NEW AY fic 'aisa kyun hota hai'6th part posted - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i started watchin remix in nov but i hav watched all the episodes from the 1st one till date more than once.....spc'lly all AY scenes toh i ve watched pata nhi kitni bar☺️☺️☺️.... i even watched the kekta's kahanii ghar ghar ki for AY.... i also wanted to watch 4,JHJL,CID,for priya n raj ....i jst love dem 😳... but couldn't find the videos😭..... n about the fic....you asked why i made sonia,yuvi's mom..... well i wanted ashi's mom to be dead but i didn't wanted my fic to be w/o sonia so i made her yuvi's mom.....
Edited by loveashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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4th part
sonia went away with ashi without paying any attention to yuvi...
yuvi coudn't say anything....so he just went to his room stomping his feet....
ashi's room was next to yuvi's...
sonia told ashi to freshen up n come to the dining hall for the lunch...
she then went to yuvi's room ....
yuvi was sitting on his bed with his guitar with an angry look on his face....as soon as he saw sonia enter he turned his face...
sonia smiled and nodded her head in a "iska kuch nhi ho sakta "manner...
s:beta look....ashi is new here...we should help her to adjust in this place ...from day after tomorrow you will be going to the school together...n she is a very sweet kid...not arrogant or rude as you think....
y:ha tabhi to aap ab mujhse jyada usse pyar karne lagi ho....aur wo wierdo rude hai aap waha hote tab dekhte...usne aap ko driver bulaya hota tab aapko pata chalta....
s(smiling):beta atleast give her a chance .....wo dil ki bahut saaf hai...(gettin senti)wo to bina mom ke badi hui hai shayad isliye....atleast you've had your mom with you everytime....
y:ok mom ok....now don't get senti ...all right...i'll try to adjust with her but don't expect me to compromise everytime ......
s:ok yuvi....
Y:(scratching his head with an innocent look on his face)aap ab mere se naraz to nhi ho naa...
s:(smiling)ofcourse not....
(pulling his cheek )...chalo ab jaldi se lunch ke liye a jao...
Y:ok mom...
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(in the dining room)
as soon as he entered he shouted:
"WHACKO,YOU LUNATIC HOW DARE YOU DO THIS THAT'S MY SEAT JUST GET UP FROM THERE"......he came there ,seething with rage.....
actully ashi reached there before yuvi and sat beside sonia....she didn't have the foggiest idea that this was yuvi's seat......when yuvi shouted she just got up from there and moved towards another chair....(very unlikely of our ashi na .... anvesha banerjee ray ko to orders na manne ki buri bimari hai...phir ye kaise???....) 😈she had thought something to get back on him.....so with a bechari kinda look on her face she just moved...
sonia saw all this ..she was very angry at yuvi.....
s:😡😡😡mere itna samjhane ke bad bhi tumhe kuch samajh me nhi aaya .....apne ghar me aaye logo se is tarah behave karte .... agar wo galti se tumhari seat par baith bhi gai thi to tum usse aram se bol sakte....chillane ki kya zarurat thi....
ashi was laughing holding her stomach without making any sound...
sonia couldn't see all this as ashi was facing her back...
Y(glaring at ashi): mom wo....
s:chup raho !!!mere itna sikhane ka bhi koi fayda nhi hua ...you hav dissapointed me.....
ashi was making all kind of teasing faces to yuvi n shoeing him thumbs down....
Y:mom aap usko ek bar dekho to....
s:kya dekhoo...(she turned)
ashi immediately brought back the bechari look on her face...
s:dekho tumne usko kitna dara diya ha....(to ashi)oh poor mumum....
Y:mom ye sab naatak kar....
s:yuvi ab main ek wrd bhi nhi sunna chahti chupchap baitho n khana khao..
yuvi sat down quitely....n looked at ashi who couldn't control her silent laughter....
yuvi now knew one thing if he had to get back on the whacko he would have to BEWARE of his mom nhi to next time she would beat him to pulp.....
on the way back to their room...
A:so psycho...how was your day!!!😈 mere to haste haste pet me dard ho gya...
Y:😡whacko just wait and watch...maine tumhare liye kya kya plan kar rakha hai...
A:oh plan!!!...hey bhaggu...kaise samjhau is nadan bachche ko ki ye mera kuch nahi bigad sakta....
Y:stop being love with your own words wierdo...tum bas dekhti jao main kya kya kar sakta hoon....ha ho sakta hai ki tum bach jao kyuki tumhe to aadat hai hamesha meri mom ke peeche chupne ki ....tumse khud se to koi kam hota nahi hai....
A:duh uh psycho tum bhool rahe ho ki main airport se yaha tak akeli hi aayi thi....n main khud se aur bhi bahut kuch kar sakti hu......so the WAR begins from now...
Y:ok whacko done....
both move towards their own rooms
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
nobody is responding to my fic......guys pls tell me if it is too bad...... or may be you dont wanna comment on a newbie's fic.....pls tell me if it is so......
or may be no one is reading.....im just writing for ghosts......
or may be it wud hav been better if never started this boring fic ......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Tanya! Well i would have replied yesterday if i didn't had exam today!! Don't feel bad yaar...your fic is really cute!😳😳 I mean the good thing is that i can feel AY...and that is all that matters...right? 😳😳

Haven;t read the above part yet...will do so and reply soon!😳😳

And Tanya!! Never think that we would ignore you or for that matter anyone if they are newbie or moderator!! We don't distinguish people from their status or whatever!! You are equally imp. as I am in this forum...as shellz (uvcraziestfan) is!! You are not inferior...and you are not superior...no1 is superior in this forum! So never think that ways and just be yourself!😳😳🤗
Edited by -YaRa-Forever- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nitz by calling my self a newbie i didn't mean inferior or sth... i jst meant to say that no one knows me .....but if they wont give me chance then how will they know me......
n thanks for encouraging me😊...
i'll write even if 1 or 2 ppl are reading
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEY...HOLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA🤗🤗🤗,,,omg u seem a new AY adorerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....OMG..i love LOVE LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ur aviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...thats like my THE eternal pic of AY..whenever i see it kuch kuch happens to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee☺️

omg..arent they just so so so BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLL?????

and new ay fic is like i dunno whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat...getting a new fic after AGESSSSSSSSSSSS..love u kust love u for bringing this to us🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗..wld read it real soooooooooooooooo🤗🤗

and welcome to the forummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm and to AY worlllllllllld....btw am Smritiiiiiiiiii...and u?????????..and tell me more abt u how did u cme across AY how when why u fell in love wid them and Ashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..aww even love ur idddddddddd....me too loooooooooooooove ahsi beyond wordssssssssssss...

once again WELCOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Smriti😊.....this is Tanya.. thanks ..... i fell in love with ashi from the very 1st episode of remix ....she is so strightforward..... she isn't afraid of anyone...not even jumbo or yuckwant dev...she is so sweet ...the way she helped out leo ,thakur,varun ,mate n even moti roli or timbo....she even helped yuvi though he troubled her so much(when she was hiding leo)......n the list is endless.......reason for loving ashi can't be described in words☺️....
but now i even love yuvi to the same extent(may be bit lesser)...
he is so cute and adorable☺️....i started falling in love with yuvi when he started falling for ashi..... n this pic is also my fav...n i also love this song the most...mainly because this was written by yuvi thinking abt ashi.... well thanks again... plz tell me how my fic is... i know you are a very good writer👏👏👏...i ve read many fics of yours...i like all of them...especially the one you wrote abt mate's wedding followed by AY patchup😳😳😳....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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here goes the 5th part the rest of the day they did nothing except planning how to kill each other.....
yuvi woke up in the middle of the night.....
he couldn't sleep so he thought he should go out n get some fresh air.....
Y(thinking while walking back to his room):that whacko ..... i m dying to twist her neck ......1st she insulted me .... n now mom mujhe villian samajhne lagi hain all b'coz of her.... she has dared to challange me.... yuvraj dev....now she'll .............
he stopped in middle of his thoughts......there she was lying ....sleeping like a baby.....cuddled to big teddy bear.......
(by mistake yuvi entered ashi's room,both the rooms were adjecent to each other )
he couldn't take his eyes off her..... he slowly walked towards her as if he was hypnotised....sat down on his knees beside her n looked at her angelic face...... she was looking sooo beautiful..... a minute ago he was thinking of twisting her neck but now he couldn't think of anything but kissing her....
he slowly bent in to plant a soft kiss on her cheek but..........
meanwhile ashi turned in her sleep and her hand moved slapping yuvi....
SLAPPP!!!.....
yuvi snapped back to reality....
his hand on his cheek😡.... "she will be dead" he thought clenching his fists.....
he thought of waking her up but what if she asks wat was he doing there..."no ... i'll deal with her in morning now i should go back to my room".....so he quietly walked towards his room.....
AT THE BREAKFAST TABLE....
A:hey bhaggu!!! aaj koi "rotten face" day hai kya jo mujhe subah subah is psycho ka rotten tomato jaisa face dekhna par raha hai....
Yuvi opened his mouth to shout but saw sonia coming from a distance so just said"what ever" in a low voice....
S: gudmorning kids!! everything fine....
lagta hai tum dono ne ab finally dosti kar li hai...chalo meri tension to kam hui....
A:ya aunty ab humne friendship kar li hai ab hume ek dusre se koi problem nahi ....right yuvi???....
Y:(reluctantly smiling)right ashi....
S:😃😃😃 oh i love u both.....
(both glared at each other......the way they were looking at each other during the mast mast hai sama reharsals....the one during yamini's time..)
Edited by loveashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okie firstly tanu!! I wanna tell you that it was soo cute of you to make sonia as yuvi's mom just because u wanted sonia present in your fic!☺️😳 Really cuteee😳

Now coming to your fic...omg!! So the war begans!! adorable! I can imagine their look of khunaas🤣🤣 Infact while reading it...before u mentioned that it was that mast mast sama wala look...that was the exact expression that i was imagining!🤣😳 Adowable!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG..read first two parts....omg pahle i thought ki ashi ko amnesia ya somehting to nahi hai ki she is not recognizing yuvi and calling Sonu AUNTY...omgggggg...but yeh toh whole story turning different....sonu sach main yuvi ki mom and yd ki wife..omg HAHAHAHA...pahle i felt why oh why did u do thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiis separating ashi sonu..😭..but i read napp's post above...omg u jaan booj ke did this coz u wanted sonu tobe part of ashi ka life...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...hugging uuuuuuuuu🤗🤗,,,thats sho freaking sweeeeeeeeeeet...🤗...i know right na tanu?..imagining ashi wodut son or vice versa is just so not ON u feel sinkish as if somehting is NOT FINE somehting is missing INCOMPLETE...loved ur way of keeping them together..and now when i go back and re read part 2 of ur fic OMG...am actly getitng tears..specially on the last bit when sonu ran to meet HER mummummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....AWWW,,,and d fact ki apne khud ke bete se zada she loves her mummum,,omg..kitne beautiful hota hai relationsssssssssssss bina naam k rishta becomes our freaking meaning of life...OMG...tanu love u yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar..i mean d fic is totally not like remix but hte ESSENCE is so d same even in part one i felt i was reading AY of remix only i mean u carve their characters beautifully..and ashi sonu ka bond ko u made al d more specialllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll...LOVED IT tanuuuuuuuuu LOVED IT

wld read further soon but till now i so so LOVED it☺️

loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee u for this🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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