Tinka Tinka - Page 4

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Wow Dol wow u just amaze me every time with ur writing, u really have a way with words!! it was awesome and guess what, just this morning i was listening to this song tinka tinka in the car and thinking of Maneet and here i see u've written along the lines of it!! it's brilliant too good!! and yea every time u write somehting as such or and OS do PM me cuz i love reading what u write!!😳

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Dol ... I have only one word to say to you right now .... MAGNIFICENT ....

Thanks girl 😳





I was right Dol. I told you in Irresistibles, i would cry when i'd read ur post, because u cried while writing it. and i know D, when we write something with soo much intensity, it touches the other persons heart. You touched my heart D ...
Geet's life ... in a few paras;
Geet's happiness, Geets pains, Geets hopes, Geets fears ... in a few paras;
Geet's failures in life and her success in the shape of Maan ... in a few paras;
AWESOME...

No matter how much I write about this woman and her misery, I feel it's too less. I cannot be thankful enough that Maan is in her life. She needs every bit of shower she can get. Looks like there is no end to her misery...my heart goes out to her man...

I felt as if geet was saying to Maan .....

Zindagi ki udasion mein
waqt kay imtihanoon mein
mein nay tumhain yun paya hai
jaisay chand ko chandni mil jati ho
jaisay pyasay ko pani mil jata ho
jaisay jism ko zindagi mil jati ho
jaisay rooh ko sukoon mil jata hai
jaisay ibadat ko mairag mil jati ho
jaisay aankhoon ko Noor mil jata ho

ab jo tum say bichri tu ..
mar jaoon gi
mit jaoon gi
lut jaoon gi
fana ho jaoon gi

meri zindagi ka hasil bhi tum ho
meray wajood ka saya bhi tum ho


Lovely poem.....I'm so glad I'm friends with such awesome poets, shayars and writers on this forum....
....

aur kya likhoon D ... ufff Maneet have driven me crazy buddy ..... total crazy!!!
Count me in bud...Maaneet magic hai yeh.