SR Untitled One Shot, Uptd 06/06, p.1

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desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: nikita_88
Loved the second part

Cont soon!

Thanks Nikita, glad you enjoyed my bak-bak😃!

Cheers,
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desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MagicalKash
Wow!!
Just WoW!!

It was Amazing!!

The second part seriously took me to a siddhima land!!😍

Loved it!!

Do continue soon!😳

PS:Can you plz update the Aasman story too?😳

Hey dude! Siddhima land, now that's a beautiful place, 😳 Thank you kindly for the time and words, appreciate it!

As for "Aasman"... Haha, that's still there is it?😆 No worries, I'll be back to that one as soon as this thing is finished which it will be in the next part😊 Thanks for reminding me and having such sweet patience!

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: zeenia
How did I miss this the first time!!😲

This is absolutely beautifully written!!😃

Zeenia, you are too sweet! Thanks yaar😊

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desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Pragzie
neetu di 🤗 your just magical with words..i love reading ur OSs..they are just😍 ..i am speechless..i cannot think how to describe how much i liked it!

sid kabhi nahiin badlega even in the OS he is thinking AR are meant to be 😆

and i luv ridz nakhre 😆

continue ASAP! 😆 😆 me will continue soon 2

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Pragzie! *japphi*... Thanks babez! You're "speechless" eh? Woh toh dikh raha hai😆 Jk! Of course, Sid kyun badlega, addat se majboor, just like his wife😆 Thanks for commenting jaan, looking forward to your updates!! And I "asap" heard... loud and clear boss😊

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pragati

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: desi chic

Pragzie! *japphi*... Thanks babez! You're "speechless" eh? Woh toh dikh raha hai😆 Jk! Of course, Sid kyun badlega, addat se majboor, just like his wife😆 Thanks for commenting jaan, looking forward to your updates!! And I "asap" heard... loud and clear boss😊

Cheers,
dc

😆 😆 now that i am not speechless i write some more:
CONTINUE KARO!CONTINUE KARO!CONTINUE KARO! 😆
ur fault only that i am being a brat.😆 .i luv ur OS too much

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desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

@ Pragzie, kyun meri waat lagane par tulli hui hai?😆 Do you hear the echo though? Its trying to tell you something😉 As for my lazy self, I will start typing tomorrow and see how far I get😃🤗

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dc

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

in one word.....MAGICAL!!!!! i m fallin short of words...it was beautiful....plz continue

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desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: mabel
in one word.....MAGICAL!!!!! i m fallin short of words...it was beautiful....plz continue

Mabel, 🤗 Shukriya, mehrbaani... you are too kind my dear!

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monar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

For a pause in time, his attention lingered on the circular figure sitting way up in the universal roof. It was poornamashi today, and the chaand was glowing shamelessly...

IF please add love button for posts else I will file my first petition ever 😕...
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sheer brilliance of writing.. Mohtarma now I am your AC/DC whatever
am amazed, such a symphonic post and as by now you know am not good playing with words but reader who cherish reading brilliant stuff .. too good yaar.. above took my heart kidneys and lungs away 😍

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