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Rabzonedge

@rabzonedge

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

so heartrendering it was superb..do write more

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Neha

@choco.bub

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

THANK YOU !!! I'll write more if I think of an idea but this was just a scene it doesnt have a continuation or anything but I might right some on Arbi marrige

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Neha

@choco.bub

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sweet coco
This is so sweet! I love it! Please continue on with this! This storyline is way better than the one we saw on TV! I hope BB comes back and they hire you as the writer!

Gee thnx, lol but idk how the cv feel if a 13 year old gets them fired from their job.

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Oh WOW Neha!!!!

Just the way you write your FF is just too good man!!

I was getting so nervous as i was reading it, wondering what had happened to Bharti.. And the way you wrote about Armaan's emotions was just too real man!! I could really feel it! The pain and fear he was having! But love the way you ended up with Bharti actually being with a dog!😆

Really cute!

Love it and pls continue soon!

Gosh do we have great writers or what in this forum!! Just WONDERFUL piece of work Neha!👏