SR Untitled One Shot, Uptd 06/06, p.1

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: monar
For a pause in time, his attention lingered on the circular figure sitting way up in the universal roof. It was poornamashi today, and the chaand was glowing shamelessly...

IF please add love button for posts else I will file my first petition ever 😕...
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sheer brilliance of writing.. Mohtarma now I am your AC/DC whatever
am amazed, such a symphonic post and as by now you know am not good playing with words but reader who cherish reading brilliant stuff .. too good yaar.. above took my heart kidneys and lungs away 😍

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🤣🤣 Iss baat par bhi bheek?😆

On a serious note though, honestly... there was nothing as such. Teri heart, kidneys, lungs mujhe bahut pyaari hain, but you need them to live aur tumhaare bina mera kya hoga, BUSR ka kya hoga?😲... Teri ye meeti meeti baatein diabetes ko bulava na dein!😆 Thanks sweetness, you humble me.😳 Dhool ko tum phool bata rahi ho😊

Cheers,
dc

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