TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 46

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jani-yeh

woohoo finally a nex part...🥳...

Whoa-K so u wana make ur FF a lil more about Baji...im cool wiv that...😃...
luv luv luved the upd8 yaar...espesh the flowers n all...Dutta's convo 2 who he thgt 2 b Naku was...awww...😍...Naku wanted Napur 2 hang up the fone...😲...arre arrre arrrree...yeh tho ultaa ho raha hai...😆...
Baji itna tym waste kyun kar raha hai...bachaa le Rano ko jaldi jaldi...
aur haan Sud ko b doh chaar chaateh maar dena...😡😆...
cnt w8 4 the ne part...mwah...



Hiya Jani ....🤗
hope ur feeling well nw ...
Yh Naku did wanted her to hang down the phone ...but don worry uski line per le aaungi ...
😉😆
Baaji will defo save Rano & thrash that Suds also ..
will b updating real soon ...!

Originally posted by: Tina-Saigal2002

Oh my God Shabz wat a wonderful story.. I just loved it... I'm such a fool not to come across you FF in the first place.. But I read all the part today and found your FF very intresting.. Just like a typical masala serial which has all the ingredients like Enemity, Romance, Comedy, Exciting Flash Backs, Suspense and Emotions.. Loved it.. Absolutely loved it.. Sweety can you pls PM me your nxt update .. That is wen ever you do.. No prob.. take your time.. But pls do.. I loved your FF very much



Thanx a lot Tina 4 ur kind words .😳..ab itna bhi achcha nahi hai ...😆
I m so glad that u liked it .... thanx 4 ur appreciation ...
Will sure PM u .....ur added ...
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Will update real soon ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Awesome updates!

You aren't a louse writer I got your hint.

Hope Baaji saves Rano and soon!

Dutta - Aww so funny!

Cont soon!

Speak to you soon BTW so busy hopefully things calm down soon!



Hey Niks ur bak ....🤗
hope u enjoyed ur holidays & had a blast ...
Missed u .....
U got the hint .....to batao na..
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yh ,,Dutta is funny & cute ....
talk to ya soon ....!


Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey shabz thanx for the update yaar .... 🤗 its gettin interstin ...i hope baaji saves rano ...nupur is gettin naughty ...lol...pls make tasha meet soon....pls jaldi update karna ...take care and see u around
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Thanx Suhana ...😳
Nupur to naughty ho gi hi ...😆
taSha will meet real soon ..
will update soon ......!
😉


Originally posted by: -Destiny-

WOWWWWW

WOWWW WWOWW


I Love it
issi khushi mei aap yeh pariye


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Hey Lekha ...
thanx ..😳
Thanx 4 wowing .....& that note ..
🤣
It was hilarious ...I just saw this movie again yesterday ...
I was laughing like mad at this scene .....
Lekha ,,,u asked about my FB account ....I do hav it ..!





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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Frnddzz ..
dekha me bak so soooooon with the update ...
Hope u all like it ...& pllzz do comment ....




Part 14

Nupur & Dutta talk 4 a little while … Dutta asks her to meet her but she excuses her self as she is a little busy ,,but they would meet someday… Dutta feels a little difference in her voice ,,but then he rubs it off as he had hardly heard her speak … In the mall also he was the one doin the talking ..she had been angry at that moment but nw she was sounding so sweet .. Nupur then excused herself …Dutta asks her if he could call her again .. to which Nupur agreed … Just as Nupur kept down the phone it started ringing again … she looked at it & picked it up …

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Baaji is looking around 4 Rano .. he notices the files on the floor & also her dupatta lying a little further away ….he picks up her dupatta …his heart misses a beat ….he worriedly looks around & then calls out to Rano ..he was sure he had heard her scream .. he could feel her presence nearby … he sees the staircase & thinks of going upstairs ..

Suds almost in a whisper "ye yahan kahan se aa gaya" … he looks at Rano …tightening his hold on Rano with one hand on her mouth almost lifts her away to the other side of the room … Rano is struggling to get out of his hold …she is kicking her legs in the air but no use as Suds was too strong 4 her … Suddenly Rano dugs her teeth on his hand … Suds winces & leaves her .. Rano making use of this moment tries to run but Suds swiftly entangles his leg with hers making her fall down hard on the ground …Rano shrieks ,,blood oozes out 4rm a cut she gets on her cheeks & then she looses consciousness.. Sud gets up & drags her away towards the corner of the room … He then makes 4 the door ,,wanting to get away b4 Baaji came up … as he nears the Baaji comes in 4rnt of him ..Suds get shocked .. Baaji glances at Rano & sees the blood on her face …he looks angrily at Suds … & catches him by his collar … Suds mumbles that he didn't do anything & she was the one who called him here …. B4 he begins to bad mouth Rano ,,,Baaji punches him hard on his face …suds falls back with a force …Baaji nears him & kicks him hard on his groin … suds winces in pain ,,,,he tries to Baaji but was no match 4 him … Baaji pulls him on his feet & gives him 3-4 blows on his face …. Suds falls down again ,,,he is not moving …baaji kicks him again on his butt .. On seeing him out Baaji goes to Rano .. he holds her face & tries to bring her back … she slowly opens her eyes …

Suds open his eyes ,,,notices that Baaji was bending over Rano ..he sees a iron rod nearby ,,slowly moves his hand & picks it up …he gets up noiselessly & goes to hit Baaji …. Rano sees him & she screams ,,Baaji turns his face towards suds but its too late …suds hits him with the rod …. Baaji holds his head where he has been hit …. He sees blood on his hand .. Suds tries to hit him again but this time baaji stops the blow with his hand & snatches the rod out 4rm suds grip & strikes it back at him … Suds falls down but then on seeing Baaji advancing towards him he hurriedly makes 4 the door & runs away b4 baaji could catch him again …

Baaji throws the rod to the ground & turns towards Rano who is standing in the corner weeping .. Rano runs towards him & hugs him tight …. Baaji hands instantly goes around her …. She is trembling & crying hard against his chest … Baaji tightens his hold comforting her & pats her head … he lets her cry … he is relieved that he was there just in time … they stand there in other arms … After a while Rano gets conscious of being so close to him .. she steps back breaking the hug …Baaji feeling her awkwardness leaves her … she is still crying … he wipes out her tears with his fingers .. & consoles her that everything is all right nw & he was here …he would let nuthin happen to her … She tries to explain to him as to how he Suds had called him here in Baaji voice ….Baaji puts a finger on her lips shushing her up saying she didn't need to explain anything .. They have a short eyelock … Rano breaks the eyelock ,,,Baaji signals her to towards the door to leave …Rano moves ahead but then Baaji stops by keeping his hand on her shoulder …she looks at him ..he picks up her dupatta 4 the ground & drapes it around her .. Rano just stares at his face .. they again look at each other 4 a while & then move towards the door .…Just as Rano takes a step she winces in pain …she had gotten a sprain on her leg when Suds had made her fall down .. she grabs Baaji shoulder 4 support … Baaji looks at her leg & then picks her up in his arms … Rano tries to stop him but he carries her out to his car & makes her sit in it … making her comfortable in the seat he tries to look at her feet but she refuses …he gives her some water to drink ,,, while she is drinking he notices the wound on her cheek ….there is still blood in it…he touches the wound with his finger ,,,she flinches at his touch ..he takes out his hankie & wetting it with water tries to clean it …Rano lets him do it … he then gets up to take his seat when Rano grabs his hand ….he looks at her ,,she takes the hankie 4rm his hand & points 2wards his cut on his head ..he touches his finger on his wound … she wets another corner of the hankie & cleans his wound .. Baaji stares at her face while she is cleaning his wound … after she has done it ,,,Baaji smiles at her & Rano returns the smile .... Baaji comes around & takes his seat ... he starts the car to drop her at her home ..but on the way he stops at some clinic 4 first aid .. Delivering her safely at her home …. He gives her the day off 4 the next day & leaves ….

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Nupur picks up the phone ….Its Naku on the other end ,,,she is very angry with Nupur & asks her not to go any further with this teasing .. but Nupur rubs her off that she will now defo go on with her plan …

Nupur : tumhe kya taqleef hai … bas tu dekh kitna maza aayega ..waise bhi mujhe ab Mayank ko bhi sabak sikhana hai …..bahut akharta phirta hai …. Tere DSP ki wajah main kaise usse line pe laaati hoon …

Naku : Tu aisa kuch nahi karegi …aur who mera DSP nahi hai ..

Nupur dragging a little : achcha aaaaaaa …to phir rok kyun rahi hai ….humne pehle bhii to college mein kitne ko bewakoof banaya hai … tujhe to yaad hoga …Tune Mayank ko bhi to kitna tang kiya tha ..

Naku : wo college ki baat hai ….ab aur baat hai …

Nupur : Kyun ab kya aur baat hai …..waise hisaab barabar ….tune Mayank ko tang kiya aur maine tere wale ko tang karungi ….

Naku pleadingly : Tu aisa kuch nahi karegi Nupur ……

Nupur : Mujhe sab pata hai ,,,,dil mein to laddoo photo rahe honge …

Naku : mere dil mein koi laddoo waddoo nahi phoot rahe hain … tumhari galat fehmi hai ..

Nupur : achcha phone rakh rahi hoon …mujhe neend aa rahi hai … aur agar tujhe itni chinta ho rahi hai na to aa ke rokh le mujhe ….. with this Nupur grinningly keeps down the phone ..

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Dayz r passing by …. Nupur is still talking with Dutta as Naku .. Dutta still doesn't know that he is talking with someone else …. Nupur had somehow managed to persuade Naku also ..she had given Dutta her cell # also … Often Nupur used do a conference call ,,so this way Naku could hear all their convo … at first it was 4 fun but then often Nupur would leave so Naku could talk with him … Dutta had a doubt sometimes over the sudden change in voice ..but then he rubbished it off as his imagination … Naku though hesitant at first now was loving his convos .. she didn't say much … it was all Dutta doin the talking …they would talk of everything …Dutta would say poetry …she would laugh …Dutta had fallen in love with her laughter..& Naku also knew that slowly she was falling 4 him ..he would often ask her to meet him …but some hw she found the excuse .. Dutta was on top of the world these dayz … his face always had a smile ..

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Baaji was changing …. He just didn't understand what was happening to him … Rano had not come the next day & he had missed her terribly …. He would walk by her cabin & imagine her to b there …. & in the coming dayz also he remained disturbed …disturbed by the sudden change in his feelings …feelings 4 Rano …he had become very protective of her after that incident …. Rano was coming nw a dayz to the office & his eyes were always on a lookout 4 her … Rano could feel his looks where ever she went … sometimes their eyes would meet …he would then just look away … he just didn't know what was happening to him ….

Baaji at his home …. He is searching himself as to whats happening to him .. he is walking in the garden when he sees Rano there … he goes near her but then she vanishes ..he looks around 4 her .. & then sees her sitting by the swimming pool … he goes & sits near her ..

Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare

Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare

Idhar Nahi, Udhar Nahi

Teri Ore Chale

Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare

Idhar Nahi, Udhar Nahi

Teri Ore Chale

She is playing with the water ,,,, Baaji is staring at her ,,,she looks at him in the eye & then suddenly she laughs & throws some water on him …. Baaji ducks at the side 4rm getting wet & then looks up ..she is not there ..

Zara Der Main, Yeh Kya Ho Gaya Nazar Milte Hi, Kahan Kho Gaya

Zara Der Main, Yeh Kya Ho Gaya Nazar Milte Hi, Kahan Kho Gaya

Bheed Mein Logo Ki Woh Hain Wahan

Aur Pyaar Ki Mele Mein Akela

Kitna Hoon Mein Yahan

he looks around 4 her ….not finding her there he takes a deep sigh & lies down at the edge of pool ….he looks above at the sky ,,at the full moon …

Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare

Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare

Idhar Nahi, Udhar Nahi

Teri Ore Chale

At Patil Nivas Dutta just had a long chat with Naku ….his face was beaming with happiness .. he hugs the pillow & imagines her to b in his room … she has just come out of the shower & wiping her hair with a towel … Dutta goes & hugs her 4rm behind ,,kissing her cheeks …. They sway a little to imaginary music … Dutta getting naughty …he turns her around & tries to kiss …they come closer & then she gets out of his hold & runs ,,,Dutta tries to catch her but she is not there … Dutta smiles at his foolishness & sits down besides the window ….Its a full moon night ,,,he is looking at the moon with adoration ….

Shuru Ho Gai, Kahani Meri Mere Dil Ne Baat, Na Mani Meri

Shuru Ho Gai, Kahani Meri ..Mere Dil Ne Baat, Na Mani Meri

Had Se Bhi Aaghe Yeh Guzar Hi Gaya

Khud Bhi Pareshan Hua

Aur Mujhko Bhi Yeh Kar Gaya

Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare

Dil Kyun Yeh Mera Shor Kare

Idhar Nahi, Udhar Nahi

Teri Ore Chale ..teri ore chale ..

U see Dutta sitting by his window looking at the moon .. Naku thinking of Dutta ,,when they met in the mall & their eyelock & their fights ..she is also looking out at the moon … Rano lying on her bed thinking of Baaji …. She touches her wound where Baaji had touched it … she gets up & goes by the window & longingly at the moon … Baaji by the swimming pool ,,,he lies down on the edge of the pool & looks up to see the moon … Something had changed in all 4 of them …. Night ends & all of them in their dream world …thinking about the future & their dreams ..

The only person unhappy was Mayank …. Nupur was not sparing him this time …she left no chance to make him jealous ..

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Thanx a lot ..

Plzz do leave ur comments & suggestions ..!😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
sabz.........awesome part yaar.........baaji so caring n protective about rano.........TaSha enjoying each others company.......thats so romantic................waise achhi dhulayi hui suds ki.......enjoyed the action.........nupur n naku tere mere wale convo was so cute...........bichara mayank.......uspe itna julm mat kar.......n make TaSha meet too............update soon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it. So finally Naku started talking to Dutta
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanq so much shabz for updating!!
i just read both the parts...
the previous one very well written..loved the fact that u wrote both the parts (that of baju n dutta) simultaneously,so the suspense was always there ..i was always wondering ki ye shabz har waqt cliffhangers par kyun chodti hai😆...but as i ket reading it..i loved the parts!!😃

im also loving nupur's character..her one linerd are just fab!so she is giving a comical touch to the story..with great dialogs!!..

well shabz this part was equally excellent!!..i have no wod to express😆..BaNo part was awesome!! 👏 ..cant blv tht sudarshan can stoop to this level!! 😡 ..baji to acha khasa mushtanda nikla!!😆..the previous tym it was rano who had helped baji (at the beach)..nd this tym baji was quite caring!!😆..

the strory is developin beautifully shabz!!!..u are a fabulous writer!!..bechara dutta to to sachi mein gadha bana diya!!😆..rano aur nakku tho use ungli par nacharahe hain😉..bechara dutta!!..so i hope AS is observing the change in dutta...

i heartily enjoyed both the parts!!..amazing work!! love u shabz!! 🤗 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shabz Yeah I had a great holiday, I should be less busy now! 😆

As for your hint, I assumed Kala caused some huge misunderstanding in Baaji's mind against Dutta, causing issues but by the time Baaji realised it was too late, so he keeping up the hatered. 😆 I can be wrong but oh well.

As for this update, aww they are all falling in love, so sweet!

Cont soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Shabz such a wonderful Update.. I just loved it.. All 4 of them falling in love and imagining their partners in full moon night I just love tis romantic theme.. Why is Nupur punishing poor Mayank.. I feel so sorry for him.. Gr8 update Shabz.. I nvr expected that you wud update so soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part shabz...read the last two updates very well written update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Kya baat hai.. Baaji...the hero...... maza aa gaya....... luvd how he dhulaofied Suds..... n so happy he is fine..!! Well finally Baji-Rano love ishtory is starting...😛

n umm... eh lo.. Nups is doing shaitani.... arre bechara Dutta.. wuld b heartbroken to knw..that its not his Naku he is chatting to....!!
Eagerly looking fwd to the next update Shabz...
Lovely epi...njoyed it ...❤️

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