New FF - pt 9 pg11 - 21st Sept - Page 5

Originally posted by: saina01

Thanks a lot for you lovely comments or the lovely paragraph should I say?😆 Sach mein itna acha laga? I wanted to put some more romantic scenes lekin phir socha kahin overdose ki wajah readers behosh na hojaye😆 aur baad mein mujhe chappal khani pare😭 I will put more romantic scenes in the next part.. promise

yaar tum bas OVERDOSE deti raho and we will give u bigggggggggggg hugsssssss...
chapplae pade tumhare dushmano ko...and humare bhi aur wo CVs hai,,,,,jinhone itni achhe show to tragedy me change kar diya hai...
m w8ing to faint.....jaldi update karo next part....chahe to aaj hi kar do......

Wooooooooooooow.. Beeeeaaaautiful.. Suppppppppperb.. Pls add more romantic scenes as much as u can nd keep us in dream land.. Cant wait for the next part

👏 wow your story is really suppppppppper. it is better n best than the original. i think you should head the CV dept instead of those#$# there. they really spoiled the show. this one is really exciting. waiting for updates.

Originally posted by: shruthi2010

👏 wow your story is really suppppppppper. it is better n best than the original. i think you should head the CV dept instead of those#$# there. they really spoiled the show. this one is really exciting. waiting for updates.

yup thats true...its better than the original show...CVs should learn something from her FF.....
CVS plzzzzzzzz come and read...

wow very very very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update. i wish you were on the creatives team of saathiya. please continue soon

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

yup thats true...its better than the original show...CVs should learn something from her FF.....
CVS plzzzzzzzz come and read...

Thanks guys.. If only there was a way to tell the CVs what we want to watch..

Fizaaaaaaa, Wow!!! 👏
u r da best at writing!!!

I'm so sorry for late updat.. I had to make dinner when I came back from work.. I'm dead tired.. Here's the next part guys and sorry for any mistakes..

Part 5

The whole family was assembled in the living room when Ahem and Jigar reached home and they were all pleasantly surprised to see Ahem happy and smiling for the first time since Gopi left. He greets everyone and asks Kinjal to follow him as he needs to speak to her. Kinjal is stunned as this is the first time Ahem has acknowleged her in five years. She stands up and follows Ahem quickly to his room.

Ahem: Mein bohot bura houn na Kinjal? Na mein ek acha pati ban saka or na hi ek acha bhai. I punished you all these years without even asking you why you created misunderstandings between me and Gopi.

Kinjal with tears in her eyes: Nahi bhai. You were right to punish me. I don't deserve to be forgiven after the way I treated Gopi bhabhi.

Ahem wipes Kinjal's tears and tells her that he has forgiven her and they both go back to the living room after taking for some more time.

Jigar: Hogai aap dono ki batein? Ahem bhai, please give everyone the good news quickly. I can't keep it in any longer.

Koki: Good news? Tum dono ko contract milgaya yahi na?

Ahem gives everyone a million dollar smile and says: Contract to humein hi mili hai mom but that's not the good news.

Sonal: To phir? Jaldi batiye na Ahem bhai.

Ahem: Humein Gopi milgayi hai!

As soon as he says this everyone gets excited and start bombarding him with questions.

Koki who's eyes are filled with tears asks in a choked voice: Kya? Tumhein Gopi bahu mili?

Hetal: Kaisi hai woh?

Baa: Tum usse ghar kyun nahi laaye?

Ahem smiles even more and says: Haan mom aap ki Gopi bahu milgayi hai aur woh bilkul theek hai.

Koki: Lekin tum usse ghar kyun nahi laaye?

Ahem sits next to Koki and tells the whole family where Gopi was and what she has been doing all these years. They all have tears in their eyes by the time Ahem is done telling them everything Rahul told him earlier.

Ahem: Aur mom when I told Gopi to come home with me she said she will only come back when the whole family accepts her back specially you mom. She said she won't come back if the whole family is not ready to accept her. Aur haan, mujhe uss ke Rahul bhai se uss ka haath bhi mangna hoga.

Koki who is really proud her Gopi bahu says: Dekha Hetal behen? Yeh hai meri Gopi bahu. She could have come back by herself if she wanted to but she still respects her elders despite being fully educated. Ahem dikra main apni Gopi bahu ka haath mangne jaoungi and I'll get both of you married again as soon as possible.

Ahem who is very happy hugs his mom and lets his tears flow from his eyes: I love you mom. Thank you so much.

They all get ready and go to Kinjal's future in laws for dinner. Once they get there both Ahem and Jigar are surprised to see Rahul welcoming them at the door.

Ahem: Rahul tum yahan?

Rahul: It's such a small world isn't it? I never realised all of us were leaving early for the same reason.

Everyone is seated in the living room and are talking and Rahul notices Ahem looking around and not paying attention to the conversation. He signals Jigar and they both have a knowing look on their face.

Jigar: Kya baat hai Ahem bhai? Are you looking for something?

Ahem who is really flustered at being caught says: Nahi.. Mein.. woh.. bas... ummm.. haan washroom.. I was looking for the washroom.

Rahul: Acha? Washroom?

Rahul gives Ahem directions to Gopi's room with a cheeky smile on his face and Ahem rushes out of there before they pull his leg even more.

He enters Gopi's room and locks the door behind him. Gopi who had just come out of the bathroom after wearing her sari was shocked to see Ahem but then she thought that she was imagining him again.

Gopi walks upto Ahem and says: Aap phir se agaye? Kab se mujhe pareshan kar rahe hain? I see you everywhere I look. It would have been better if I had gone with you instead of putting that condition of mine.

Ahem smiles at her as he finally understands that Gopi is thinking she is imagining him.

He pulls her into his arms and snakes his arm around her waist and runs his free hand on her bare back as all her doris were still open.

Gopi gasped and blushes hard as she now knows she is not dreaming: Ahemji.. Aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Koi ajaye ga..

Ahem starts dropping light kisses from her forehead to her neck and tells her that no one will come as he has locked the door. He then starts to kiss her deeply on the neck while running his hands on her back...


I have to go now guys.. will continue later..

thats nt good puri useless story k baad kaam ka scene aaya to u ran away. Nt good
plz continue soon. M dying k.

Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

thats nt good puri useless story k baad kaam ka scene aaya to u ran away. Nt good
plz continue soon. M dying k.

i completely agree with u.....just when the main part is about to come, u ran away...not fair😔
btw update soon...this part was awesum especially the ending which u dint finis😆😆