Diaries of an Admirer Entry#2: A tribute to Heer

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello pholks! how are you all doing? šŸ¤— for all those who dont know me... i am Hiba (which is pretty evidentšŸ¤”) and quite a Premeer fanatic like some not so very nice people started calling me at the Premeer/Harshiti FC *glares meaningfully* and for those who know me.. yes guys its another one of my ramblings šŸ˜†šŸ˜† Its been... i guess several months since i last made a topic here šŸ¤“ quite a long time no? well i am back and hopefully to stay šŸ˜† After KDM finished like you all i also started watching the drama again to see what i had missed as i joined the show a little late and never got around to watching everything from the start and only caught the Premeer scenes that i had missed..so i started watching old Premeer scenes like everyone here and there were a number of things that I noticed and understood about these two of what the scene was all about and what the creative's and the actors were trying portray to me and to all of us and to my great surprise I discovered that In many scenes there were things that I had not noticed at all when I had first seen them' it did leave me quite surprised and disappointed in myself that I didn't try to read beneath the lines and just saw what was being shown not understanding what actually was going on but then it gave me great pleasure in understanding what Prem and his Heer were all about. i made quite some discoveries about some of the scenes which I believe have not been discussed before so here are some of things that I deduced. First I would like to talk about the dance sequence of 1st may 08 *Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam* ' the dance which I had not liked at all until the moment I understood what it was all about. Surprised? Even I was when I discovered much to my pleasure that Premeer were so true to each other in that one scene' that their love was like no other on Hindi TV screen and they left me amazed and speechless and more then ever in love with them compelling me to write all of it down on paper so that I would always remember what Premeer were to each other and to me' they were an epitome of everlasting love, of romance, of passion, of angst and of pain ' love that made you smile when they smiled, romance that made you blush and catch your breath with every glance, with every touch, with every whispered word of love, and pain that tore at your heart, pulling at the strings as one cried and ached for the other.

So here I am my friends presenting you a page from the diary of an admirer who couldn't stop herself from falling helplessly in love with them. and yeah the rest of the pages are still undecided whther i want to continue of not so please bear with this one right now šŸ˜†

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ENTRY#1
Dear Diary,

Lying on my bed late at night I was bored and restless and wanted to do something but then thought that what would a person do in the dead of night with everybody asleep in their respective rooms and then thought of watching some Premeer scenes as there was nothing else to do. I came across the first dream dance sequence of Prem and Heer the one that took place on 1st may 08 when Prem came to know that his love was betrothed to someone else, and as I started watching that scene I was transported to that same place where the two lovers stood and was no longer a mere spectator but started coming to know of what that scene was all about and what I saw left me with a smile on my face and my love for them increasing all the more (which I didn't need at all mind you') and I saw two bodies without soul, two manequins whose hearts beat and burn for not the to whom they were betrothed to but for eachother... their eyes soughting eachother alone on the darkened dance floor not paying heed to the fact that they were supposed to turn towards their partners and dance like they were told to... No. they simply stood there only aware of the love that burned in their hearts unable to keep their eyes off eachother and then there was a tug on their arms and they were steered by their partners...

And they turned obliging to the wishes of their respective fiance's because their hearts... it was no more there...
The intensity of Prem's gaze on Heer, the accusation and hurt in those black pools was one of the many things that touched my heart and i felt his anguish of what he was going through seeing his love being touched by a man who called himself her fiance, unable to take the way that man's hands had curled around her fingers and swept behind her waist.. his fiery eyes burning with rage locking Heer's eyes with his, asking her that how can she be of that man when he was the one who had the right to claim her heart, to claim her hand, to claim everything! he was her lord and Master then how can she let another man take that claim away from him and let him touch her when it was Prem who had the sole right to her ... his gaze burned with questions, love, pain and anger and Heer... she simply looked back at him, eye to eye, telling him... assuring him, that her heart, her soul, her body belonged to him alone and that right can never be taken away from him.... and when when prem continued to look hurt, the demon inside him screaming and shouting ...his inner turmoil visible in his eyes,Heer 's soul left the body unable to take his pain and went towards him and most obediently Prem followed.. thristy for that right for that claim...
And then followed the most beautiful dance of all... it was of claims, of touch, of unspoken vows of love...

he looked at her waiting and she looked back at him.... and then took his hand boldly yet tentatively in her own and led it towards her face telling him in words that werent necessary to say out loud that only you have the right to touch me... i am yours to claim my lord... and the way she closed her eyes, making his palm rest against her smooth skin, she told him that she loved him...
And then Prem lifted his own hand, and laid it against her cheek and Heer closed her eyes in response savoring and loving his touch on her as the part of skin that his palm covered burned and a shiver ran down her spine...
and Prem realised that her heart like always was his...
They both spoke the language of love of romance that was centuries old yet so profound so pure that my heart shook in awe that how can these two souls these two hearts love eachother so much? how can one not see other in pain abt a simple touch of a simple claim, the touch that talked of romance of how one's body would awaken at the gaze of the other...
Prem Heer left this admirer in awe of them becuase this admirer never saw Prem romance his lady with so much purity with so much love and tell her what exactly he felt for her... For me this dream was not either of Prem or of Heer's.... it was their dream😳 but thats what it all was... a dream.. where there hearts spoke of wishes they couldnt mouth.... *deep sigh* premeer šŸ˜
and hence, here i conclude my entry...
Your
Admirer.
P.S: okay how bad was it? šŸ˜† i hope i am right.. thats what i deduced from the dance and i hope that would agree with me 😳😳 would love to know ur feedback guys! 😃
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nandini27 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i'l cum to this...n sorry i was sleeping!! 😳
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omg hiba ure such a wonderful writer..now im falling in love with premeer all the more!!!!!what a beautifel perception....loved it..even im amazed at the way they portrayed it!!it looked as if there's alot more to it!!!

well written....wud loove to read more entries soon...want to see how u comprehend other scenes of them!!eager to know the 18th june 08 scene phirst....

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thanx hiba for reviving old memories...actually these r not old...whenver i go through these vdo's n caps it always seems like m seeing this for the first time....




i love this one specially...
this cap has something special..... intensity of which cant be described with words...*sigh* kya din thhey na?

Edited by alisha_harshiti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww hiba u are a wonderful writer.....i hv said it many times n saying it again u described this scene so beautifully
n yeah it was their dream ...............but i think it was initiated by heer
but i love it
n thank u for this post
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mazkachazka

omg hiba ure such a wonderful writer..now im falling in love with premeer all the more!!!!!what a beautifel perception....loved it..even im amazed at the way they portrayed it!!it looked as if there's alot more to it!!!

well written....wud loove to read more entries soon...want to see how u comprehend other scenes of them!!eager to know the 18th june 08 scene phirst....

aww thats so very sweet of you mazka šŸ¤— em glad u liked my perception 😃 and yes it was more then a dance of Premeer šŸ˜ aww well i dunno whether i'll be continueing with more entriesšŸ˜† if i'll get time then would surely post somethin and as for 18th june *looks thoughtful* it wasnt complicated ....as in the emotions were expressed by Prem and Heer like no other and estee analysed the scene to perfection so i dunt think i'll be doing any justice to it šŸ˜› thanks alot for commenting dear! loved readin ur reply! šŸ¤—šŸ¤—
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Posted: 15 years ago
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šŸ˜ i can watch ds scene over nd over again 4 da whole day

nd bty u r such a fantastic writer da way u described nd explained every thing was amazing šŸ‘
thanx 4 posting nd sharing ds šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
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fabulous hiba.....loved the way you worded this!
will be waiting for more!
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Originally posted by: alisha_harshiti

thanx hiba for reviving old memories...actually these r not old...whenver i go through these vdo's n caps it always seems like m seeing this for the first time....




i love this one specially...
this cap has something special..... intensity of which cant be described with words...*sigh* kya din thhey na?

hey thanks for replyin alisha and yeah those were some days yar... *sigh* em glad u liked it.. 😃
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Okie...am bak to comment here..i know i took long enuff...but i guess i really need gud mind sets n decision taking minds to really cum bak n reply to sth....talk abt being lazy, am going thru it a LOT!!!

okie so i always believed it was prem n heer both who saw dis happen...at first wen i was watching dis live on tv on 1st may...i thot it was prem..coz he was d one who was gonna confess to her and heartbroken....but ltr d way heer took his hand in her hand....i was like no...its heer??!! coz prem even though knows she loves him, he owned her...never had dis strong proof or feeling she thot the same abt him...he cud see she wasnt happy wid madmeet, but still deep down, he wud hav had lil doubts?!! she was after al engaged for a long time.....but then heer's pain...d way she gave him d apologotic look while dancing...it spoke soooo much....

i remember dis incident which happened...one of my skl frnds..a guy...i was putting dis dance ke pics on a social site...n he not knowing hindi or wat d show is, or wat d show is abt...all he said was woww man...i can see him burning for her.....n dey r speaking thru eyes like i've never seen b4!! i guess i;ve told abt dis incident a lot šŸ˜† so sorry if anyone got bored reading dis again...

and hiba...well written...sadly i dont praise tht well mayb?? or my vocabulary is just toooo bad to find some apt words...ur an amazing writer...n ur POV was just toooo gud for words....i loved remembering dis scene...loved going bak in time....love prem...love heer...love premeer!!! n i hate them tooo!! hmph!

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