~Love Unconfessed ~ Mini FF ~ part 4-page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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~Love Unconfessed ~


Part 1

"Leher !" the familiar voice echoed in her ears again ...She tried to curb her overwhelming emotions but to no avail...Abeer's persistent thoughts had taken over her heart and mind but she couldn't dare to accept what she felt for him....

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Abeer had spent the entire night drowned in Leher's thoughts,reminiscing all the happy moments they had shared in the past few days...
Smiling with each thought as it crossed his mind ,he began to think deeper into it...what was it that he felt for her ?.....
A raw new feeling had started to grow in him...though he had mistaken it to be attraction but later began to feel that it was much more ...
The emotion called love was still unknown to him and he was yet to realize that he was already struck by it...
He sat in his room with eyes swollen due to lack of sleep and the involuntary tears that he had shed last night when Leher had returned his gift and had broken his heart by breaking their friendship...
He wanted her to know how he feels and wished to support her through the tough times ...but with Leher wanting no more of their friendship ,he felt helpless and forlorn of all hope ....

One moment he was frustrated of being snubbed and the next he was intrigued by his own feelings for her ....It hurt him to see her refuse his friendship over an incident he wasn't a part of ... and what bothered him the most was his own state after the rejection....
Why did she matter to him so much ? what was it that he felt for her ? he had no answers at all and the feeling he simply couldn't comprehend ...

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Holi was a pompous affair at Ganeshgunj...Everyone from the neighbourhood except the Vajpayees had got together to celebrate the festival ,the reason for their absence being their recent dispute with the Mathurs...
Leher smiled to see her family together again ,it did seem like a skillful task to bridge the gap that her uncle Kul had caused with his outburst yesterday ,but Brij had mended all broken bonds with his love ...
Leher loved her dad for the simple person he was and equally respected him for his mature and sensible upbringing ....She would never do anything to hurt his feelings or put his values at stake...
She couldn't bear to see her dad hurt ,be it physically or emotionally and any relationship with Abeer could only result in that...
She was confused about the strange and disturbing feeling growing inside of her ...and Abeer's frustration had only added to her worries...She wasn't able to get a grip on her haywire emotions and felt weak and vulnerable when she saw the sorrow in Abeer's eyes...

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you guys must know how I came about with this :)
whatever the outcome Monday may be ,this is my little story about the hurried confession,though I started off with doing a one shot,I couldnt resist making it longer ,here's the first part and I'll post more through the weekend to keep us going
hope u like it ,do let me know !

love
Hina







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Eksie thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fantastic Hina .. Beautifully written! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ Looking forward to reading more through the weekend 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hina,
This is superb... exactly how we would all have liked to see the two reminisce about their feelings for each other.

Go for it...and thanks😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks Eks and Gaayu ,glad u liked
I might just post another part before the episode airs today ,just to see how close we were in our thinking !

cheers
hina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!Hina that was fantastic.Loved reading it ,i hope they show something similar to this in the show also.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rexy34

Wow!Hina that was fantastic.Loved reading it ,i hope they show something similar to this in the show also.



thanks Sam
and I really hope they do
I can't bear to wait any longer !


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hina...wonderful write up!
Would love to read more!
so we actually have a topic for the weekendšŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Super Hina. So beautifully scripted šŸ‘- makes it so romantic and poignant ....sigh.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks very much for the sweet comments guys šŸ¤—
heres part 2
,sorry for the delay !


Part 2:


The fun had begun at the mandir and everyone from the Mathur family was enjoying the colors except Leher ...
She pretended to be a part of the celebration for a while to keep her father happy and later when she couldn't take any more of it ,she moved to a lone corner of the mandir ,away from the hustle...


Abeer was missing from the scene ...
He hadn't come out to join the celebrations as he did every year and his friends found his behaviour very strange ...his sudden aloofness was hard to believe and they wanted their Raunak Singh back in the gang ....


Chutki then came up with a plan along with Shadab and Gaurav and cooked up a story about TN not letting her play Holi with her mohalla friends unless Abeer supervised them ...but Abeer didn't fall for her excuse and bluntly refused again ... Shadab in the end suggested a sure-shot idea that could never go wrong ... He cleverly announced the presence of a certain someone who was bound to attract Abeer's attention and as expected ,he was out on the street within no time .....

Soon his eyes got searching for the person who bothered him immensely ...but Leher kept herself hidden in some corner of the mandir ...
Annoyed with the assumed prank his friends had played to get him out ,he started to march back to the house when Banke stopped him to have some thandai ... and that is when he noticed the Mathurs among the dense colorful crowd ... He went up to them and wished them a happy holi and Brij did the same in return....
They pleasantly shared the same rapport as before...the fight between the two families couldn't change the respect that Abeer had for the Mathurs ,neither did it falter Brij's affection towards Abeer...


"Yeh lo lalla bhaiya, aisi thandai to apko poore Lucknow me kahi nahi milegi " boasted Banke handing him a glass of the special drink while Brij excused himself and left Abeer with his friends ...
Gaurav felt Abeer's restlessness on not finding Leher and signalled Shadab to put his mind to rest...together they turned Abeer towards the mandir and pointed to the corner where Leher by herself .....
He felt a sudden relief take over him but soon a painful thought tugged his heart...
He couldn't but help stare at her for ages till she looked up to meet his eye ...
She gave him a stern and regretful look and unwillingly joined Bittan to evade his questioning look ...
Deeply stung by her repulsive attitude ,he gulped the drink down in a single breath and grabbed another ... His fury made Leher uneasy and she brooded over his frustrated behaviour ....
Soon he disappeared into the hazy colors and she returned to her secluded corner with a heart full of distress and a grief-ridden mind to mull over his actions ...


And the next she felt was a strong pull on her arm which later turned into an interlock of fingers ...
"Abeer ! " she screamed
"kya kar rahe ho ? chodo hamara haath ! "
" chod denge, pehle tum hamare sawalo ka jawab do ...
kehdo ke tum humse pyar nahi karti !....
hum jaante hai Leher ke tum bi humse utna hi pyar karti ho jitna hum tumse karte hai ....
pyar karti ho na tum humse??? ".....



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yes Iknow that is where we're all stuck for now šŸ˜† but I've got my predictions sorted,
will post ithem in the next part :)
cheers
Hina
Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fabulous write up Hina!!!
Abeer does have bhang then 😊
Waiting for the predictions part 😊

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