Neith's: Maiden OS on MayUr

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

t was a very diff OS.Very cute & simple

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

that was a great os dear.................i thoroughly enjoyed it....................................................

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

That was fantastic neith, this wud ve been a real pleasure to watch on screen!! I loved everything abt the OS, and how well u have woven the whole story around a simple premise yet tied all the lose ends so beautifully, the characters of Mayank and Nupur are so wonderful that imagining anything on them is a pleasure and u wrote the story with the cricket ball , chironjee and the dupatta part so well that it was just wonderful to read this. Please keep writing ..do PM me if you can, so that I dont miss your wonderfu writing :)

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Binal Damania

@binudamania

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

oo.....that was so so sweet.......

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

osommmmmmmmmmmm do write more and pm me

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Hey Neith,

So sorry for the late reply but wowwwww and you are writing for the first time. It was just fantastic and sooo well written, i could relate to each and every bit of it. Aww Chiru jee is just so adorable. Excellent work man. Do write more and do post it hehe! God bless!