Tia-Ranveer FF- Do You Remember

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1

Tia pouted picking up the blue shirt she had kept last night to wear to college, but suddenly the shirt seemed to plain, and the jeans seemed too faded.

That was it. Time to look for new clothes.

'sid, tia ko kuch samaj nahi aa raha ki wo kya pehene!', she asked her least interested brother who sat on her bed waiting for her to finish, so he could get over it, and get the money he usually got, for assisting his sisters gruelling dressing spree every morning.

And assisting did not mean just sit there and pass his opinion, assisting meant helping her try on the clothes, find her clothes to wear, and clear up after the mess she made, not to mention no gadgets allowed into her dressing room, 'no sid, tia ke kapde kharab ho jaayenge!', she would say as she ruffled sids hair, and continued with her morning session.

But today, instead of answering instantaneously as he usually did, sid seemed to be fiddling with his pant pocket looking for something.

'kya hua?', tia asked as she settled herself delicately on the bed beside him, not wanting to crush her clothes.

'naaah. Nothing.', he replied, after considering, revising, and calculating his sisters reactions.

'tell me sid, kya hua?'

'nothing, wo actually na, wo mera phone. Im expecting a call and tum ne to....'

'oh tias god! Sid tumhe phone andar na lane ko kaha tha, bahar jaake phone pe baat karne ke liye kisne mana kiya hai?', tia replied cutely as she combed her velvety soft hair, to which sid ran out of the room not bothering to look behind.

He quickly closed his room door and called up yuvi, his best friend, aka tias worst enemy.

'hey bro.... haan bro tia is busy combing her hair so don't worry, she wont know a thing... ya so canteen ke bahaar na....sure bro... by the way jis new student ko hum rag kar rahe hai uska naam kya haii??.... ranveer? Interesting... to kitne baje milna hai bro?... aur nakul? Us ko boloon kya?.. alright dude cya.'

And sid quiently put off the phone, and got ready to climb down the pipes, before tia caught him leaving without clearing up the mess she made. This was important, he had to leave. Or yuvis plan would fail. And that new student was way too goody to be a part of their college.

And all was fair in love and war, and this was WAR!

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Guys lemme know if you liked it...

Will post new post today itself..

Love

sindhya

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG 😲 😲 What a surprise this is ....Sindhiya never knew u can write stories too .....gosh u r full of creativity

and goodness me Ranveer ki ragging 🤣 🤣 🤣 That is something I always wished to see.....Sindhiya awesome start...loved how u changed the story and characters relations with each other.....Please please pretty plesea post the next part ....dying to know what happens to Ranveer 😆 😆

Lolz I wish I had a brother like Sid 😍 😆 😆 Tia treats her bro in the most perfect way possible
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi sindhiya,
great imagination😃 👏Tia & Sid as siblings, most funniest incident dat can happen in remix😆 (Bechara manmeet kukreja!!!😉)
And ranbeer ki ragging,😲 Uffffff. never thought of. waiting 4 ur next post eagerly😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sindhuuu sanjuu
thnksss guysss
me postnggg neww partt..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg this is so beauituful and sucha surprise
loved the into of tia and sid and
sid as tias brother and helping her in her dresses that was really cute
and ranveer ragging dekthe hai kya hota hai i guess ranveer is smart he wont fall pray into it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is really funny sid and tia brother and sister 😆 And what a bro he has to clean the mesh tia makes and try his clothes too 🤣🤣 for money 😆

And yuvi is tia's enemy and sid's friends what a equation and they are going to rag ranveer a new student 😆 And sid climbing down the pipe .😆

This scene was really fun to read do update it , i want to know about ranveer ragging.😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Sindhya...
awesome work....Ranveer ki ragging...cant wait for it...please please post the next part....dying to read it...i wanna see how will Ranveer deal with the ragging....

good job....👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it Sindhya - esp how you made tia and sid bro and sis - i can just imagine it. Bechara Sid, having to clean up after Tia - perfect touch yaar! 😆👏 Really liked the set-up and it's made me wanna read more. You have a great way of writing - it flows so beautifully and truly it's like reading something by a professional writer. 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey awesome start!!!! its good to c a tr ff after a loooooooooooooooooooooooooong tym. but plz dont leave it half way thru !!!!! u write amazingly well!!!! xcited to ranveer getting ragged but i dont think ranveer is such an easy catch!!!! continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sindhya....

since yesterday ive been watching tia and ranveer scenes and im totally in love with the couple!! so plz add me 2 ur pm list!!!! heheheh
this ff seems cool...

happy new year !!!

xxx

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