New FF - pt 9 pg11 - 21st Sept

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys, I've been watching this show since the beginning but stopped when the cvs started dreagging the rona dhona track. An idea popped up in my mind after watching yesterday's episode and reading all your comments. So I'm going to write a FF and hope you will all like it.. The story starts where Koki stopped Gopi yesterday.. Am at work right now so I'll post the 1st update when I get home tonight..

Oh I'm fiza by the way😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Fiza... am eagerly waiting your 1st update... continue soon,...
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thnx fiza 4 the ff. We are w8ing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow another FF.. Eagerly Waiting for it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys, sorry to make you all wait. I totally loved today's episode so I'll start my FF from where Gopi requests Koki if she can say something.

Chapter 1

Gopi folded her hands in front of Koki and asked her if she can say something. Koki softens a little bit and tells Gopi not to hesitate and say anything she wants.

Gopi with folded hands says "Maji, aap mujhe iss ghar mein Ahemji ki khushi ke liye layi thi. Lekin woh mere saath khush nahi hain. Mere saath reh kar na woh theek se kha pate hain aur na hi chain se soh pate hain. Main chahe kitna bhi koshish kar loun woh mere saath kabhi khush nahi reh payenge kyunki woh kissi aur se pyar karte hain aur sirf wohi unhein khush rakh sakti hain. Aur issi liye main iss ghar main reh kar Ahamji ki dukh ka karan nahi bana chahti. Mein iss ghar ko aur Ahamji ko hamesha ke liye chor kar jarahi houn."😭

Koki is shocked to hear Gopi say all this as she thought she had managed to stop her.

Koki says in a strict voice " tum janti bhi ho tum kya kar rahi ho Gopi bahu? Kehna to dur ki baat hai, tum nai soch bhi kaise lia ke main tumhein iss ghar se jane doungi?"

Gopi starts to sob harder "App ko Ahamji ki kasam hai maji, iss baar aap mujhe nahi rokengi."

Koki is stunned as she knows she won't be able to stop Gopi from going this time. No matter how strict she may be with Gopi but the truth is that she really loves her or else she would never have married her Aham to Gopi. Koki's eyes fill up at the thought of Gopi leaving the house and not being able to stop her.

Gopi holds Koki's hands and says "Jane se pehle ek aur baat kehna chahti houn. Aaj tak mujhse joh bhi galtiyan hui hain woh sab main ne jaan buj ke kia hai taake aap mujhe ghar se nikal dein. Mujhe pata hai meri wajah se aap ko bohot takleef hui hai lekin ho sake toh mujhe maaf kardena aur Aham ji shaadi Anita sa kardena. Ahamji sirf Anita ke saath khush reh sakte hain aur mujhe pata hai ke Ahamji ki khushi main hi aap ki khushi hain. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kardijiyega."

Gopi takes Koki's blessings and leaves Modi Mansion after meeting Baa and Hetal for the last time. After leaving MM Gopi is walking on the road with her bag and thinking about her wedding and everything that happened after that. She keeps thinking about each time Aham accused her of something or the other and she does not pay attention to where she is going and is hit by a speeding truck.

Rahul Singhania who is on his way to a meeting with Aham Modi sees a group of people gathered in the middle of the road and stops his car to see what happened. He walks to them and sees a young girl is injured and bleeding badly but everyone is just gathered and looking at her instead of helping the poor girl. He gets very angry at those people and takes Gopi to the hospital and gets her treated.

Gopi regains conciousness and gets a bit scared when she finds herself in a strange room. She tries to sit up but is in pain and a hand stops her from moving. She looks up and finds a really nice looking man in a business suit smiling down at her.

Rahul "Arre app uthiye mat. Aap ko bohot chot lagi hain aur doctor nai aap ko aram karne ko kaha hai. Aap ka accident ho gaya tha aur main aap ko yahan le aya. Waise mera naam Rahul hai aur aap ka naam kya hai?"

Gopi "Ji mera naam Gopi hai. Aap ka bohot shukriya meri madat karne ke liye. Mujhe maaf kardijiye meri wajah se aap ko apna kaam chor kar yahan rukna para. Lekin ab main theek houn, aap apne kaam par ja sakte hain."

Rahul "Main aap ko iss halat main akele chor kar kaise jasakta houn? Aap sabse pehle mujhe apne pati ka number dijiye, main unhein phone karke yahan bula leta houn."

Gopi starts crying and says " nahi Rahulji aap unhein mat bulayier, woh nahi aayenge"

Rahul asks Gopi what happened and she ends up telling him everything about herself.


hope you guys like it😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superrbbbbb dear...
keep it up...
loved it and entry of Rahul seems to make aham jealous isn't it.....

thanx a lottttttttt
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 1 was good...a good start indeed...making ahem jealous of rahul n gopi is gud idea..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 1 is soo nice.....please update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi fiza, im Hafsa!!! 🤗

I have read ur FF n its Magnificently Marvelous!!!

What a start, I love the way you made everything sound so real as if i were watching an epi of SNS, You described everything so well!!!
I Liked your idea of introdusing another male character in the story, its a very good twist, i wish the writers read ut FF n follow ur story, then the Show will be at its best!!!
Keep it up n plzz update soon, i will be very eagly waithing for the next part!!! 😉
Hafsa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow its brilliant ..... Very well written.. Pls continue.. BTW who s rahul sorry i dont know

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