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Posted: 15 years ago
Fifi Tanya
Duryodhan is the Kaurava prince from Mahabhartha who beckoned Draupadi to sit on his lap
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Posted: 15 years ago
Vandu the royal useless
too deserves a mention
Such a useless character
never used at any junction
But it seems her days
of usage have finally come
Ajit will kidnap her
and she'll be no more mum
What will our Ajit do
will he actually rape
Or is this serial too Pavitra
and he will merely gape
And if Vandu too gets pregnant
with that one day rape
it will be so unbelievable
this jumbled up scrape
Manav will then have
two preggies on his hands
Ajit will of course run
To some foreign land
Last time it was Bangkok
Now perhaps London
Last time he did plastic surgery
This time perhaps mundan
From there he will blackmail
the garage mechanic
I'll reveal to everyone he'll say
That with your sis I clicked
Now what will u do
You have no option
Marry your sis with me
Arrange a grand function
For girls have no future
except a marraige
This is their only purpose
of life and their baggage
They go to heaven only
if they are married
be it a rapist or anyone
by angels they are then carried
So marry Vandu to me
will say Ajit the creep
and Manav will agree
So will Vandu the proverbial sheep
For Archu the wise one has already said
that this is the life of aurat
We r shakkar she said and salt
who cares if we r not at fault
Let us mix in the doodh
and sweeten the rapist's life
Forget all the past oh Vandu
thank your stars your gonna be his WIFE !
Tanyaz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Very good , excellent as always .👍🏼
SweetFifi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
poor vandu..no one deserves that kinda punishment..having to look at ajit the creep face day in and day out...and worse having to sleep on the same bed with him 👎🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

Okay don't laugh as I am trying to do my stinking best and not quite sounds like a poem:

When Savita looks upon those different than her,
she should not be hasty in placing labels or names.
they're all important pieces in the world's game.
Everyone's needed to play, including Archana.

Unstable-minded, and Mentally Ill,
Abnormal, whatever Ajit may be,
Workers, Slackers, Worriers, and the Care-free,
The Young and the Old, in Pavitra Rishta, are all needed still.

Without Varsha, there is no sense in playing.
A game is not fun, without all her family in.
Lokanda's who are giving blows, get the Receivers like Karanjkar's.
Karanjkar's who are Receivers, need the giving out to Lokhande's.

Whether it's by many, or just a couple,
everything is useless if ArMan jordi crumbles.
They both have love for each other that is, by somehow needed.
Otherwise, there's really no such thing and Pavitra Rishta is weeded.

Edited by Tulsey - 15 years ago
Tanyaz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
very good Tulsey . Loved the last para ....👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Tulsey it was very good ! You must contribute more please.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

Tulsey it was very good ! You must contribute more please.

was it really acceptable...I sore in rymes. I will try to add some more.
thanks for the encouragement.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi all...
Missed this post a lot in the 2 days...
Baby I'm addicted
poems keep sprouting in my head
and I rush to india-forum
to share them with everyone
Unfortunately there's so much at hand
But time is ticking away like the sand
In the hourglass of my college festival
as days are coming closer as hell.
so little time to PR nowadays
Quitting either, no way!
So here its me juggling as time flies
Writing this post with sleepy eyes.
Coz as much its important Manav, to think about you,
its important to talk to Tanyaz, Fifi and koolsadhu too
As well as the many friends I've made
And I hope this friendship does not fade.
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Posted: 15 years ago
the show is in the hands of creatives
we are shown the negative
keeping in mind the positive
indulging in so many perspectives

good actors
portraying good, evil, and shady characters
present to us many influencing factors
giving too much to their detractors

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