NEW AY fic 'aisa kyun hota hai'6th part posted

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi guyz....im new here .....

i've silently been visiting RF since march i guess....im a pakka AYian...... i've read most of ur fanfics n ijst luv dem.... u guyz r wonderful writers.... though im very bad at writing i want to share my imaginations wid u.......i jst hope dat u lyk dem ....don beat me 4 my writing skills......
so here goes my 1st fic..........
AISA KYUN HOTA HAI...
1ST PART
"BANGGG" "hey watch it psycho 😡...yaha India me sab blind hote hai kya!!!"the girl shouted. the guy on hearing sth bad abt his country opened his mouth to shout back but his voice failed him....
wow she luks amazing😍.....eyes so intoxicating....skin as fair as dove ....long black curls hanging over the shoulders...... the guy thot to himself...
"duh huh loser apna mouth band karlo nhi to koi fly use apna cave samjh ke andar chali jaegi"...said the girl.the guy came back to present...shut his mouth n den suddenly remembered dat he was there at the airport to
pick smone .den he took another glance in the direction of the girl"anvesha..."he murmered,still not able to speak anything else.
"oh to sonia aunty ne mujhe lene ke liye tumhe bheja hai?"ashi said.
"haan"replied yuvi.
"ye sonia aunty bhi na pata nhi kaise kaise logo ko kam par rakh leti hai
ek to inhe dekh kar chalna bhi nhi aata...." started ashi.yuvi was confused.ashi continued.."sab se takrate rehte hain n uske bad ek beautiful girl dikhi nhi ki apna mouth open state mein rakhte hue use stare karte hain.....anwayz driver mera luggage ab jaldi se car me rakho n chalo...im very tired"
yuvi's face was red with anger"hello!!!! whhattt!!! wacko how dare you talk to me lyk dat😡 me....driverrrr!!!!!"
A:"hold it psycho...tum driver nhi to kya sonia aunty ke bete yuvraj dev ho!!!! huh !!! chalo ab mera tym wate mat karo apni in useless baton se...nhi to mein aunty se keh ke tumhe job se nikalwa dungi"
Y:"wacko just shut your trap okay😡main sonia aunty ka beta yuvraj dev HI hoon..."
A:"whatt!!!"
Y:"n ab main yaha khade hoke tumhari nonsense nhi sunne wala ...im going ...tum apne ap ko bohat smart samajhti hona to ghar jane ka raasta bhi tumhi dhund lena bye..."
A:"but loser wait mujhe to......"
Y:"im going"(shouting from a distance without turning back)
A:"....address bhi nhi pata"(her voice trailed)
end of 1st part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey!!! Welcome to RF!🤗 I am glad that you stopped being silent and joined us over here!😳🤗

And I know right?!?!?! RF's fanfiction was the reason I, too, actually joined this place!😳 By mads, fate, smriti (i call her loons), harshu, anu...everyone...sheesh...such beautiful one shots and fics!☺️😍 But now they won't write for me anymore🥺

So I am gladddddddddddd you wrote one!😳😳
Haven't read it abhi...coz if i do, i will probably go in AY land and i've to do my presentation!😳 But will read and reply tomorrow!😳

What's your name btw?😳 Watching remix for the first time?😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😊😊😊 thanx niyati...you replied.. i thot dat no will reply because i've no friends here.... atleast out of 15 ppl who hav read ,you replied.im so happy... n my name is Tanya..n i started wathing remix in nov 09... frm day i ws nuts for ashi....
i didn't like yuvi pehle coz he troubled ashi so much.....
but now im totally in love wid dem ...😳😳😳
well i'll wait for your reply abt my fic...plz read n reply so dat i can continue.....
i wonder why anyone else is not replying😭.... guys plz tell me if my fic is that bad.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey I read this!! OMG! This is soo cute!😳 And I am really wondering to know that how come you made sonia yuvi's mom from ashi's mom?😳😆 When I first read it...i was like why is ashi calling sonia...sonia aunty?? And later I see that sonia is yuvi's mom!🤣 Not that i mind...she is his mom too in future! 😉 But I am really eager to read ur thoughts regarding this...why yuvi??😳

Really cute!😳 Continue soon!😳

And out of the 15 people...most would be silent...like you were before...other would be some fans of other couple who just aiwein hi opened the topic...and the AY fans who are active comes according to indian time...i am usually the only one whom u would find on at this time...except pals sometimes!😳 And other AY fans are busy this whole week so might not even come on the forum!

And on top of that, RF isn't that active...but just know this that whatever replies you will get...they will all be heartfelt!😳 and i think that is what matters...right? 😳

And as for yuvi...I dont even remmeber if i liked him initially or not...but oh mannnnnnnnn seeing remix again in 2009...I was in love with him along with ashi!☺️😳 Sheesh he is soo cute...he looked typical teenage boy in those initial days!😳😍 Aaah love A and Y both!☺️

Once again welcome tanya!😳
Cont. soon!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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welcome to the forum :) glad ur no more a silent member and hope u buzz on in the activities of our home soon :) i liked the way u strted the story :) u captured the correct mood and expression of their relationship :p love their fights =)) .. n i can see u have deviated from the actual story now that wud be interesting to read :)
oh and do carry on
iam shelly btw :D and as u can see my id ive nt liked but loved yuvi frm the very begining :">
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx ya..... ok im continuing my fic.....

2nd part
sonia was waiting for yuvi n ashi.she was so delighted dat ashi was finally cumin to stay wid her....she had prepared all the dishesh ashi lyked.....den she went upstairs to check if ashi's room was arranged....
after she was satisfied with everything she sat down n her thoughts drifted to past.......
shuchi was her best friend .....they were together since school they were married together....sonia to yashvant n shuchi to aurunab....they had their first kids almost together....sonia's son yuvi who was a month older to ashi,shuchi's daughter....they shared every moment wid each other .....but life is not always perfect.....shuchi left all of them n made her journey to heaven when ashi was just 5 ....sonia was heartbroken not just coz she would miss her friend but for ashi ....she took her responsibilty n looked after her .....she loved ashi as much as yuvi ..may be more...aurunav's life became difficult tooo.thoughts of shuchi haunted him...each in every thing in their house...every place in that city reminded him of shuchi....so he finally decided that he should shift to london....
both sonia n yashvant tried to convince him to stay back but aurunav couldn't take all this anymore....he had to go taking ashi away with him...
the memories of the day when aurunav took ashi away from sonia was still clear in sonia's mind...ashi had cried so much...1st her mom n now her sonia aunty....she would be away from both of them...
sonia and yashvant visited ashi from time to time but they never took yuvi with them because of his school...
n few days ago aurunav called to inform her that he is coming back to mumbai...as he had to finish some work there he would come after 3-4 months but ashi ashi had to come early so that she could attend her clases in her new school on time... she had already got admission in maurya.....
TING TONG!!!
sonia came back to present...."it must be them"she rushed towards the door to welcome her mumum..(she calls her mumum because it was the name given by shuchi to her)....she ws shocked ater opening the door.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww this is soo cute!😳 I can't wait to read further!😳 Cont. soon tanya!😳😳

PS: Dung!! Stop lying!! You didn't watch remix from beginning...u saw from b'day episodes!! Duh-uh...yuvi had grown more irresistible by then!☺️😍 But isn't this amazing that both AY just grows irresistible with each passing day?😆😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya niyati you said it right....they are simply irresistible.....😳😳😳...they drag me to madness...

my friends don understand my feelings for AY....they call me crazy....yes i am crazy but only for ashi n yuvi.... n Shelly thanks to you for reading my fic n replying😃....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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here goes the 3rd part...

sonia was shocked after opening the door ....only yuvi was standing there n there was no sign of ashi...

s:(worried)beta ashi kaha hai aur tumhara face itna red kyun hai....

y:(fuming with anger)mom she is a total nutcase mom ...i couldn't stand her mom.... s:😡ashi kaha hai?.. y: mom she is so arrogant and rude ....how dare she call me a driver.... s:(almost shouting)yuvi, ashi kaha hai? kahi tum use airport par chod kar to nahi chale aaye??? y:mera to man kar raha tha ki main uska face smash kar doon(thinking: lekin itna beautiful face main smash kaise karta)but... (lowering his voice)...yes mom main use airport par chod ke a gaya.... s:whattt!!!! 😡tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho yuvi!!!! us bechari ko to yaha ka address bhi nahi pata....uske liye to yeh jagah bhi bilkul new hai....main hi pagal hoon mujhe khud hi jana chahite tha....(she was tryin ashi's phone)... oh no...out of reach!!.....(very worriedly)ab main kya karu??.....oh god!!!... Y:mom ap relax karo ...wo koi bechari vechari nahi hai....
s:(interrupting him)shutup yuvi ...tumhara punishment to main bad me decide karungi ...abhi i am going to find ashi...
Y: but mom....
s:SHUT UP!!!
sonia took her hand bag n said...
s: main ashi ko dhoond kar lati hoon tab tak tum ghar par hi rehna....
"uski koi zarurat nahi hai"a voice said...
both sonia n yuvi's heads turned towards the door...
s:😃mumummmm my sweetheart.....(she rushed to hug her).....
a:duh huh aunty apne ye socha bhi kaise ki main kho jaungi.....
s: oh mumum....(she hugged ashi n kissed her on forehead)
ashi showed a tounge to yuvi who was looking at her angrily....
yuvi showed her a punch....
sonia couldn't see all this as she was busy hugging ashi....
she seated ashi on the sofa n gave her a glass of water....
s:lekin mumum tum yaha pahuchi kaise ?tumhe to yaha ka address bhi nahi pata tha ...
a:duh huh aunty mujhe ye to pata tha na ki ye mr.yashvant dev the M.P. ka ghar hai ...bas maine ek taxi wale ko bataya n usne mujhe yaha drop kar dia....
s: oh my sweetheart.....
all this time yuvi felt neglected...sonia wasn't even looking at him...
y:mom i m hungry....lets have our lunch.....
s:(ignoring yuvi)mumum tum chalo main tumhe tumhara room dikhati hoon
a:ok aunty lets go...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hahah jealous yuvi is soo cute!🤣 I can imagine that in remix...with meera loving ashi more...bahar se toh yuvi will show that he is all jealous and stuff...but ander se he would be feeling soo proud! 😉 😆 😳

Cute part tanya!😳 soo adorable!😳

And btw u said u started watching remix from nov. 2009...so have u seen from episode 1 or from the middle of the show?😳

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