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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 23

maan makes her sit on the couch, he sits on the opposite chiar & looks at her admiringly
she looks into the menu card & says mujhe kuch samjh nahi atta
aap hi order kar do ..
maan - tumhe italian nahi pasand
geet - I know it is pasta & all... & it is really bland
maan smiles at her ignorance - aacha I will order something for us..
maan places the order ..he takes her hand in his
maan - tum aapna khayal kyun nahi rakthi
geet - aap ho na..rakhne ke liya
maan - seriously geet..tumhare veerji ko bhi tumhari chinta rahthi hain
geet - kyun unho ne kuch kaha aap se
maan - nahi he was so worried for u
geet - woo.. main ghar main sab ke fav hoon...aur sab loog mujhe bhut pyar karthe hain
I have never stayed alone ...isliya veerji thoda senti hogaya honghe
maan - u don't even have ur food on time..wat is this
geet - main kya kar sakthi hoon...hamesha se maa mujhe khana kilathi aayee hain
aur yanha maa nahi hain to mujhe koi khana nahi kilatha

maan - see ur maa is not there ..atleast have ur food on time..
geet - mujhe khana khana boring lagtha hain
maan and baby rolls his eyes

geet - u know some times on a holiday I used to landup sleeping for like 18hrs or 20hrs
maa will wake me.. feed me & I used go back to sleep again..
maan & baby~ both shocked😲
uski baathe mano khatam hi nahi hothe, koi rahethi aapne duniya main
use na kud ki khabar na zamane ki khabar thi...uski duniya to aab Maan main
simatne laaghi thi subha hoti to uski bahoon main aur raat dhal thi to uski chaav main....
Maan bhi koya rahtha uski bechkani baatho main uski har baath maan lethe...
use khabhi kuch kha nahi pata..yaa phir kha na hi nahi chaatha tha..
dono hi khush the aapne is pyari oops!!! nafart ki pyari se duniya mein..
waiter gets their order
maan serves her the pasta & chicken
geet has little bit & adds some chilli flakes
baby~mama bus karoo bhut spicy laag raha hain
geet~tujhe bland khana hain to papa ke pet main jaa mujhe tang mat kar
baby~please mama

geet - dehkoo na mujhe chilly flakes nahi add karne de ra
aap kyun nahi raklethe isko aapne pas
maan looked at her in shock - kuan tumhe pareshan kar raha hain
maan looks around
geet - kuch nahi ..& bents her head on the table ..
aapne bebasi pe khud he roo padi..
maan came & sat next to her in the couch and put his hand around
maan - kya hoja tha hain tumhe, mera hote koi tumhe paresan nahi kar saktha
he adds chilli flakes..& wipes her tears and feeds her
baby~koi mujh se pyar nahi kartha😒 geet~giggles
maan makes her eat the whole pasta & she was busy telling him all about HP
her school, her friends, her college, her family..non stop

they finish their lunch & move on to pick gifts for meera's parents
while sitting in the car..maan pulls her seat belt...
baby~mama seat belt!!! geet~pata hain..wait kar..papa ka dhyan hatne to de
as maan looks away she just unbuckles the seat belt
baby~ufff...relifed
geet - kya gift le rahe hain
maan - swarovski crystals
geet - crystals kyun?
maan - they are nice & classy

when they reach the show room geet looked lost
maan - could u show me autumn/winter 2010-2011 collection please
he selects a jewellry set...& turns to look for geet
she had walked in looking at the intricate designs..she stops at admiring
beautiful Dellaria which was made of aurora borealis crystal which refracts light,
changing colour at different angles... there was a bud and accents on the stamen
in Aquamarine crystal..she picked it & when she kept it back it slipped from her hand
and broke...the sales girls rushed to her..geet panicked & looked for maan & started crying...
maan asked the sales person to move away while he walked to her...
geet - main ...crying!!! wooo....crying!!!!
she could'nt speak...
maan - its ok...kuch nahi hota...
he craddled her head & patted her back..she still was very scared
maan - u come & help me select a gift for anuty ..
geet - nahi..& started crying again
maan picks another crytal from the rack & drops it down...
geet looks at him...maan lifts his eyebrows & says OOPS!!
geet smiles & hugs him..he kisses her forehead & says tum roya mat karoo
he wipes her tears..she clings on to him..
they select the jewellry set and a Maxi swan for gifting them
maan pays for the broken crytals & the gifts
geet - aap meri salary se kaat leena
maan - it is much more than ur 2 months salary
geet gives him a confused look
maan - so u will have to work longer with me..to pay back
geet - but I can't work after 2 months
maan - kyun tum kanhi jaa rahi ho?
geet - nahi after 2 months it will start to show ..she swallows her words
maan - show wat geet?
geet - kuch nahi... baby~me me!!😳
har bar yun geet ka baad badal na maan ko bechain karne laaga
kuch samjh nahi paya...warna to uski har baat samjh jata ..
yeh baath use paresha karne laaghi thi..thoda sa...aadhi aduri baathe
uski...kuch tha to pura sach chupa inme...jis se woo anjaan tha
while going down in the lift maan pins her on the wall & asks


kya baath hain jo tum mujh se chupathi rahethi hoo
mujhe kyun aise laagtha hain ki..tum paresan ho meri wajah se
tumhara yun nazare pheer na meri dil bechain kar detha hain

geet sahem se gayee...dar ke neeche behet gayee..
she sat down cuddled up in the corner...she cried burring her face
in her knees...maan closed his eyes & calm himself down...
maan - I am sorry..please don't cry..main tumhe aise nahi deehk saktha
damit for GOD SAKE STOP CRYING

lift stops...geet walks out of the lift..maan tries to stop her she snaps
& leaves ...she takes the taxi & goes home

precap
geet bechain!!

thanxs thanxs thanxs for all the replies & post....please please do comment..
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay!!!
First one to comment here as well😉

I forgot that I had reserved this😛 So you'l see my comments again after few posts😛😳

Loved the way Maan was asking geet to take care!
Her reply, aap ho na khayal rakhne ke liye was soo cute just like their baby😊
that line 18-20 hrs wid mom feeding in between🤣 🤣
This line was too hilarious-''geet~tujhe bland khana hain to papa ke pet main jaa mujhe tang mat kar''🤣🤣🤣

The details of the you mentioned about the crystal jewellery was really nice👏
Aww, geet is soo sweet, cute, innocent when she starts crying after breaking the crystal!
And maan breaking another just to comfort her was really sweet and touching!!!

Geet jaane-anjaane mein bolne lagti hai but never finishes!

In short, a great update👏
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey saw ur update b4 u pm me ......luved it muski ab yeh raaz tu khul do na maan ke samne ......luved the way geet said aap rakhlo ise...lol...nd hw maan broke another crystal just 2 calm her dwn ....maan bei naa😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc update plzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Last scene was sad! ;(
loveeeee the crystal scene & how maan caress about her when it comes to eating! :D
I m just scared...about the baby! Geet should eat atleast for their baby!
&& Muskaan! don't let anything happen to the baby please.
& MAAN SHOULD get to knoww now that she is preg with his child..so he takes extra caree of her..
Update soooon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeah!!
Madhoshi update too!!!
what can i say .. u know ... loved it ..
btw can Maan find out about the baby soon!!
love the way he does soo mch for her .. unknowingly!!!
true love!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wao muskan lovely update how sweet of maan he is so caring
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg omg omg omg
ermmmmmmmm i feel sorry for her - erm erm erm i think its tym he starts piecing the clues together!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Forgive me for the double post, I actually forgot that I had reserved a post😳

Loved the way Maan was asking geet to take care!
Her reply, aap ho na khayal rakhne ke liye was soo cute just like their baby😊
that line 18-20 hrs wid mom feeding in between🤣 🤣
This line was too hilarious-''geet~tujhe bland khana hain to papa ke pet main jaa mujhe tang mat kar''🤣🤣🤣

The details of the you mentioned about the crystal jewellery was really nice👏
Aww, geet is soo sweet, cute, innocent when she starts crying after breaking the crystal!
And maan breaking another just to comfort her was really sweet and touching!!!

Geet jaane-anjaane mein bolne lagti hai but never finishes!

In short, a great update👏
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lol....papa ke pet me jaa ke raho...trust me...every female says this at least once in her term....!!!!!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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