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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Hi Muskan 😊 😊

Why are you upset? 😲
Don't you know how much we all love you?😲

You always make us happy, Muskan😊 And I am saying this on behalf of every member here😊
We all wait like crazy for your PM's, for your likes on our replies, for your comments! 😊 😊
So don't be upset, please. Nahi toh hum sab ka dil toot jaayega...

And as for this update. it was really good 😊
I have a query-Did geet get to see the flowers and the note he had sent??
Maan is really upset 😭 Hope Geet finds him soon 😊

Update soon 😊



I am not sure she saw the note since she was asleep when it was delivered and she left very early in the morning! So his note about he coming to Shimla was not reached Geet.

Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi! muskan. we loved ur FF very much and actually th point is that we can't see any misundrstdng btw manneet and any sad moments btwn thm so never mind but plz don't mke maan to go anywhr.and whtever u do in the FF is really good and and we always loved it. so,mke a sweet smile on ur face and soon update a lovely update ok. love u.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Seriously!!!Muski whats going on ....y Maaan nd Geet nt 2gther
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan we were never upset with u
plz end these sad parts we always want maan and geet to unite
anyways i know u too dont like these sad parts
but wer is maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
those who are not getting my PM plz check ur IF inbox might be full...
she felt weak & tired & pale.the people around her gave her some
& fruits to eat.. suggested her to stay back & rest for few mins...she called maan..
but his phone was switched off...

part 128

it was nearing 12 noon
she got scared & rushed home...as she entered the house there was huge media crowd gathering
outside the khurana mansion...there was a kind of restlessness in geet..
she sneaked into the outhouse looking for maan avoiding the media..!!


the feel of the house was not the same..there was something missing ..
like the walls..the curtains..the sofa's..the plants..the floor..
carpets..every thing was crying out loud..to her..like they were complaining to
her..like all of them were upset...disturbed..like some thing..happened..
liked something has ran overthem..like somebody really hurt them behind her..
she just touched every thing..slowly..the feel was very alarming..like her feel
did'nt sooth them any more..it was giving a feel that her touch could'nt undo the damage...
she walked into her room..their room..it was a sad plight..her things on the dressing
table were scattered around..that did'nt seem normal..
maan could'nt get so angry at her..or was he!!

her bed..it looked all sabotaged..there was blood stains...
she did'nt touch anything....it did'nt feel hers..it did'nt feel right
it was all so cold...num...she could hear them screaming in pain to her
somthing she was not able to understand...there were so many questions..running in her mind
wat happened...who did wat to her house..why are they all crying..
every thing..every little thing seemed to be hurt...
babaji please saab teehk karna...kya huwa yanha...meri galthi ki itni baadhi sajha mat do
unhe kuch nahi hona chahiya...she feared ..she feared wat maan could do to himself
when he is angry..she ran to the gym..did'nt look like..
he is been there since the last time she saw him there...
she was not able to make out wat was happening..to her aashiyana..jaise
kisi ke nazar he laag gayee ho..

she looked for her servants...no one was around...
she checked the kitchen...evethig was in the same place as she left but
every thing seem to cry out loud...in pain in distress...
she looked around for maan..she called him again & again...his phone was swtiched off again
she knew maan never keeps his phone switched off for so long..

daadi tried calling geet...she answered in one ring..
geet - daadi maan kanha hain..
daadi - woo...
geet - boliya na...main unka phone bhi try kar rahi hoon...nahi laagh raha hain
daadi - tum kanha hoo?
geet - ji main outhouse main
daadi - tum udhar hi raho...bhara mat aana..I will come there
geet - lekin daadi woh kanha hain?
daadi cuts the call...

geet gets really tensed..& walks around the hall cluctching her duppatta..
daadi & NT comes in & closes the door...immediatley..
geet - daadi ..baathayee na maan kanha hain..
mera ghar ka yeh halath kisne kiya hain..
mera dil dooba ja raha hain...
daadi saw geet looking really weak & pale..told her to sit down & relax
daadi tells NT to get something for her to drink
NT got her some juice...geet pushed at away...maan kanha hain?
daadi takes the juice & says..ise peeloo...u will feel better
she halfheartedly had few sips...
daadi - tum mujhe pehle yeh baathvoo...where did u guys go from uncle's place on friday night
did u guys have a fight over any thing..
bhadhur said he droped u to the airport...
geet got scared & sat down..nahi ..aise to kuch naaahi..tha..
her heart was sinking..she feared some thing was drastically wrong..
media people now started coming towards the out house..
she quickly swtiched on the TV & saw...
she changed the channels..to the live news channel..she could'nt believe
wat she read..& then flashed...then a whole part on it..
she looked at daadi..
geet - lekin??
daadi hugged her & tried to console her....she was in shock & did'nt know
how to react...tears rolled down her eyes...but she did not quiver..
daadi - NT..take her to the room...before media..ponces on her with questions..
NT takes her to the room & closes the room....

precap
still wondering where is maan????

thanxs for all the love & support.😳..I am really greatfull to u guys..for motivating me..
trust me I am upset too😭😭😭 seeing maaneet like this...thats why updating so early so that ...u guys don't have to wait that long...bare with me...the twist is spread over next 2 parts....please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan nice update yaar
but where is our maan/
plzzzzzzzzzz un dhono ko ek kardo
plz end this sad part
update the next part asap
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muski!
y u upset??!!!
v never disliked ur FF....v juz LUV it!!
n todayz update....yipee geet goin bak
n plz dun tell me tat maan is gone to shimla?? :P
hope not....newayz do update soon

luv
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates
loved them
wonder where maan has gone
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
ncie part but were is our hero
wat is happening wat they flashed in the TV
oh no i feel something really bad has happended.
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Posted: 14 years ago
cant take it anymore, what happend, where is Maan and whats with the media, please please update karo, cant wait😊

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