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Posted: 14 years ago
Vrusha, that was beyond sad! She lost her baby! Hell!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bDgT

Vrusha, that was beyond sad! She lost her baby! Hell!



Yeah Bri...i donno...but..i felt that was the way it would be..she has to deal with lot of pain this girl...and losing the baby is just one of them...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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yeah..a sad one..but she still has so many battles to win..she lost this one...didnt she...

will she have strength to fight further..? i donno..what will her tower of strength do? help her?

lets see..

Dev and Geet confrontation time...

true for someone soo young geet has gone through soo much and still has more to come
there's soo many questions going on in my head, i'm waiting to see what geet, maan and dev do next
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Posted: 14 years ago
sad part dear geet lost the baby
good maan was with her
and uncle and pinky are nice
maan will kill dev thats for sure
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago

My God , you write sooo well ya..... especially the hot scenes are absolutely superb.... I was could clearly imagine Geet and maan before my eyes while reading ... well, as clear as the headiness wud allow me to see , that is !

Due to my own constraints i am not able to read many FF's , but whatever I have read , I just have to say - hats off to you , you are amazing !!......thanks a ton for giving us such wonderful stuff to read and imagine !
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks so much VJ...
feels good to hear such kind words...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gud Job!
Really admire your writing skills!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
That's very sad Vru. I always wanted Geet's baby to survive despite all odds (even in the show). Now she has lost the baby and is planning to go away from Maan too. Hope Maan pieces the puzzle and saves their relationship.
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was really a sad one ... she lost her baby 😭 it is a void that would be difficult to fill ....very beautifully penned down by you 👍🏼 and Geet Dev confrontation is on the way .... can't wait for the update Vru.... it is going to be very emotional and painful time for Maaneet... I just hope that they are together and not separated.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Facing the demons that gnawed…

Geet had no recall of what she had muttered in her drug induced state. She had only remembered a hand caressing her, giving the strength to fight, fight the light that seemed to draw her in its brightness, asking her to let go, let go this world that had given her pain, only pain. But it was that hand that held her back, that made her want to not let go, that beyond that pain, there was hope, hope of a new beginning, hope of love, pure and simple. She had fought and won, won the battle of darkness that lay in the bright light, of emptiness that would be forever. She was filled with renewed hope, renewed energy to live for Him, for he had not just saved her from a sure death but from despair, loneliness and a life that would have been a long journey with no respite of struggle and obstacles that were insurmountable.

She had held on to that hand, not letting go and she had felt the first rays of sun shine despite her closed eyes and she pried them open, to see one face that meant the most in this world, to see Maan.

She saw a hazy silhouette of person standing; the hand she had been holding in her dreams was not there right now. She reached out her hand, to Maan, only to let it fall when recognition dawned.

It was Dev. Dev, what was he doing here? She blinked hard, curled up in revulsion, she turned her face the other way to not see his face. She prayed let it be a nightmare closing her eyes to vanish, to disapper without a trace. She slowly opened again, to find Maan in front of her, she smiled wanly letting him know with her eyes that she sought him. He took a step forward, but his eyes had wandered beyond her, she turned again to the where he was looking to come face to face with her nightmare.

Dev, she whispered and he came close. She put a hand to stop him, to away from here. maan came and sat on the bed, leaning in to ask, "You know Dev, Geet?", she nodded her affirmation, her voice lost in her rage. "What are you doing here?" She asked with effort, her voice cracking with emotion. "Go away Dev, Go away, never to return."

Maan intervened, "he is my brother Geet." Those words were like a dagger piercing deep into her, she closed her eyes to shut out the pain but threatened to masticate her. "he told me everything Geet," he put his hand on her as he said this. She curled her hand under his, twisting the sheet. He pressed harder to alleviate her pain, knowing full well that she still had a bigger jolt to deal with.

"I believe I am your culprit Geet, it was because I had thrown him out of the house for his gambling spree that he was desperate enough to scheme that despicable act that not just took your money and innocence but also had given her humiliation and near death."

"No, cried Geet, I don't want to hear anymore. Go away the pair of you. Just go. I don't want to see any of you." She tried to get up but Maan came swiftly to hold her down advising her to lie still as she was too weak to handle any strain. She tried to shake him away, telling him to not touch her. She felt revulsion knowing Dev and Maan were brothers. She felt we was the worst kind of fool to have been duped by one and to have the misfortune of falling in love with the other.

She told both of them to Get out and never show their face to her again. She and her baby were going to make it without the Khuranas ruining her life any further.

Just as she finished her ranting, exhausted, she lay back on the pillow, Maan gave her another jolt.

"Geet, my love, don't do this, I am afraid I have bad news for you. You lost the baby." He said, closing his eyes, clenching his fists on his side as he felt helpless standing a foot from the bed but there seemed a gulf between them, that made him helpless to help the woman he loved in her need to be cradled, comforted and loved for her loss, for their loss.

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