YaRav OS- 1:Trip To Oman !! Part2 updated. Pg2 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Disclaimer : This post is purely a work of fiction... I don't intend to hurt the feelings of the actors concerned or anyone else... in and out of the forum....

Part Two' Had some other thought in mind' but, Neelu gave an idea' so changed the track a bit'

Here it goes....

Yami's shoot gets over really late' and she's feeling really low that she couldn't meet him before he went' and realizes that the flight must have taken off by now' she still gives it a shot.. and Messages him..

" Has your flight taken off???? Shoot just got over"

She waits for his reply and meanwhile, sits in her car and starts it' Looks at her cell again' but no reply'

Yami In Her Mind : Shayad the flight has taken off' network nahi aa raha hoga' kya karun' kuch samajh nahi aa raha'

Her thoughts begin to cluster as she drives back Home'

Keeps on looking at her cell hoping for a reply'

Gives it another shot'. " Are you in the plane ?? Have a safe trip"

Still no reply'.

To distract herself, she tunes the radio' and song plays " Aaye ho meri zindagi mein Tum Bahaar Banke"..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gf6OrhL_uEs[/YOUTUBE]

Listening to the song' she immediately thinks of him and tunes the radio off to avoid the thoughts in her mind'

And She gets back home'

Surilie: Yami' You're back' aaj ka din kaisa tha ???

She does not answer back'

Surilie: Di' M talking to you' Kahan khoyi huyi ho???

Yami: Haan' Yahin toh Hoon' Tumhara din kaisa tha ???

Surilie: Accha tha' accha, freshen up' I'll get you some food' maine pehle hi kha liya tha'

Yami: Bhook nahi lag rahi'

Checks her cell again'. This time, decides to dial up his number' only to know, that its not-reachable'😳

Feeling really uncomfortable' She decides to drive to Gaurav's home, to check whether he has left or not'

Yami: Listen, I'll be back in some time' Mujhe kahin jaana hai'

Surilie: Lekin Kahan ???

Yami ignores her question and moves out of her house' and drives to his' She reaches his place' and asks the guard' if he has already left'

To Her disappointment' He had left for the airport'

She decides to enter his home' and have a look at everything'

She switches on the light' and finds the yellow light very soothing'😊

She remembered Gaurav telling her about his paintings once' She searched to see them in the house'

She looks at the paintings and finds them very unique'.

She then enters his bedroom and first thing she sees is the Mandir' She immediately smiles '. 😃goes forward to see other things in his room' Opens his cupboard and comes across some pics from the Wedding Scenes, they clicked off-screen'

She realizes that he too has kept these pics with him as a part of the happy memories'

She laughs looking at above pic' imagining the fun they had while shooting the sequence'The way, he made fun of her when she had to sit in heavy lehenga for long hours' and he sat in shorts'😆


She takes above picture in her hand and thinks that its " Picture PERFECT "😍

And smiles again !!😆

She then sees the FM radio in his room and plays it on'

The song played'. Was'.

Naa Jaane kyun'

Hota hai yeh zindagi ke saath'

achanak yeh man'

kissi ke jaane ke baad'

kare phir uski yaad' Choti choti si baat'😳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3h1Vc_ur0Dg[/YOUTUBE]

Thinks that the song is actually describing her feelings.. of remembering small nuances of their talks' their pics'😍

She then starts searching for some other things in his cupboard and comes across his personal diary'. Gets a bit hesitant, whether she should read it or not' but eventually decides to do so !!! 😳

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Okay'. Writing the whole thoughts from his diary' will take a little long'

And Plz' if you guyz can, then plz gimme some suggestions too' on what to write in the diary !!!!😊
Edited by naina_18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Good one, Naina...you did try to use his home int. stuff in the OS...Liked it... 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved :)

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aww she goes to his house
lovely :)

and the picture perfect bit PERFECT !

i did feel like I was visiting his house Nainu
nice job hun

will suggest some diary stuff soon:)

thanks for part 2 !
Edited by hinz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice... Yami's snooping in his house 😲

will wait to see what she finds out 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG Naina awesomeeeeeee we have such talented YaRav OS writers!! I LOVE it!!

OMG Yami is in his house..🤪

I can imagine what she would read in his diary.. you should add all those moments they shared.. like the holi.. and bring it into his thoughts. And maybe him talking about her smile as we know GK had spoken alot about that also.

Can't wait for moreeeeeeee :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nainaaaa...It's so beautifully written...U girlz r soo talented..keep up d good work...👍🏼

I was blushing while reading dis... 😳 ..awesome..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great job Naina...........another OS writer in our group! Loved what you wrote in the second part........👏
arre you want help in what she finds in his diary? yaraverian ho, imagine karo! details of all the sweet moments spent together! ☺️
Pls continue, waiting for the next!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing Naina..gaurd ne andar jane diya Yami ko shayad GK bol ke gaya hoga🤣🤣
she can cum 2 knw abt his liking 4 herself from d diary or plz last me "I LUV U" zarur add kar dena dairy mein if u find it suitable
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG Naina what a pleasant surprise!!! So glad to see an OS from you and might I saw it was absolutely brilliant and great idea with the whole Oman thing!!! u did a wonderful job..first part was awesome loved the teasing..so Gaurav..and the second part was great as well loved ur use of the songs!! and wow loved how she went to his house and diary huh? ohh can't wait to read i wrote a diary scene long back for one of my other FFs😳..anyway soo happy to read this..haven't had a chance to write lately...waiting for the next part..keep rocking it girl!!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Naina .. the 2nd part was wowwww! 😃 Loved how you got Yami to go to GK's house, and eventually she finds the diary!! Awesssome! 😃 Can't wait to know what all is there written in the diary! The use of songs and pics was excellent!!! I could totally imagine Yami smiling at seeing the pics there .. thinking about the times they've spent together shooting 😳 The lehnga v/s shorts thing was just sooo cute!! 😆

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