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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
@Commentator: Thank you! To be honest I wrote the poem to practice SAT and AP English vocab, so I am delighted that you liked so many parts of it. Debate practice is going well, only 1.5 weeks now until we leave for the state tournament. Until then, most of my time will be dedicated to preparing for it.
@Nikita: Thank you for the poem! I may try to create another one later.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Wowww u guys are amazing

I'm quiet bad in expressing my feelings in words but let me try


I have to write a poem
but I really don't know how.
So maybe I'll just try
with something dumb, like Manav

who doesn't notice his life Archu


But of lately he irritates me
So, I'll write about a PRians,
which is an awesome place to be

Where kool is not cool

When some women is being insulted

And never give up arguing

Until she convinces them

But she is sweet and post a comment

Which makes my dull day to brighten up

She never participates in any contest

Which I request and makes feel bad

But what to do I can't ignore

To love her more and more!!

She is known as Tanyadi

Whom I sweetly call her di

She is the biggest supporter of Archu

No matter who is with her or not

But my di is always with her

She is as sweet as my di

And when ever I remember my di

I do read Tanyadi post

Here is our Fifi

To whom I have hardly spoken

But I think I will thank her

As she made me write a poem

She is sweet and love PRians

Very much that she opened

A thread to a poem on them

Ok here comes Doc

Who argues with Kool

When kool scolds Manav

As Doc thinks he is best!!

Once I made her feel bad

As I did put her in Manav team

But she is amazing in writing FF

This makes me love her more than PR

Who reunited ArMan

And made us happy

I love her as she thinks

Govt Doc are best and still

Thinks we can do any thing

In our country!!

What to say about this adda

Where I found lots of idiots

Tazz whom I first spoke

Is crazy fan of Preet

She is best advertiser

And keeps on going and going

With people about her loved ones

She is a editor of bollycurry

Which I don't believe as

She hardly writes any FF or OS

But she is Best and gives us Pr scoop

By coughing with C's

And never let us give up

Watching PR as sometimes is pathetic

Of all she is someone with whom

I had a blast speaking to her initially

Oh hey meet unknown18

Who is more know as Sid

Whom I thought was a guy

But no Sid is a girl

She is sleeping beauty of our fourm

Who sleeps for 20 hours

In that she finds time for Meet

And writes OS and FF of them

Not for Arman'

She is one who us gyaaan

About not to break trust of parents

So she is always our Sid mata

Did I talk about Piya

Who is our sweetu

She keeps on naming everyone

Most I liked was churail

She is loyal fan of Rajeev

But now her heart beats for Sush

So she has made lots of saut

Whom she likes all expect Churail

Talking about Saut

Her comes Aaarti

Who updates daily about PR

With full colors no matter how was it

She makes amazing av's and siggs

And even fights of Sushant

She hardly talks but makes up in adda

Here is one of our WU of PR

That is our Meeti(mitts)

Who is sweet as her name

But not sweet when Churail

Makes her presence on Arman

Of lately she is busy studying

Which makes us to wait for her

In this I left our Dev team

Guru,Devo,Resham

Who keeps out forum clean

But these 3come here rarely

I just poem by TB

Which was amazing

She makes beautiful creation of ArMan

And she is debater

One more person who writes is

Commentator who is sings of as c

OMG I wrote such a long one sorry if it is bad but it was try I made and was quiet spontaneous

Edited by nishr - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
nishr its is the cutest one . TRuly .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
TB,
Way to go with SAT prep! 😊
If one is to flash at all, why must it be cards ???
C
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Oh Nisha, it's beautiful . It's so lovely , probably one of the sweetest one . Thanks so much baby for your lovely words .
God bless you darling ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
NIsha so so sooooo cutee.... OMG I cant stop smiling after reading it.. Its very cute.... 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
Nisha, it was the sweetest poem 🤗 sweeter than a gulaab jamun😆luv u!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Is it not a world where a certain gap,

Is and should are bridged with Net?

Is it not an age that is numbered fourth,

Rookie and master are amused both.

Here go O'Hara's and Robillards,

The clans are aped by the BT bards

(But here)

Roaches are rapped in rudely rounds,

Songs are sung in sing-song sounds. (aaaoooaa)

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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Actually Kool, Listening to your constant irritation with aaaooo, I was lately thinking of putting this suggestion. Imagine Savita on a lone treasure hunt for Shravni's gold in dead of a night. Back ground music is 'Einlietung' of Strauss's "also sprach Zarthushtra"!

I am sure Savita will forget everything about the gold at the end when Sun is rose.

More on tomorrow.

Samarth.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
hahaha samarth you are so brilliant . honestly i don't hold a candle to u .

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