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radiant_raisa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...this is soooooo sad 😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

apart at any minute...he wanted to lock him self..away in cold, frozen place where he did'nt
have to feel anything...anything at all...


part 127


in the morning ..she just thought about the series of incidences & felt silly..
all this problem is coming up because she was building up expectations..
things were far too easy & less hurting when she did'nt expect anything from
him...she realized ..how his mere one look used to bring happiness in her...& now
he is there for her....every min & every sec...then why can't be happy with wat I have...why am I asking for more...4 saal 4 saal..tak unke har ek baath ko samjhthi rahi..phir..
aab kyun nahi samjh paathi..ki main samjhna hi nahi chahathi ...
main unse door kaise ho sakthi hoon...she looks around..how she actually
brought two tickets she looked at them hit it on her head & kept smiling..
she wondered why she booked the same room where they stayed last time..
geet yeh tujhe kya horaha hain..itna gussa..teehk nahi hain...
she kissed his pics & said sorry...main kuch jadha hi gusaa hogayee na....
aap ke saath rehne ka kuch to aasar hoga na..kitna gussa karthe ho aap...
she wipes her tears & kisses his pic...cuddles his pics..don't know how many times she kissed his pics...she was happy & dossed off...hugging his snap..

maan missed her the whole day..kept calling her on her cell..
he called to the hotel & tried getting connected...but she did'nt pick up th call
he thought she was still very angry with him...he send her some flowers with a note

Bas ek pal mai he bat khatm kar dali..
zindagi jo pori thi woh addhori kar dali..
par kaise tumhe Samjhayeee
Yun zindagi se apno ko chorra nahi karthe

when the person came to deliver the flowres..she was fast a sleep...
geet wakes up in the afternoon..she thinks about their time togather..
she tries to relive every moment..she really feels sorry...she wanted to meet him
at once...she decides to finish her work here & then get back to delhi at once..
she books her returns tickets..the first avilable ticket was for sunday early morning 5.00am
next day..ek raat aur unse door...unho nai teehk hi kaha tha..main unse door nahi rah paavoonghi
she cursed herself to have come away like this...

latter in the afternoon she went to krish's school..
she met up with krish & principal..she sat through the play & added her views
she even gave a CD which she got it recorded with the songs in sequence for the play

maan was running out of options..to reach geet...it was past mid night
he finally sat down & drafted a mail to her..she read the mail & kissed his pic
& shied...she could'nt wait to get back...she tried calling him...but his number was
switched off..that was strange...she became restless..if she could..she would have
just flashed to delhi...but at times things are out of there reach!!!..thats destiny!!!!

next day geet catches the flight & reaches delhi..she stops at the temple.. to pray for him
she felt that sudden need to take blessings..probably because she knew she was wrong..
she has never been wrong in their relationship..but this is was the first time some thing
like this happened..she felt weak & tired & pale.the people around her gave her some water
& fruits to eat.. suggested her to stay back & rest for few mins...she called maan..
but his phone was switched off again...

precap
where is maan????

muskan upset...readers losing hope on me😭😭😭...how could u do this to me....
sorry for the dealy in the update ..I guess the IF surver was down...sad part will end soon.. just imagine my plight writing this..when I am so very happy after watching that lovely episode..thanxs for all ur posts & replies..I just love them...keeps me on track....
please please do comment & press like button even if u don't like it😉😆
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskiiiiiii.......

😭😭😭😭

feeling bad for Maan and Geet.. btw, where is Maan???.. don't tell me he took flight to Shimla... and please don't harm him.. Can't read sad parts :(

Please update soooooon

😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey muskaan,

oh why are you upset sweety........we readers are never upset with u r ff...its just wonderful....anyways it was sad,but at least geet realised and went back......i hope maan dint go to simla........anyways waiting for their reunion😭....amazing update.


love you,
vinitha
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzz dun make it more sad.....


maan kahan hai????


continue sooN!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski di just read part 125 126 and 127 me is very very mad at u. no not bcuz of the twist bcuz of the note at the bottom of part 125. what the heck was that? kya thank u lagake rakha hain? ab na main bhi geet ki tarha gussa ho jayoongi. did i complain that u told me to make it so many times? no right? toh phir?? i love this story and i'm happy to b able to contribute to it even if it's a small pic or a little idea or anything at all. and coming to the updates u said readers are losing hope on u? well those readers need to get outta here cuz all their doing is discouraging u. u r the writer and u know what wud b best for the story. and i bet u will make up for the sad sad parts after it's over. toh i have total hope in u. keep rocking on pata nah maan kaha chala gaya.
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWhhh!!! Musks..your update made me teary yaar...but I loved it!! O and srry for not reading ur madhoshti update yet..you made like 5 updates and I've yet read one..I'll get to it very soon. Thanks for the update 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
we never loose hope on u sweetheart,its just that ur ffs r full of loveeeeeee and passion and geet have been selfless so to se both of them sad makes ur readers sad toooooo
but loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
sapnaajay - thanxs a lot..that was really motivating...so sweet of u
raisa159 - sorry for the teary part..glad u decided to read madhoshi
priya - sorry yaar..gussa mat karna..I just wanted to give u the due credit
anufa - maan umm!!! thats the twist!!!
febinyusuff - keep guessing..where maan is????
vinitha - reunion..umm!!!! will take few parts...
thanxs a lot for being so motivating...
I was just turning into a very serious part & very scared about all ur reactions...
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update. hmm where can maan go?

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