SR Untitled One Shot, Uptd 06/06, p.1 - Page 2

Originally posted by: prerna4rishav

Awesummmmmmmmm hun 😃 KUDOS 😃

Damnnn it is a beautiful emotional yet subtle n classic romantic OS .. LOVEDDDDDDDDDDD it.. U r a fabulous writer.. Loved the part where he understands the value n place of Armaan in her heart 😊 It was beautiful :D

Plz keep writing more 😃

Originally posted by: shamil

amazing!!!!👏👏👏 u have got a fantastic style of writing👍🏼.. keep writing yaar..

am waiting😍

Originally posted by: Pragzie

neetu 🤗 🤗 Same goes for you Pragz! *hugz*you are absolutely magical with words....! 👏 *looks around* You talking to me?😕
Lol.chudail riddhima and khadus Sid make a perfect jodi! 😍 Hai na? 😆 I thought so too!
Thank You so much for posting it! 😳 Thank you so kindly for reading😊

Chala tha woh apne mehboob ko manane,
Uski khoyi hui musqurahat ko unn khamosh honton se milanay.
Kya pata tah gulabon kii sejh ke neeche sisak rahey teh kaanton ke angaare,
Jal raha tah badan, chooth raha tah khwaabon ka jahan,
Musqurahat uss be-reham kii keemat adah kar raha tah woh deewana lekin,
Qaed thi aakhir uss ek musqurahat mein' mohabbat ki duniya uski. (c) desi chic/india-forums.com

these lines are absolutely 😍 😍 😍 Why thank you! Sid is such a beautiful character😳

I loved the childishness of ridzi..ice cream khaani hai 🤣 That's Ridz at her best!😃
and the way Sid took care of her..i hope something like this happens in DMG especially the last scene 😳 I hope... something good happens. I'm loving the Karans-chemistry and I'm looking forward to more Sidhimma jaadu😃

The was you portrayed Sid's feeling was really mindblowing! 😳 Sid is mindblowing dude! But thanks😳

Now go and write some more Oss! 😎 😆 Kya bachi kii jaan logi?😆😆 Karti hoon, asap!

Cheers,
dc

Originally posted by: uppaas

Lovely , awesome , fantastic...I imagine them like this and find them even cuter.........👏👏👏

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

This is absolutely beautiful........seriously, I can't find another word to describe it. Beautiful.

Originally posted by: MagicalKash

WoW!!!

It was Simply fantastic,mindblowing,lovely..I just don't have words to express How beautiful and nice the OS was for me.

Loved it sweetheart!🤗

Do write more😳

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

This is magical! I love how you weave emotions into lyrical prose. You have brought out Sid's emotional turmoil so well. The angst-ridden nature of the SR relationship reflects beautifully in your OS. And you are such a deep poetess...👏

Chala tha woh apne mehboob ko manane,

Uski khoyi hui musqurahat ko unn khamosh honton se milanay.

Kya pata tah gulabon kii sejh ke neeche sisak rahey teh kaanton ke angaare,

Jal raha tah badan, chooth raha tah khwaabon ka jahan,

Musqurahat uss be-reham kii keemat adah kar raha tah woh deewana lekin,

Qaed thi aakhir uss ek musqurahat mein' mohabbat ki duniya uski. These lines are desi chic/india-forums.com. DO NOT COPY/RE-POST ELSEWHERE.

What happened after Sid carried Riddz to his room?

Love and luck to you always,❤️

GOD bless you. 🤗

Originally posted by: JATINTHAKKAR

Beautiful.

It's really very Nice.

Desi Chic Rocksss!!!👏👏👏

Originally posted by: edward420

wOW!! it was awesome 👏 👏 ⭐️
pls update soon