New FF : Beauty nd her Beast ( CH40/pg71

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I am trying to write Dutta and Naku story based what I think abt their characters. I am not sure if you are gonna like it . If not let me know.

Life is full surprises, up and downs. Sometimes it smiles back at you and sometimes we turn the other way around. Let me introduce you to two people one who has faced life and the challenges it throws with a smile and the other who turns away from life, lives in the dark afraid to see brightness in the sky. Let see what life has in store for them, what happens when they cross paths.

Its early in the morning and raining in the city of dreams.. "Amchi Mumbai." We see Naku was sipping on her tea, while watching lil children go to school . She remembers her days in the orphanage, where she lived for the past 21 years. It been only a month since she graduated and left the only home she ever knew. For her it was a new beginning, she did not where she was going but she said to herself today is a new day. Something kept telling her today is very special. She smiles and goes to get dressed for her interview scheduled for the day.

Meanwhile not far away, Dutta gets up with his usual gloomy mood and bad hangover. Then he heard Baji is his only friend come in ' " Dutta awake up , its late we got a meeting at 11am today and AS is calling you for breakfast" . For Dutta , Baji and AS was all he had . Life changed for him after AS found out that his father was having an affair and then left them for another woman with whom he had three daughters (THE EVIL TRIO). Who were anything but sisters to him.

He lost everything back then, his father, his home and his life. He was no more the Dutta who smiled at smallest things in life; for he felt life was make a joke of him. A joke that he never got over.

Today was a very special day for Naku she was going for an Interview to her Dream company DSP industries. She a lot about the bash and rude Dutta Patil , but she knew this was a chance of life time . Walking down the road to bus stand, suddenly car Zoomed past and she was drenched wet.

Naku : Watch out ! Do not you know how do drive.
The car stop and reversed.. the windows rolled back
Baji : Yai haila ! Ulta chor kotwal ko dantay .
Naku : What ! (Fuming)
Baji : U r walking as if you are walking in the park and U ask us if we know how to drive .
Some guys staring at naku ( u see she was wearing full white )
Baji : Anyways, U look messed up , can we drop u somewhere .
Naku : No thanks ! (still PISSED )

Suddenly someone comes and open the back door of the car and holding by the arm makes her sit in the car. Then turns to give a stern look at guys , making run off . Naku looked to face the guy , the first thing that caught her eye were his earring and she looked at his eyes staring at her . She would feel her skin burning by his stare. But his She notices his face was expressionless.

He sat back the car ' and began to drive again .
Naku : Sorry
Baji : No problem. I am Baji and this is ( Dutta frowns ) forget it . Toh bol where do want us to drop you .
Naku : DSP industries .
Baji : ( Repeats ) DSP industries . What are you going there for?
Naku : I have an interview scheduled for the post of an EA .
Baji : EA ( raises his eye brows ) Hmm ( Winks at Dutta )
Dutta : ( Giving baji the usual shut ur trap look ) and goes back to driving .
Baji : Do Worry , u will do fine .
They reach DSP industries and Naku gets offs.
Naku : Thank u , Baji and Thank u too ( Looking at Dutta.. Dutta looks away )
Naku ( Thought to herself what a rude man ' But Baji is sweet . )
Baji : ( Repeats ) DSP industries . What are you going there for?
Naku : I have an interview scheduled for the post of an EA .
Baji : EA ( raises his eye brows ) Hmm ( Winks at Dutta )
Dutta : ( Giving baji the usual shut ur trap look ) and goes back to driving .
Baji : Do Worry , u will do fine .
They reach DSP industries and Naku gets offs.
Naku : Thank u , Baji and Thank u too ( Looking at Dutta.. Dutta looking away )
Naku : Thought what a rude man and there was something abt him '

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Edited by scorpio10 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyyyyyyy Scorpio !
i just love it
very nice plot
Dutta is superb in ur FF
plz continue and do pm me :P

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice start...continue soon... wil dutta b tking the interview? lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
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next please. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy scorpio..
nice start..ur FF is interesting...
update fast
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Part II

DSP industries, an investment company known for its takeovers. DSP or Dutta Sriram Patil was feared in business world for his ruthlessness. But his employees loved him for he was good to them. They knew he was a good guy and the best boss they could have.
That day in DSP interviews were to be held for an EA To Dutta Patil . The palce was filled with aspiring candidates. Enter Baji and Dutta enter Dutta's cabin.
Baji : Wow ! So many girls. Dutta u r lucky. Now let's start the ramp walk.
" Shut up '" Says Dutta .
Baji : Oh!. Bholgaya!.. U don't even look at girls, but please do not hire a guy. Agreed ki Tum sirf mere ho , par mein puri world ka . But recruiting anyone pls pls think abt me .
Dutta : " stop ur natunki"
Baji : Ok! (Seriously) I like Naku, (Dutta looks at him) I think she will suit the post. I went through her file in car and she deserves it
Dutta : Hmmm . Let see !
Baji in his mind " let see " and smile.
The interview starts.. Most of girls were airheaded.. Just there to meet Dutta or impress but fail badly.
The last interview was Naku (she had to get cleaned up) '
Dutta back busying reading her File 'he was impressed and Baji was right she did deserve the post.

Baji : Arre Naku pls come in
Dutta looked at her ' he thinking to himself she still looked the same, like she looked Five years ago. She still looked so innocent, so delicate and god damn pretty. But then he looked away it been a long time, he thought.
Naku shocked to see Baji and the rude man '. She then realized he was DSP..
Dutta : I read ur file and I think u deserve this post .
Naku suddenly found it difficult to speak and thinking how was she to work with him .
Baji : Go meet Suds in the HR Team , he will give u the details .
Naku nodded and walked out ' Thinking.

Baji very happy.. : Arre Bhao ! Dil kush keya ..
Dutta lost in thoughts again and then suddenly sd " chalo meeting hai na"

Dutta driving bck home '..suddenly he sees a group of kids screaming and shouting happily while someone gives them chocolates .. That someone was Naku .. she did not have anyone else to share her happiness so she decided to share it with the street kids .



Part 3 :
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1491216&TPN=3
Edited by scorpio10 - 15 years ago
.scorpio10 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thx Guys .. will definitely continue .. U send me ur suggestions
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey scorp Lovely FF update soon n do pm me by the way wats an EP??? sorry im a lil dumb on these stuffs
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessmithai

hey scorp Lovely FF update soon n do pm me by the way wats an EP??? sorry im a lil dumb on these stuffs



Its EA ( an executive assistant to CEO / MD )
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great yar, very well written. keep writing. 👏

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