Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 69

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi arwa !!
wonderful update dear !!
chalo ab finally sab theek hogaya !!
Was really anticipating some mishap, looking at the way he was beating up those guys...
But Naina was there to control him...
Now looking forward to what promise Naina takes from him...
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Posted: 15 years ago
totally rocking part.....👏👏👏

loved d way it began wid RN convo and dat too dis outrageous nger and d way u expressed it was amazing.....👏👏

den d whole hooligan and manao act was awesome also liked d choice of song der.....👏👏👏

and den d seduction of naina wid ice creame totally wonderful and poor raj...wer to go....cudnt resist naina 😳😳😳😳and gave up and was back to normal....😊👏👏

den d completion of song wid raj making all wet and njoying...👏😊

Now waitin for d naina's words of wisdom for raj.....😊
(I know dat der too u'll bring funpart)😉

all along dialogues wer awesome👏👏
Gr8 updt....
👏👏
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
so beutiful part.......a very wonderful update...Raj ka vo gussa aur Naina ka usse sambhalna ...superb...plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
damn cool
superb
just catch with previous part and current part
awesome
love it
update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit


Hi Arwa

How r u?? - hey Suhana I'm gr8

Update was terrific👏👏 with so many emotions in it..😛 - thanks very much for loving it

Raj was really very angry n he was just not listening to any1..That picture expressed his angry emotions perfectly...My poor Raj was really very hurt😭😭 - yes this time he was very hurt by everything that happened

He was angry coz all of them had made fun of his emotions n feelings..his life has not been easy..He had to suffer a lot before Naina came in his life... he even had to try hard to bring Naina back in his life.. - for sure it had been difficult but no one knew till now when his pain came out at once

Every1 was trying their best to cool off his temper but they were just not successful.. - this time it was very tough

Naina tried to cheer him up but those hooligan made his temper worse...😡 - haan onlogo ne to hadd hee kardi

I thought he wud definetely send one or two in hell..They deserve this..They were so cheap😡..Raj really gave dem a gud doze.. - for sure they deserved more than what he gave them

Every1 was scared to see Raj like dis..Finally Naina succeeded in stopping him n den he broked in her arms...😭😭..He was tired of accusations..He was in such a pain..Every1 was so upset seeing him like dis.. - yeh as none of them had expected this to become so worse

But then Naina finally pressed his right buttons n he was normal again..Way Naina was eating ice-cream was too much for Raj too bear.😉😆😆 - yes she sure knows how to manipulate him and after all how can he possibly resist her

Every1 was so glad to see him happy again..All of dem had gr8 fum while playing with water.. - they sure were to have him back alright

Why did Naina brought Raj infront of temple?😛 - oh u'll find out soon.
Continue soon
Bye



Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

That was a gr8 part. - thanks very much

Gosh....Raj ko kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa gussa ata hai....but its true when sum1 is in too much pain....sumtyms it cums out as anger!! It hurt to see Raj going thru that mental trauma......but then every1 was there for him.....- yes bohat hee ghussa aata hain or is baar sab ne hadd kardi na isliye itna saara nikal gaya

Thosa hooligans.....they were sooo yukk.....kisiko bhi gussa aa jaye....and then ye to Rajveer tha....jinka gussa Mashallah....kayamath dhati hai....hehe. - for sure u described it quite well hehehe

I liked that breaking down scene of his....though it was touchy I am glad he cared to pour out his grief at least!!! - hmmm im glad u did like it as it wasnt very easy for me to write it

And then Naina pacifying him....wid ice-cream....gosh....HE RESISTED ICE-CREAM???? Uski sehenshakti kamaal ki hai...must say. But yeah....that scene turned out to be extremely beautiful....and I cud imagine it all....it was just lovely!! - kabhi kabhi insaan wo karta hain jo wo sochta nahi

W8ing to knw wat Naina wants him to do by taking him in front of the Mandir....however I loved that pic of his......I just love that look all the more on him!! - sure it wud come up next. Yeh i also like that look too

It was simply a gr8 part Dii....pls continue soon. - thanks once again



Originally posted by: sania_58

nice part

too good
great going
plz continue soon



Thanks very much sania for loving the part.

Im glad u liked it that much

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

awesome part dear

really a very nice one plzz update soon



thanks very much for loving the update.

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

hi arwa !!

wonderful update dear !! - thanks very much
chalo ab finally sab theek hogaya !!- wo to wese hona hee tha na
Was really anticipating some mishap, looking at the way he was beating up those guys... - hmmm perhaps there cud have been but i didnt really want to extend this matter that much
But Naina was there to control him... - she sure was as now she is the only one who can control him
Now looking forward to what promise Naina takes from him... - sure ull find out soon.



Originally posted by: fanatic 21


totally rocking part.....👏👏👏 - thanks very much dear for loving it

loved d way it began wid RN convo and dat too dis outrageous nger and d way u expressed it was amazing.....👏👏 - im glad u loved it all

den d whole hooligan and manao act was awesome also liked d choice of song der.....👏👏👏 - thanks for liking it

and den d seduction of naina wid ice creame totally wonderful and poor raj...wer to go....cudnt resist naina 😳and gave up and was back to normal....😊👏👏 - yes after all he had to give in sometime and Naina just knew how to break him

den d completion of song wid raj making all wet and njoying...👏😊 - he came back to normal

Now waitin for d naina's words of wisdom for raj.....😊
(I know dat der too u'll bring funpart)😉 - yes they sure will be fun

all along dialogues wer awesome👏👏
Gr8 updt....
👏👏 - thanks again
👏



Originally posted by: vvdn

so beutiful part.......a very wonderful update... - thanks a lot

Raj ka vo gussa aur Naina ka usse sambhalna ...superb...- good that u enjoyed it all

plzzz continue soon




Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
superb
just catch with previous part and current part
awesome
love it
update soon



thanks very much for loving the part

Im glad u caught up and enjoyed both.


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Posted: 15 years ago

Update was very emotional.

Raj is very angry with everyone😡...he does not want ot listen to any reasoning. At first naina thinks that Raj is just over reacting but then she gets worried that something else is the matter. 😕

When the 'gundas' try to flirt with naina...raj cannot control his anger and beats the hell out of them😡. It takes a lot of effort from Alekh and Navieen to stop Raj.

Raj finally breaks down in naina's arms as his emotions and anger take the better of him. All the hurt, frustration and anger that he has kept shut in his heart come out.😭 Naina cannot see Raj so disturbed and in so much pain. Everyone is shocked to see Raj in this state. 😲

Raj tells her that he is tired of explaining himself to all the accusations.....tired of being misunderstood by everyone....of justifying his actions to everyone.

Naina realises that Raj is emotionally very weak and hurt. 😭

Finally naina raj ko mana leti hai...akhir raj kab tak naina ko resist kar ta.😉

Everyone is happy to see Raj happy again.😊

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
that was really sweet
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very emotional.- yeh it was as Raj's pain was reflected na

Raj is very angry with everyone😡...he does not want ot listen to any reasoning. At first naina thinks that Raj is just over reacting but then she gets worried that something else is the matter. 😕 - yeh things were worse than she thought

When the 'gundas' try to flirt with naina...raj cannot control his anger and beats the hell out of them😡. It takes a lot of effort from Alekh and Navieen to stop Raj.- for sure his anger is very dangerous or kissee ko bhi ghussa aajaata na onki baate sunkar

Raj finally breaks down in naina's arms as his emotions and anger take the better of him. All the hurt, frustration and anger that he has kept shut in his heart come out.😭 Naina cannot see Raj so disturbed and in so much pain. Everyone is shocked to see Raj in this state. 😲 - Raj ko dhukee dekhke ose bhi bohat dard hota hain isliye. It was something none of them expected thats why

Raj tells her that he is tired of explaining himself to all the accusations.....tired of being misunderstood by everyone....of justifying his actions to everyone. - he is tired of everything really as it has built up.

Naina realises that Raj is emotionally very weak and hurt. 😭 - yes she is very upset to see him like this

Finally naina raj ko mana leti hai...akhir raj kab tak naina ko resist kar ta.😉 - of course wo to oske bina jee hee nahi sakta na

Everyone is happy to see Raj happy again.😊 - haa sab ki jaan waapis laut aayee

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really sweet
plz continue soon



thanks very much for enjoying the part

yeh i shall continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello arwaji....aapko ye jaan kar bhut khushi hogi ki maine abhi aapke pichle 4 updates ek saath pade...par mujhe ye jaan kar bhut dukh hua ki maine itne parts miss kar diye ye soch kar ki fic update hi nahin hui😭😭😭😭to agar aap humein khush dekhna chahte ho to humein apni pm list mein shaamil karein😆😆😆

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