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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 24

maan follows the taxi in his car ..
geet reaches home
pinky - yeh kya geet tumne sindoor lagaya howa hain
geet - nahi woo mandir main tika lagthe waqt..
pinky - Oh!!!ok ok
geet goes to the room & starts crying...& wonders
main unhe kaise bata sakthi hoon...bata ne se unki paresani bhi badh jayaghi
I don't know how he will react...he may not want to see my face again
wat will he think of me..why will he believe that it his child.. its more than 2 months now
he may start hating me even more..he may not talk to me again..
mujhe aapne se door kardenghe..lekin aise to aur confusion badh raha hain
geet walks up & down in the room..pinky calls her for dinner..
geet - mera dinner hogaya hain
baby~aaj bhi dinner nahi milegha...
pinky - ok I will get u some milk
geet - nahi I am going to sleep..I am very tired
pinky - ok...
geet locks the door & sneaks out...from the back door
main uhe sab kuch bata doonghi..baby~are u sure!!😲

she walks out looking behind ..she turns to see maan sitting on his cars
bonnet & texting... baby~oye !!!mama dehkoo papa!!!😳

on a lighter note...just enjoy the weekend...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgczcIzSH5o&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


maan - aagayee tum...kab se wait kar raha tha(still looking into his phone)
geet looked at him confused
maan gets down & opens the door for her..
she sits in quite & looking down...they reach the outhouse..
geet did'nt say a word..they walk into the outhouse...
maan - tum itni chup mat rahoo...mera dil doob jata hain
geet tears starts rolling down her eyes...
maan - i am sorry mujhe lift main tum se itna rudely nahi baath karna chahiya tha
geet - woo use din hum..main ..main..
she stood staring at a Maan and opened her mouth to speak again..it doesn't mean anything.
nahi yeh teehk nahi hain..mera matlab hain
... she tried again. it doesn't have to mean
anything to you if you don't want it to. It seems to mean a lot to me changing my entire life
of course, why wouldn't it? I just don't want you to think it's about money.
I don't want it or feel that a claim is required, I guess you can ignore the whole thing.
maan - Geet what the hell are you talking about?
geet turned to look away from him..
aap yeh mat sochna ki main aapke paise main intrested hoon yah aap ko
black mail karna chathi hoon, or i expect anything from u...
(she gives the anklet back) woo veer ji ne sab kuch teehk kar diya hain
aap ko in sab main nahi padna padega..main main..woo actually I am pre...

maan - chup bilkul chup...tum aise soch bhi kaise sakthi hoo ki main tumhare bare main..
he pauses & hugs her I am really sorry geet..
tum khabhi galat nahi ho sakthi..tum to mera ghumaan ho...
tum se pyari aur saachi to aur kuch nahi ho sakthi
geet - lekin mujhe aap se khena tha ki..
maan - mujhe kuch nahi khena aur sunna..bus tum muskarthi rahoo..
tum jo muskara ke kahoge to dedenghi aapni jaan

(he sits on his knees & lifts her leg)
tum jo sharma ke kahoge to kardengha sab kurban
(she shies ..he rests her on his knees & puts on the payal)
itra ke jo kahoghe to pura karengha tumhara ka sab armaan
(she turns to leave..he hold the leg &)

aur jo humare saath raho to meri zindaghi hojaya aasan
(pulls her closer presses a kiss on it)
khoo se jaathi geet uski baathoo main...phir kha nahi payee aapne
(geet sits down next to him looking into his eyes)
bebasi ka allam..aab to maan ke baathe uske dil ko choo ne laaghi thi
(with tears in her eyes)
uski itni bhi kareeb nahi hona chahte thi woo
aur ek pal bhi us se dur nahi hona chahte thi woo
agar uska khuda raaze hota to sajda bhi kar lethi woo
itna jo uske khayal main jeena laaghi to woo

maan - challoo dinner karthe hain
(maan holds her from shoulder & raise togather looking into each other)
baby~challo challo geet - umm
maan - dehkoo main ne dal mahkani aur chicken butter masala banwaya hain
spicy bhi hain

geet smiled
maan served it in her plate & geet looked at him angrily
maan - uff aab kya kiya maine
geet - aap nahi khilaawoo ga
maan smiled & fed her..
geet - aap mera ghar ke bhar kya kar rehethe
maan - tum pe nazar rakh raha tha..tumhare veerji ne mujhe extra duty jo diya hain
geet - hate u
maan - hate u 2, 3, 4,5...10..actually ..100
baby~abhi muje 100 tak padhna padhe gha..thud faints!! 🤢!
geet - thats not fair sirf 10 tak hota hain..
maan - yeh kahan ka rule hain
geet - mera rule hain
maan - challoo baten mat banaoov khana finish karo..

they finish the dinner
geet - thanxs good night...main jaa rahi hoon.
maan lifts her & takes to the bedroom...& lay her on the bed
geet - mujhe ghar jana hain
maan tucks the spread around her & kisses her..tum khanhi nahi jaarahi hoo
maan changes into his shorts & vest..& slips next to her
geet hugs him & says..mujhe aap se kuch kahna tha...
maan - umm
geet - aap hamesha mera saath rahoge kya?
maan - umm!!
geet - kuch bhi hojaya
maan - umm!!
geet - kyun?
maan - because I hate u
geet ne kuch nahi kha..shayad kha nahi payee
aapne badalthi bebasi se aab geet ghabrane laaghi thi...use aapne ehsaas badlathe laagh rahe the...mano maan ki bina jina namumkin se laagne laagha tha, har ghadi use hi dehkna chathi thi..deehkthi to use mehsoos karna chathi..
mehsoss karthi to use ek pal me puri zindhaghi jee ne laaghi thi woo
yun uska har pal pas rahna use aur bhi majboor kar detha..aur bhi bebas kardetha yeh madhoshi ka kaise allam tha kaise ehsaas tha jo geet samjh nahi paa rahi thi

in the morning geet kissed maan on his forehead & left
shayad uske ankhee khulee hoti to jaa nahi paathi us se door
bina kuch khahe bina kuch sune yunhi chali gayee
when maan got up latter in the morning..became restless looking for her
aab to aadat se pat gayee the uske chahre se aapni subha sajani ki..
kuch adhur sa laagha...uska yun chale jana...mano suraj hi root gaya hoo
subha se..mano dil root gaya hoo dhadkan se...

precap
maan angry😲

VM CREDIT GOES TO Qurrat1993
thanxs for all ur support...thanxs a lot for the nice wonderfull coments...I love reading them all again & again....hope u like this update too..please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di🤗

1st one to comment 😆
😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
wonderful update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
baby part is sweet😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Geet is so helpless....................woh chah kar bhi Maan ko nahi bata paa rahi
loved Maaneet moments❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
precap is interesting😊😊😊
beautiful VM
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...................superb song ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
nice work Qurrat1993👏👏👏👏
plsssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina🤗
Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow........nice baby part.........maan ki bechaini.........par geet bhi kya kare..............😳😳😳😳😳😳
maan ka geet ka khayal rakhna,,,,,,,,,mind blowing hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
oomg omg omg kehte kehte ruk kyun gayi!!!!!!!!!!
it was almost out in the open tooo
haiiiiiiiiii
omg omg omg y is he angry????
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
hey honey😊,

Cute update😊......loved the way maan fed her food👏👏👏👏👏👏👏......he takes care of her like a small kid👏👏👏👏👏.........i hope her pregnancy doesnt create any rift between them😭😭😭 anyways its too long to think........but loved todays update......plz update soon

-----------------vinitha😊
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
read before ur PM😊
so maan taking care of her every time doesn't matter day or night😳😳
geet almost came out with the truth😛 but u know maan doesn't allows her to complete it😡😆
n maan feeding her

n waiting to see why maan is angry i think because she didn't inform before leaving
Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wwwwwwwwoooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww
awesome part di loved it soo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope Maan doesnt Misunderstands her later.. nice update..and nice VM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
luv u di...superb update again...want geet to reveal the truth..jaldi..
😊😊
rohini
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Posted: 14 years ago
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edit
wow lovely update 👏
per geet rukki kyu????
aur ky hoga agay?? maan ko gussa kyu ayega?? please itna restless na bnaya karay hmay 😭
now please update soon
love
Noor
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago

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