YuNa POEMS: Updated - 25/2 pg 15 Sealed Lips - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Tushtih7

MJ... loved ur lines

"now its her love that i feel"

... n this is my favourite line

happy atleast i get to feel about yuvi naina luv here...

thanxxx for dat..

Thanks Yami.. am glad you liked it!! I can imagine, as i feel the same way.. its sooo annoying that there are hardly and YuNa scenes!! lol.. and you are welcome!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
@MJ...you can send to me to check your
work, i do it for sumi all the time and if
doesnt send me then i keep bugging
her abt the mistkaes she made lol
and yes we tend to get whacko
whenever we are together which
all the time lol
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

@MJ...you can send to me to check your

work, i do it for sumi all the time and if
doesnt send me then i keep bugging
her abt the mistkaes she made lol
and yes we tend to get whacko
whenever we are together which
all the time lol

Thanks for the lovely Offer Sneha.. i will do so when i am running out of time.. lol.. first i have to write the FF! 😆
And Whacko is goood.. very goood, instead of being boring.. lol😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys.. find my new poem on YuNa highlighting Yuvi;s fear before he told Naina the truth.
Sealed lips..

My lips are sealed,
from the pain i feel,
my past is now here,
ready to destroy,
everything that is dear.

Yet i remain silent,
not speaking the truth,
the consquences of which,
i shall have to endure.

She knows not my identity,
for i have lied to all,
about my reality.
I was here for a reason,
and stayed for a season,
and then i planned to go away,
yet because of you,
i stayed back,
Naina, my sunshine ray.

Comments and criticisms welcome,
MJ
xxx
Edited by koolaries4 - 15 years ago
Sofna thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwwwwww MJ wer hav u bn??? Mssd u 🤗
Lovely!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wah mj nice one lady luk's like yuna r done wid ur poem's touch up!!! lubd da last 6 lines.........
god bless u n gud luck 4r xamzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
MISSSSSEDDDDDDD u MJ pehale pehale give me BIG hug*hugs MJ n give her chocolate 😉*
Wow yuvi must have been felt the same way when he hid the truth from naina n have to face her everyday with this guilt.With his just this one action of hidding his identity from her made him moore agressive n chichua hehe........
Yuvi have suffred harder most in his life.His life is not a chocolate cake but he found his chocolateness in naina n his life become more chocolaty after naina came into his life....well naturally yuvi dunt want to loose his chococlate she is now his EVERTHING n waise bhi aajkal chocolate i mean caring, beautiful, innocent, stunning, cutehair nabd walle n chocolaty chocolate milana mushkil ho gaya hai
😉 ..LOved foll lines:

I was here for a reason,
and stayed for a season, (wow MJ this was the best
😳)
and then i planned to go away,
yet because of you,
i stayed back,
Naina, my sunshine ray.(M$E DAFFOR N CHOCOLATY BAKERY)

P.S. have eaten loads of chocolate so dunt mind my obsessive use of chocolate in comment n do pm me when u compose any YuNa poem.
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Posted: 15 years ago
i want more poems lol plzzzzz update will reply on each later

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