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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Awesome!!!!! Mindblowing!!!!!! Superb!!!!!👏👏
There is MAGIC in ur hands.......U r just brilliant in writing.....⭐️⭐️
Plz add me in ur pm list.....coz I m "PANKHA" of ur ff/os.....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Really nice Mehak........... please do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
I'm reading it like for the 50th time Mehak! You really have to continue with part 6 and SO ON!! I get the same satisfaction from watching an actual episode of MJHT as I do while reading your FFs!! PLZ PLZ continue with the 6th part, you truly have the magic within you to capture MaYur's feelings with such unmatchable talent!! PLZ PLZ continue!! and send your stories to the creatives! I hope they look into selecting some ideas from you!
~Puja~
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
wow amazing oNeshot plz do contibue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
ur update r outstanding dear..u r truly a GOD gifted writer..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
thank u guys...🤗, Gosh u all make me feel on the top of this world...muah...and plz i really want to reply u all individually but cannot reply to all ur meseges sepeately bcz it will turn into spamming..but i do read them ALL!...😆

PART 6:

Nupur was scared at the red eyes of mayank, she stood up..

N..kia hua?

Her trembling voice made him forget all his anger and pain, he looked at her and she was standing so weak, with a fear in her eyes...

M..kuch nahi..betho..

He made her sit and held her hand..

M..kaho ..kia keh rahi thi..

Nupur could see a strange emotion in mayank's eyes, which he tried to hide but he was unable, Nupur felt that her whole world was shaking in front of her,

she freed her hand from mayank's...

N..nahi, kuch nahi..khana thanda ho jaye ga..

M..nahi nupur tum..

N..nahi mayank khana khate hain.

She begen eating , and mayank somewhat couldnt force her whole heartedly to continue ..

HE HIMSELF WANTED TO AVOID!...but THAT IS NOT DONE!...

They finished the rest of the dinner in silence..both of them were now ready to sleep but none of them felt like sleeping...

Both of them had turned their faces oppioste from each other and were thinking about their own feelings...thier minds talking to their heart..

M..ye kia ho gaya hai mujhe...kia kar rah tha main..itna selfish hon main, nupur ka dard batne k bajaye main khud ko bachane main lag gay..OH GOD!..main ne kabhi nahi socha tha k main aisey react karon ga...ye sab bht mushkil hia...lekin mujhe ye sab bholna pare ga....mujhe sun k itni takleef ho rahi hai tu usey seh kar kitni hoyi hogi....merey ghusy se kitna dar gayi thi...nahi..this was the last time...aj k baad kabhi aisy nahi karon ga..never.....sab kuch shoro se shoro karna pare ga

He made final resoulation

Nupur in the other hand was fighting with herself..

N..mujhe pata tha yehi hoga...mayank nahi seh paye ga ye sab...kitna ghusa tha us ki ankhon main...main ghalat thi...kuch bhi normal nahi ho sakta..kuch b nahi...main teen saal ik ajnabi k sath reh kar ayi hon, koi ye bardasht nahi kare ga...

Tears flowed from her eyes..


N...lekin agr maynk ne mujhe chor diya tu...??

Something broke inside her...

N..nahi..us ne wada kiya hai..us ne merei muskurahat ki kasam khayi hia..

She felt some assurance...

N..lekin aj jo hua...

tears again started flowing...

N..main maynk ko kabhi kuch nahi bataon gi...mujh main usey khoney ki himmat nahi hai...

Mayank on the otehr hand had decide to re-start his relation.

M..hamara rishta dosti se shoro hua tha..aur aj nupur ko pati se ziyada dost ki zarorat hai..jis se wo kuch bhi keh sake,,

Mayank and Nupur both slept with oppisite decisions..

one with re starting his relation and the other with running away from it!

Do comment..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
wowww...mehak i lund this update...
so heart touching....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Really niceeee...I lked Mayank's decision better though! <3 :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
FINALLY! OMG THis was soo moving Mehak! I swear you have something within every WORD that makes me LONG to read the restttt!! THis was absolutely heart-wrenching; you captured their emotions with such elegance! LOVED IT DEAR! PLZ I wanna read part 7 soon!! :) MUWAAA!! Love you for these wonderful FFs :) You are a star!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heart touching update dear...loved it..........................

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