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Posted: 15 years ago
carpe diem it was very nice and oh so CUTE.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

carpe diem it was very nice and oh so CUTE.



aww thank you for encouraging me that really made me wanna write. i think i will continue doing so. thanks once again and also prnerd for starting this thread
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Posted: 15 years ago

FF she gave us only meager

Portrays were read with much ferver

Where she vanished is speculative

Guesses we made are tentative

Pictures she drew were scenical, Prose she brew was musical

Mien she pouted cynical , Name she shouted Skeptikal

Holi,

The colours,

Aah the colours,

dry colours, wet colours,

Colours flung in the air and smeared on the faces,

Whites worn in anticipation of getting drown in colours,

Wish you all a rainbow coloured Holi.

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Posted: 15 years ago

She was in her teens

her skin dusky but smooth

not beautiful not really

but her hair was long and

fell to her hips in waves

and something there must have been

of sweetness in her

for men would turn and wonder what it was

and the next door neighbour boy

would write her name in the sand

left behind by builders

on which the younger children

would make odd shapes

and call them castles.

Holi was raucous and innocent

people wincing ruefully

at spectacle frames

tinted green for weeks

and the backs of ears

bright red the next school day

proof of serious colours

instead of the pink gulaal

with which older women marked

each other's lined foreheads.

After the first skirmishes

from terraces with loaded balloons

after the pichkaari sprays

after the rushings to and fro

the ambush of willing victims

the dunkings and squealings

they would sit on the grass in loud groups

earthen bowls of rasgullas

moving from hand to hand

coloured fingers staining

the white sweets red and purple

the sun getting warmer

and drying their wet bodies.

And then there would be song

such song

and she would be happy and sing

and the next door neighbour boy

mindful of fathers and aunties

would sit some distance away

but not too far all the same

listening to her voice and

watching her smiling eyes

afraid to let the moment pass

for Holi was one year away again.

Edited by commentator - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
A very happy and colorful HOLI is wished upon all of you.
May God Bless us all as He always would do.
India, witnessing color of happiness and peace.
Nation come alive to enjoy the spirit
A celebration of color- Holi!
An experience of content, harmony and delight.
Oh how much I miss to be in India today.
to perform and remind me of my cultural heritage,
Enjoy Holi where ever you are😃
Gul ne gulshan se gulfam bheja hai,
Sitaro ne aasman se salaam bheja hai,
Mubaraq ho aapko holi ka tyohar,
Humne dil se yeh paigam bheja hai.

I have this posted on another topic as well



Edited by Tulsey - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Today we saw Shravni
pulling Archu by the hand
Archu was weeping
holding Manav's hand
Everyone on the forum
blamed Shravani
Churail they screamed
This ain't funny !
But Archu angers me
She alone is to blame
Anyone and everyone
now behaves with her the same
For she never ever
upheld her self respect
It seemed Manav was above it
A command from God direct !
She believed women were better off
acting as dissolved shakkar
she never believed in the
philosophy of takkar
For Archu Love is greater
than so called self respect
many members said this
that this u don't expect
What always confused me
was what was the problem
can't love be ensconced
in a self respect emblem
Can't we give hundred percent
with our self respect intact
Is it so impossible
this very simple fact ?
Does it make us less woman like
or decrease our feminity
this insistence on self respect
mars our essential serenity ?
Is Self respect the prerogative
only of man
and women only get it it
if he can
Some self respect , some self esteem
is all we ask
But creatives mar the heroines
as if this is an impossible task
If women demand an identity
marraiges will break some say
as it is divorces r on the rise
the Entire sysetem will stray !
So wanting an identity
is equated with Ego
Best is to be a sugar granule
dissolve , be one and flow
For flowing and drifting
is the woman's lot
This sex itself is tainted
Do the best with what you have got
If Shravani was wrong
Archu was even more
Giving her a hard slap
wud not have made her hand sore
For Archu shud know
what she herself lacks
that if someone pushes u
U push right BACK!
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Posted: 15 years ago
There is a sleepy wimp
He is called Satish's dad
His wife dominates him
and likes Ajit the cad
The sleepy wimp is sleepy
most of the time
he really isn't stupid
just very resigned
He advised his wife really well
in the episode today
Our son shud be happy
He said and went on his way
i feel sad for all the wimps
in this show
they hardly have dialogues
as you know
Manohar and Vinod
Satish and his dad
don't know happiness
like Ajit the cad
For Ajit my dears
is ruled by no woman
His mom and sis serve him
as if he's Harry Truman
Ajit is not married
and extremely happy
for he knows what wedlock does
with its vows so sappy
Sensible Ajit
wants to be no wimp
so he has decided
to be content with a pimp
The pimp gets him women
that he uses and discards
his masculinity intact
he plays his cards
Ah Ajit , free Ajit
sigh the wimp gang
Had we done the same
we would have lived with a Bang !

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