet to take maan away from there
NT - aap phele bhi kuch nahi kar paye thi aab bhi kuch nahi kar payaenge
maan raised his hand again to slap her...geet pulled him away
& dragged him all the way to the outhouse to his room
maan pulled his shervani & threw it on the bed
wo NT samjhe the kya hain aapne aap ko?
how dare she thinks of ruining my brother's life...mujhe nafrat hain us aurat se
she can stoop to any dam level for money...
tum mujhe wahan se kyun le kar aayee...geet stood silently in the corner...
she had never seen him so wild... kyun har jagah aapne bachkani
harkathe karthi rahthi hoo? maan grabs her arms...
bolo geet kya zaroort thi tumhe mujhe yanha laane ki
geet slips her hand reluctantly around him... mujhe laagha
maan spat kya laagha tumhe?
geet wispered aap ke nafrat pe to sirf mera haq hain na...
maan - GEET!!!! tum baath samjhena nahi chathi hoo yah...samajh ke
aanjaan banthi hoo..pushes her away turning her with thrust..
she falls on the wall..woo ..scared...she utters..aap ko gussa karna
hain to mujhe karlo ...aise kisi pe haat...before she could complete his breath
touched her neck...main tumhe kasi gussa hosaktha hoon? His words were no longer
slurred as he whispered them in pain into her ears, pressing himself against her.
she could feel his whole body pressing against hers, and she squirmed a bit harder,
but he held her in place. His lips traveled to her neck, despite her squirming,
she actually felt a part of her awaken, turned on by his show of dominance.
she was turned on by his assertion of control over her. her head tilted involuntarily
to the side to allow him more room, but she kept up her fight to get free.
When he bit her neck, she hissed not sure Whether it was in pleasure or protest

he turned her briskly to face him tumhe meri nafrat se itna pyar kyun hain?
she fluttered her lashes, he leaned in, pressing his lips to hers, wasting no time
and taking her lower lip between his teeth, biting none too gently. she squeaked
and tried to shove him off, but he caught her hands and pinned them to the wall,
one on either side of her head. A knee went between her legs to keep her motionless.
tang aagaya hoon main is nafrat ke rishthe ko nibhathe nibhathe
tang aagaya hoon tumhare itna kareeb ho kar bhi door ho ke
kyun kar dethi tum mujhe itna laachar, bebas
his right hand snaps the pallo & slips the strap & viciously placed his teeth
she struggled in pain...he deepened his demeanor with her moan
nahi pata tha, itna dard bhi hota hai nafrat mein, varna kabhi nafrat na karta tumse.
mar mar ke jeeta hoon har lamha ..nahi bardhasht hota yeh doori mujhse
teri aadat si ho gayi hai inn saaso ko, varna ye saanse lena sweekar na karta
he moved to the other side leaving his marks...she gave in quitely to his
savage, she knew he will not go beyond, she knew he will stop the moment he
realizes what he was doing to her...bus darr tha kanhi wo lamha choot na jayee
he moved up to her lips furiously biting her neck, shoulder, exposed unexposed
parts, she knew it was his anger & thwart that had been foiled in
deep with in him...it was becoming unbareable for her...it was no longer pleasureable
it was really getting painful...it probably did bleed..she remained tranquil
he moved back in a jerk...lossening his grip on her arms...she knew it will
be guilt that will take over him....She turned her face up so her lips barely
brushed against his for a moment before he leaned into her and gently pressed
his soft now lips to hers. he felt so different like she had a spell on him
ever since they met that day...it never seemed to die...it just exponentially multiplied
he felt calm & quite like after a harican
Pulling back from their tender kiss, Maan lightly pressed his forehead to hers and
kept his eyes locked on her as he took his hands from her arms to cup her face
her hands slipped to his back gently pulling him into her.
kyun mujhe aapna ghunhegar bana dethi hoo
kaise sambal pavonga main itne maasoomiyat
kaise mila pavonga main khudse-tumse nazre

maan stepped back having a elucidate view of her bruised frail skin
he could not bear the sight. he fumbled stumbled...almost tripped
pushing his hair back clutching his fist...stiffing his teeth almost
banging the cupboard he closed his face not able to endure her most
awkward predicament. the woeful plight of her bleeding lips,
bruises on her cheeks, neck, & further...she set her palloo & moved to
reassure him...he turned his back to her wondering why on earth she
would still try to come closer why did she remain exanimate to his
tempestuous conduct. he pulled his back bag from the top shelf of
the cupboard & started randomly pilling in his belongings

geet - aap kanhi ja rahe ho
maan - tumse door, janha mera saya bhi tumhe na choo sakhe
geet grabs his hand
maan - chodo mujhe, mere pas mat anna
geet - lekin..she hugs him really tight terrified
maan snaps the strap of the bag & keeps his hand off her
maan - geet mujhe jane do
geet - u said u will never leave me..tears wets his chest soaking his heart
in her pain
us ek pal main maan samjh nahi paya ki use kya zyaada dard detha geet
ka yun toot ke rona yah geet ke wo halth jis ke liye khud ko kabhi maaf nahi
kar sakta!!!
he held her arms hurting her further
geet samjh nahi payee use dard kisse se horaha tha..un chooto se yah
maan ki berukhi se,
maan - manlo maine jooth kaha tha
geet - humara saath jooth kaise ho sakta hain?
maan - han sab kuch jooth tha humara saat, humara ehsaas, wo har ek pal,
sab kuch ek fasana tha...mujhe yeh sab bemaine laghte hain..
bus ek joot aur kuch nahi
geet - fir mujhe jooth kyun nahi lata? mujhe fasana kyun nahi lagta
maan - manlo geet mere aks ka koi wajood nahi tumhari zindgahi main
he turns & walks away
geet - lekin aapka yeh aks mujhe aap ke pas kheench tha hain
iska main kya karo..holding on to her stomach!!maan did'nt see her holding
her stomch...
maan - main tumhare nasdeek rahene ke layak nahi geet!!! his words
faded as he rushed down the steps!!!!

Ye soochke ki wo kya soochenge, Soochte hi rah gaye geet!!!
derd dil ka sah na sake, aur aansu aankh se bah gaye...
gham is baat ka nahi ke us ne kuch na kaha
tuta dil is baat se ke wo kyun kuch samjh nahi payee!!!

dono ko khaber hai sab shayad mager

najaney kyun rulata hai
najaney kyun satata hai

dono khilkhilati hain bas ek dujhe k liye
dono ro bhi jati hai to bas ek dujhe k liye

fir yeh ehsaas janey kab hoga!!!
uff muskan ki hasi bhi koo gayee ho shayad!!!
actually lost this whole part 32 !!!!😲😲😲😡😡😡 it was so difficult to
get the feeling back ...but I was suprised it came out better
& longer than the orignal part...almost double the size..muskan dead!!!!

LINK TO PART 33

VM CREDIT GOES TO sonu2ever

my new ff -truely magical-

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan

muskan yaaaarrrrrrrrr

aww tht was sad...the whole passionate part seem to hurt me more..

Thanks a lot di for the wonderful update...I really don't want Maan to leave...Please di,bring him back soon...Thanks for the heart wrenching update though