New FF - pt 9 pg11 - 21st Sept - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
thanx fiza for the update..
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Part 9

Once Gopi was seated in Aham's car she turned towards him and said: I understand why you asked Rahul and Kinjal to go in separate car lekin Jigar, Sonal and Jia could have come with us na?

Aham held Gopi's hand and looked into her eyes and said softly: I wanted to spend alone time with you jaan issi liye sab ko bhaga diya..

Gopi blushed and pulled her hand back and put her seat belt on: Ab chalein? nahi to they have to wait for us for a long time..


Aham winked and Gopi and said: Your wish is my command jaan..

Saying so he started driving while Gopi was looking out the window and stealing glances at aham from time to time. They reached the ice cream parlour after sometime and went in with everyone else and took their seats and the guys made sure they all sat next to their partners.

Aham held Gopi's hand as soon as they sat down and Gopi smiled lovingly at him.

Aham: Rahul.. Why don't you and Kinjal sit on a separate table? You get the chance to know each other better then..

Jigar smiled mischievously at Rahul and said: Aur waise bhi, both of you will feel too shy to speak in front of us..

Sonal: Aap bhi na jigar.. Why are you teasing them? They are already feeling awkward as it is..

Gopi smiled and said: Jane do na sonal.. Yehi to waqt hai in dono ki taang kheechne ki..

Rahul who had already turned red said: Gopi tum bhi?

Gopi: Haan mein bhi.. Lekin jokes aside bhai.. I really think you should spend some alone time with Kinjal and try to get to know each other..

Rahul and Kinjal moved to a second table and the waiter came to take their order after sometime. He started to stare at Gopi continuously the moment his eyes fell on her and she was getting uncomfortable because of this. Aham got really angry when he saw this. He wrapped his left arm possessively around Gopi and pulled her against his chest and glared at the waiter. The waiter became red and quickly took the orders and ran off.

Aham's hold on Gopi relaxed as soon as the waiter left but gopi did not move away from him. Jigar and sonal smiled seeing both of them this way and Jigar could not stop himself from commenting.

Jigar: Wow bhai.. It's the first time I've seen you so possessive about someone..

Aham blushed and said: Jigar tu ek din bohot pitega mere haanthon..

Jigar: aap maar hi nahi paoge bhai.. Gopi bhabhi jo hain mujhe bachane ke liye..

Gopi smiled mischievously at Jigar and said: Main kyun bachaoun? You've been teasing us non stop today.. Tumhe sab se pehle mein hi maaroungi..

Jigar's face lost colour when he heard Gopi saying this and was thinking ab mujhe kaun bachaye ga?

Aham burst out laughing when he saw Jigar's expression and said: Issi liye keh raha tha to stop teasing my wife.. Ab yeh pehle wali Gopi nahi rahi who use to take everything lying down..

Jigar: Acha bhabhi sorry.. Kaan pakar ke sorry.. Mujhe aap se panga lena hi nahi hai as I need to be in your good books for you to save me from bhai..

Their ice creams had arrived and Gopi noticed that Aham had ordered only one for both of them to share. She blushed and picked up her spoon to start eating when she saw Aham holding a spoonful of ice cream in front of her mouth. She smiled shyly at him and opened her mouth so that he could feed her.

When Jia noticed aham feeding Gopi she said: Chachu why are you feeding chachi?

Aham smiled at Jia and said: Beta yeh aap ki chachi nahi, aap ki bari ma hai..

Jia: Bari ma?

Gopi smiled lovingly at her and said: Haan bari ma.. Aap hamari bhi to beti ho.. That's why you will call us bare papa and bari ma from now on.. Bulaogi na?

Jia went in Gopi's arms and gave her a huge hug: Aap bohot achi ho bari ma..

Jigar's and Sonal's eyes filled with tears when they saw how much aham and gopi loved their daughter.

Aham started feeding both gopi and Jia while Gopi was feeding Aham the ice cream. When Aham saw Jia in Gopi's lap he could not help but imagine how Gopi would look with their baby in her arms. His eyes filled with tears of happiness when he thought about it and gopi who noticed this held his hand and asked him if he was ok.. Aham kissed gopi on her forehead and said he has never been better and he is very happy today.

Ok guys.. That's it for today.. I was not going to update this FF today but I did it coz you were all upset after watching today's episode..


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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
Thanks for update today. Loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Thank you for the update, it is better to read your FF than watch the show these days.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Yeah! Seems more interesting than the repeated ups and downs boring scenes.......Keep going.Thnx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

You are going a bit too fast dear..At this pace the story will end too soon.Anyway i like your version of the story.Keep it on..Thnx..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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love ur fic..read it in one go
hope u plan to update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
thank you so much guys.. Your comments really motivate me to write more often.. I will try to update this one soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hey fiza

just loye ur ff's yaar
plz continue soon
and pm me when u update

love
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
hello fiza, i hv been in this forum nw for quite sometym.....i am known as da african.... so pls in future culd u write ur FF's in english cos i do nt understand the dialogues....thanx alot..BTW loved it.

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