Misti,
This was excellent. I am writing a scene for my FF where finally Dev decides that he has to have a talk with Radhika and they especially he has to come to terms with his Abhay past. Some of the dialogues are coming out to be like what you expressed. But, I am in a dilemma because this is turning out to be serious stuff and doesn't have much humor in it, so is not going too much with the tone of my FF. But I have to do that in order to tie all the loose ends and make Abhay's actions more palatable.
But, you managed to put humor after the serious stuff. That was really good.
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