SR Untitled One Shot, Uptd 06/06, p.1

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Hey guys, I've updated this suspiciously long "OS" on the first page... feel free to rip apart!😊 Maine waada poora kiya Pragzie beta, now your baari😉

Anyone wanting me to PM them, please let me know! And as you know, I don't look over these thingies, so forgive the mistakes! I wrote this one rather quickly, so half the stuff probably makes no sense anyhow!😕

Cheers,
dc

Edited by desi chic - 15 years ago

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pooja

@uppaas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

👏👏👏👏..I am spellbound.............

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: uppaas
👏..I am spellbound.............

And I am too... how do you have such tolerance?😆😆 Thanks dude! 😃

Cheers,
dc

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Its absolutely breathtaking. Honestly, I read a LOT, but I've rarely come across something so simple, and so beautiful at the same time. Kudos to you.

-Aditi

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Loved the second part

Cont soon!

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MagicalKash

@MagicalKash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Wow!!

Just WoW!!

It was Amazing!!

The second part seriously took me to a siddhima land!!😍

Loved it!!

Do continue soon!😳

PS:Can you plz update the Aasman story too?😳

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10124

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

How did I miss this the first time!!😲

This is absolutely beautifully written!!😃

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pragati

@Pragzie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

neetu di 🤗 your just magical with words..i love reading ur OSs..they are just😍 ..i am speechless..i cannot think how to describe how much i liked it!

sid kabhi nahiin badlega even in the OS he is thinking AR are meant to be 😆

and i luv ridz nakhre 😆

continue ASAP! 😆 😆 me will continue soon 2

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: monar

Thankoo for extended parking 😳 Anything for fellow employees😃
I am sure yaar *rubbing ma eyes and runs to check first page again * yeah I read your post only 😛 pagli tu talented hai. maan le ab.. warna chaped markar samjhoon 😡 Oye *hand on cheek*... tu bhi Ridzy ki tarah tapad-mar-ing professional hai kay?😕😕
tu hi hai poetess .. hor ki tu jedo tu hilegi nahi kursi de naal then how will I take that position tell tell 😈*devil* *Bollywood style - Nahiiiiiiiiiiin... hand on forhead* Tu beth toh sahi, main neeche se keench loongi😆

Le yeh post acchi hai bahut hai twanu kuch nahi pata.. I am blunt if wont like will tell ya upfront 😳.. Chalo, tuhaadi bluntness sar aakhon par😳

and yeh this reader is all set with her reading glasses to read further Sirf reading glasses?😆

Thanks for the sweetness dost!

Cheers,
dc

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: StarshineHues
Its absolutely breathtaking. Honestly, I read a LOT, but I've rarely come across something so simple, and so beautiful at the same time. Kudos to you.

-Aditi

Aditi,

Your words are priceless and I am flattered by your generosity... baaki beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder😉

Cheers,
dc