YuNa POEMS: Updated - 25/2 pg 15 Sealed Lips

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Ppz.... hope you guys are doing well.. and having YuNalicious days.. And if you arent then i hope my post will help in making your days YuNalicious!! 😉😆 This is a thread i have made to collect all my poems so far!! So if i have any new poem, i will update it in this thread!!

@ Sumi: Thanks for the idea! * hugs*

Here are the links to my old Poems: Naina's POV in Pink and Yuvi's POV in blue:

A Corner: link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1320026/poem-naina-a-corner

My revenge link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1317970/poem-yuvis-revenge

My reality, link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1316672/my-reality-poem-yuvi-2-naina

Losing And Gaining link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1318169/poem-nainas-loss-and-gain

Forgive me! link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1320016/poem-yuvis-forgiveness
Gratitude.. link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dill-mill-gaye/1320020/poem-yuvis-gratitude-to-shashank

One Chance: Page 1.

Trust: Page 2.

She gave me a chance: Page 3.

Mine to take? : Page 4.

I am Sorry: Page 5.

For her... Page 7.

My Fear: Page 9.

Raj Danger: Page 11.

My Past: Page 12.

Sealed Lips: page 15

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Guys, this is my latest poem, in Yuvi's POV asking Naina for one chance. Hope you guys like it!! 😃

One chance..

14 years have been a waste
that is now my fate
now its me that you hate
with hatred at its highest rate
I hope you can one day forgive me,
And that its not too late,
For you to give love one more chance
And for us to go to our own mars,
which is void of any farce
Where all that remains are our hearts!!

Comments and Criticisms wellcome..

Tc,

xxx

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

This is lovely MJ...this is what he would be saying to her when he will realize his love for her...and the ending is so cute.. ..just perfect !!!

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Interstellar

@Interstellar

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

👏 👏 👏

luved ur poem..........

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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Awwwww MJ 🤗 BEAUTIFUL

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night
This is lovely MJ...this is what he would be saying to her when he will realize his love for her...and the ending is so cute.. ..just perfect !!!

Thanks Priyanka.. Yes, apparently he has already realised he loves her, so it kinda fits the situation too.. hehe.. 😆😊

Originally posted by: Tushtih7
👏 👏 👏

luved ur poem..........

Thanks Yami.. 😳

Originally posted by: Sofna
Awwwww MJ 🤗 BEAUTIFUL

Thanks sofna!! 🤗

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

MJ dis was so 👍🏼 goes perfect wid da present situation....... n thnk u 4r giving da links of all poems🤗

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
MJ dis was so 👍🏼 goes perfect wid da present situation....... n thnk u 4r giving da links of all poems🤗

Thanks for replying Sana.. And thank for your appreciation! 😳 🤗

And you are wellcome for the links😆..

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

MJ...love that poem!! lol Nainzie has finally forgiven him or so we think :P

and np for the idea...lol now I can access your poems whenever i want ha ha ha!!

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: princessuma
MJ...love that poem!! lol Nainzie has finally forgiven him or so we think :P

and np for the idea...lol now I can access your poems whenever i want ha ha ha!!

well, well, well Sumi.. Thanks for replying.. i am so very annoyed by the pace of the YuNa story.. i wanted it to take some more time..

Anyways, heres goes the next poem based on todays episode!! 😊 Coming up right away! 😉