YaRav OS- 1:Trip To Oman !! Part2 updated. Pg2

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Disclaimer : This post is purely a work of fiction... I don't intend to hurt the feelings of the actors concerned or anyone else... in and out of the forum....

Well, I'd watched Gaurav's trip to Oman yesterday night, so had this thought to write this OS... and did the same this afternoon... Plz bare with me as its my first and not at all good at all this !!!😳 still Hina and Fati being my inspirations !!😆
Acc. to Fati's OS, they've already confessed to each other... but in this one... assume, that they haven't...
Enjoy !😊

OS: Trip to Oman

Gaurav has just signed the agreement with SBS star news to go to Oman... and he tells about it to Yami to know her reaction... both sitting on the chairs between shots...

Gaurav: Yami, SBS star News, has offered me a trip to Oman, You think, I should go??

Yami: How many days is the trip for ???

Gaurav: 3-4 din ka trip hai..
Yami begins to think, that he wont be around for 4 days... but says the opposite..

Yami: Hmmm... Acchi opportunity hai... so, what have you decided??? You'll go ???
(Back of her mind, he wanted him to say No !!! )

Gaurav : Main toh soch raha hoon, ke I should go... Chaar Din Shanti ke saath rahunga !!😛
(He begins to Joke with Yami )

Yami : Accha toh tumhe Shanti chahiye !!!! Oman mein Milegi ?????😉
( She too begins to Joke )

Gaurav: Haan, Yahan par toh main kissi Shanti ko nahi Jaanta, Kya pata wahan koi mil jaye !!!
😆
Yami smiles at him and at the back of her mind thinks : Tum kabhi nahi sudhroge !!!

Gaurav: Tumne Kuch Kaha ???
Yami's thoughts break : Haan, Mera matlab nahi... Maine kuch nahi kaha...
Gaurav : Hmmmmm

Yami : Toh tum Pakka jaa rahe ho...
Gaurav: Haan, Main kal hi nikal raha hoon... Tumhare liye kuch layun Oman se ???😳

Yami : Hmmm.... Mere Liye..!!! Kya Layoge ???
Gaurav: Tum Batao, Tumhe Kya Chahiye ???

Yami ( In her mind looking at him ) : I only want you Happy...

Gaurav ( waving hand in front of her ): Yami, Kahan Kho Gayi ????
Yami ( Mind clicks... Holding herself back , not meeting his gaze... she says ) : Mujhe Kuch nahi Chahiye... Bas You have a Safe Journey..😳

Gaurav smiles at her and thinks in his mind : Tum khud toh kuch kahogi nahi... Mujhe khud hi kuch laana Padega...😊
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Silence Prevails.... Both decide to break it... Both say each others name at the same time...😆
Gaurav:--- Yami
Yami : --- Gaurav
Both begin to laugh !!!😆

Gaurav: Pehle tum kaho.... Ladies First !!😛
Yami : Nahi Pehle tum Kaho.... ( shys away not looking at him)

Gaurav jokes: Waise, Agar woh mujhe France ki Trip Offer karte, toh main tumhe bhi saath leke chalta !!!😆
Yami Laughs... and just when she is about to reply to him saying that She wants to come to the airport to see him off... Gaurav's Phone Rings up...

It was a call from SBS star news informing that his flight has been preponed, hence, he has to leave for the airport in next 3 hours...

Gaurav: Yami, Meri flight prepone ho gayi hai... Mujhe Agle 3 hours mein Airport pahonchna hai..

She startles at the sudden news... as she now wont be able to go to the airport to see him off... due to her shooting schedule...

She just manages to speak out in a low voice : Flight Pre-pone ho gayi ....????
Gaurav: Haan, Mujhe Nikalna Padega...Packing karni Hai...

Yami: Theek Hai...
Gaurav: Bye..

Before Yami could say anything else, Gaurav had walked his way out of the set....😳

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Okay, This was not as good as the regular OS writers write... but still.. was my first shot at an Actor's OS !!! Plz Pardon me if You didn't like it !!!😳

and Plz.. let me know if you guyz want me to write a part two... as I've thought of a Part Two :--- with Yami's Thoughts, after he leaves...😊
Edited by naina_18 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow, Naina...........you are joining the band of OS writers! Good job for a first attempt! 👏
Lekin kabhi nahin suna hai ki flight prepone hota hai.........delay ho jata hai......most of the times! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shobs... Purposely Flight prepone karna padha !!😆😆
Nothing else was fitting in !!😆

and Btw, Yaravland mein sab kuch ho sakta hai !!!😆😛
Edited by naina_18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved it Naina...there's a continuity and a flow to it...Me likes...Second part please...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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BTW, do continue with the second part...........😊
Another symptom of Abheria/Yaraveria..........hidden talents come forth....creative juices begin to flow......😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Naina .. you don't need to ask if you should continue! Anything AbHer/YaRav .. has to .. needs to be continued!! 😃
Your first attempt at OS .. was fab yaa! It was simple .. sweet .. and totally imaginable! I could picture YaRav say all those .. GK's joking around .. and Yami smiling, shying away ... just toooo cute!!! 😳
Please do continue ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Naina the best thing in your os is it is totally imaginable. So good one and plz continue:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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naina - when is the next part coming up?

it was very cute, do continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww Nainu!
this is so cute and u've done a fab job
and OMG! u wont believe this
I just came on and was gonna post my first YaRav OS and saw this
we all think crazily alike !

2nd part plz ....
no need to ask at all

luv
Hina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks guyz... spot reserved for individual thankyous...

Hina-- You too wrote an OS !! Oh.. I can't wait to read it !!
We all do think alike !!!😆

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