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ardhana

@ardhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

wow di tis is just u have explained the feelings so beautifully

do continue soon

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

PART 5:

it was morning, dim sunlight was peeking in the room through the white chiffon curtains.

.Nupur opened her eyes.., she turned her face and mayank was still sleeping...his arm was on nupur's waist...for a spilt second his touch had made her pulse go high but the very next minute she was scared...she really didnt knew whether she wanted to be close to him or stay away from him, still each and every touch reminded her of dhruv's rough hands and his wild eyes...she was afraif of any touch again...she gently removed maynk's arm and sat upright,

Sunlight was now falling on mayank...she could feel that he was disturbed...she sat exactly in front of his face so that she could block the sun shine and her sahdow feel on mayank's face..

She again saw the calm expression on his face...this was the expression she could die for...but then why wasnt she able to be normal with mayank...she loved him, there was no doubt...three years she longed for him, but now being close to him she still feels scared!...WHY?...WHY?..WHY?...

tears again started filling her eyes..she moved a bit froward and gently brushed her finger tips on mayank's cheeks when suddenly she sensed that mayank was about to wake up...she immedietely turned her face away and wiped off all the tears...and stood up from the bed..

M..good morning..

N...morining...

M..kab se uthi ho?

N..thori dair pehle...

M..*smiles*..ok..

Myank went to get ready fro his clg and nupur went down stairs to kitchen...she made the break fast and mayank came down , they both had break fast..maynk was again talking and nupur was again silent...but maynk never gave up...

Nupur was alone in the home , again she was just admiring everything..today she wa sseeing all the old pictures....

it was lunch time, she went to the kitchen,there were a lot of options but didnt feel like eating anything so she thought to skip lunch

at the same time the door bell rang..she went to open the door..it was a delivery boy..

DB...Mrs. Nupur Sharma?

It felt so strange to hear her OWN name from a stranger...something setteld inside her..

N..ji..kahiye...

DB..ye ap ka order...sarso ka saag...

N..ji?..lekin main ne tu kuch order nahi kiya..

DM..ma'am ye ap hi k naam se booked tha or bill bhi payed hai..plz ap jaldi le lijiye mujhe agaey bhi jana hai..

The boy alsmost forced her to recieve the packect, she came inside when the phn rang...

N..hello..

M..haan..nupur khana mil gaya?..

N..tum ne bhijwaya hai?..

M..haan ., wo mujhe pata tha k tumhe kitchne main kuch bhi psnd nahi aye ga, is liye mian ne lunch bhijawa diya...sach batao tum lunch skip karne wali thi na?

N..ummm..nahi ..main..

M..waise main khud bhi ana chata tha per meri meeting thi tu filhall tum lunch enjoy karo, sham ko milte hian...bye..

N..bye...

Nupu was so over whelemed...she was blushing, she was feeling that old feeling all over again, when she used to blush for mayank, his simple sweet things..his own way to spread his charm....

Now she was actually waiting for maynk to return.,...and finally he came home...she rushed to the door...

N..hii...

Mayank was surpried to see that sparkle in her eyes...he looked straight in her eyes..

M....kia baat hai...bht khush ho?..

Nupur got confused..and maynk sensed thati she was not in the state to answer wit..

M..mera mtlb hai k lagta hai saag bht psnd aya hai...acha tha na?

N..haan..

Mayank changed and came on the dining table, he saw that the dinner was SAAG!!

M..ye kia?..tum ne lunch nai kiya?

N..nahi kiya tha...per ye nahi khaya?

M..ku..acha nai tha...

N..nahi wo..bht acha tha..is liye nahi khaya...

M..nupur kia bol rahi ho?..

Nupur was blushing but she said.

N..wo main chati thi k hum sath ye khaye is liye...

Mayank was so happy on her blush, although she was not looking at him but still he could feel her blush...

M..hmmm...wah...biwi ho tu tumhare jaisi..

He moved a bit close and nupur tightly held the chair...

M..ye nai khaya tu dophar ko kia khaya tha?..

N..wo aloo ki sabzi...thori si banayi aur kha li...

Mayank started laughing..

M..thori si banane ka kia mtlb hai?...

N..wo main thora hi khana banati hon,

M..ku?

N... jab bhi main kuch ziada banati thi tu dhruv,...

Mayank immedeitely rose his head....nupur's lips were sealed again

M..haan bolo...

nupur 's eyes were filled with tears again...this time she decided to speak...

N..zaida banati thi tu usey lagta tha k main ne ksi aur ko bi bulaya hai..tu w phir mujhe ...wo...

Maynk stood up...IT WAS NOT THAT SIMPLE!..he thought that listening nupur's pain was easy, he wanted to share her pain, but now when nupur had spoke up, it was DIFFICULT FOR HIM ALSO!...nupur's suffering story, made him boil in anger...she had just uttered a sentence of her past and mayank couldnt listen...what about her whole suffering..it was difFicult..listening how his wife was treated brutally for three years,and that too a stranger mistreated her...he never thought he would feel like this....HE WAS A HUMAN AFTERALL!...DAMN IT!...

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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.SublimeSaRun.

@.SublimeSaRun.

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

WOW I swear all your FFs are just amazing! I love all of the parts! PLZ PLZ PLZ continue soon! And I so hope the CVs end up using some if not all of your ideas! :) PLZ continue though!!

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

OMG Mehak !1 Its Awesome !! Loved asll the Parts !! Plz Continue

-Natasha

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Komal

@DoNotMind

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G..........❤️

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ardhana

@ardhana

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

wow di

it was just mindblowing

ya wat to do mayank is human after all

but hope he has the courage to know all the thngs that nupur underwent through coz tats very important for him

loved ur os do continue soon

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

this is a beautiful topic ...............😊
so we finally have a fantastic mjht fan & a ⭐️writer b/w us giving us all beautiful threads which can be actually felt......................
really liked these mayur moments waiting for the updated threads, which can give us some more wonderful gang moments too to be felt....................
mehak this is for u ...................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏