New FF - pt 9 pg11 - 21st Sept - Page 2

That was a lovely start Fiza... continue soon...

superb yaar fiza .
kaaash yeh sab serial mein ho jata.
gopi speaking to koki.
plzzzz yaar continue soon.
atleast for reading this i wud come 2 this forum.

Hi everyone😊 Thank you all so much for your lovely comments. Before I write the second chapter I would like to introduce Rahul Singhania. He is the owner of Singhania group of industries which is one of the biggest and most successfull companies in the work. Aham Modi has been trying really hard to catch Rahul's attention so that the latter accepts to do business with him but has not succeeded yet. Rahul's elder brother and bhabhi passed away and he lives with his mum and his nephew Rohan and niece Ria who are 5 year old twins.

Ok here's the next part.

Part 2

Koki is so affected when Gopi left that she does not even realise she has been sitting like a statue in Aham's bedroom for the whole day. This is how Aham finds his mom when he walks into his bedroom after work and gets really worried to see her in this state. He rushes to Koki and asked her what happened and why is she sitting in the dark and crying (yes people Koki is crying). Koki continues to stare in front of her and repeats each word Gopi said before leaving and when she finished telling Aham what happened she looks at him with tears in her eyes and says

Koki " tum yehi chahte the na Aham? Chali gayi woh tumhari zindagi se aur iss ghar se. Aaj se tum jo bhi karna chaho kar sakte ho, main tumhain kuch bhi nahi kahoungi. Tum apni zindagi apni marzi se jine ke liye azaad ho. Jis se shadi karni hai kar sakte ho. Aaj ke baad main tumhari zindagi main dakhal nahi doungi. Ek aur baat Aham, Gopi nai tumse kabhi koi jhoot nahi bola. Woh jewellery set uss nai nahi balki Kinjal nai order kia tha aur Gopi par jhoota ilzaam lagaya."

Saying so Koki leaves from there and Aham does not understand why he is feeling so bad. He tries to convince himself that he is feeling this way because it's the first time he has made his mum upset but in reality he was feeling very bad for misunderstanding Gopi. He remembers every single time he accused her of something or the other and how she kept crying and saying she was innocent but he never believed her. His eyes filled with tears when he thought about how cruel he had been to that innocent orphan girl. He could not believe how heartless he had become due to his anger.

Aham runs down the stairs and bumps into Jigar who was in the living room. Jigar notices tears in Aham's eyes and says

Jigar "Sambhal ke bhai. Kya hua aap ko? Aap ki tabyat to thhek hai?"

Aham " Jigar... Woh... woh... Gopi... Gopi ghar chor kar chali gayi hai. Pata nahi kahan hogi."

Jigar "Bhai aap shaant hojaier. Bhabi apne mama ke ghar gayi hogi. Main abhi phone karke puchta houn."

Jigar calls up Rashi's mom and asks her if he could speak to Gopi but she says that Gopi did not come to her place and Jigar hangs up dejected.

Jigar " Bhai woh... Bhabhi apne mama ji ke ghar nahi gayi."

Aham becomes even more worried and says "Kya? woh apne mama ji ke ghar nahi gayi to kahan gayi hogi? Woh to iss shaher main kissi aur ko janti bhi nahi hai."

Jigar " Bhai chaliyer hum Gopi bhabhi ko dhundte."

Both brothers take their cars and start looking for Gopi in the whole city. They look for her for hours but not able to find her. It's like she disappeared from the face of the earth. Aham has never felt this desperate in his life. He thought he could do everything with his education and money but now he realises how wrong he was. He is crying openly by now and is praying really hard for Gopi to be safe and sound. He is feeling really scared that something bad might have happened to her. It is now three O'clock in the morning and they have still not found Gopi. Jigar takes Aham home forcefully with him so that he can clam down and get some rest.

They see the whole family waiting for them in the living room when they get home except for Rashi and Jigar thinks that maybe she was too upset that her sister went missing that's why she was in the bedroom. Everyone start asking for Gopi as soon as they see Aham and Jigar come in and they are really shocked to see Aham so upset and worried about Gopi.

Aham walks to Koki and kneels down in front of her and keeps his head in her lap with tears running down his eyes says "Gopi kahan chali gayi mom? Agar usse kuch ho gaya to main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paoonga. Woh to iss shahar main kissi ko bhi nahi janti. Main apni patni ko wapas la kar hi rahounga chahe uss ke liye mujhe kuch bhi kyun na karna pare."

Everyone is happy to hear that Aham has finally accepted Gopi as his wife and are praying that they find her soon. Jigar goes up to his bedroom in order to console Rashi as he thinks she is crying as well but is shocked to hear her laughing on the phone when he reaches the door. Instead of walking in to the room he waits by the door and hears her talking to her mum and telling her how she managed to convince Gopi to leave the house. She also tells her mum everything both mother and daughter did to torture Gopi since she started living with them till Gopi left the house and also how they threw Sonal out of Jigar's life. Jigar is super angry hearing all this and walks into the bedroom drags Rashi to the living room and slaps her infront of everyone. The whole family is shocked and question Jigar on this action of his and he tells them everything he heard from Rashi's own mouth. They are all very angry at Rashi and Jigar says

Jigar "Aaj sirf tumhari wajah se Gopi bhabhi yeh ghar chor kar chali gayi. Hum sab se zyada tum Aham bhai ki gunahgaar ho aur issi liye tumhein saza sirf aur sirf Aham bhai hi denge. Lekin uss se pehle meri ek baat sunlo, aaj se tum meri patni aur iss ghar ki bahu nahi ho. Tumhara hum se koi rishta nahi hai."

Rashi is super shocked and starts crying fakely.

Aham who was already angry is boiling with rage now and shouts at Rashi "how dare you Rashi? Tum nai Gopi ko itni takleef di? Uss bechari nai tumhara kya bigara tha? Tumhari wajah se uss ki zindagi maut se bhi battar hogai. Nikal jao iss ghar se aur ajj ke baad humein apna chehra mat dikhana. Aur haan kal hum apne lawyer k haanthon tumhein divorce papers bhej denge aur tumhein iss ghar se ek phooti kauri bhi nahi milegi. Now get out before I call security to have you thrown out."

Rashi leaves MM crying and cursing her fate and goes to her mom's house and both mother and daughter are stunned that their plan backfired.


That's it for today guys. Hope you all liked it😊

@saina01...
superb update......loved it....
Aham crying for Gopi aat least in FF if not in show..thanx

yaar just loved it.
continue soon.

i luved it........Ahem cares for Gopi😳. it was soooooooooo swit..
i hope sumthing lyk this happens in the serial as well....anyways do continue😊

That was so good Fiza... wish Ahem turns the same as you had written in this FF...

Its moving in fast pace.. Really loved it.. Likes Rahul's intro.. Continue soon..

Could you please put in an English translation of the conversations? Or just a synopsis?

Thanks!

-Tammie

btw - enjoying the story!

Very nice going!!!