A chance at forever! epilogue pg 68 / 20-6

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aww Munee Chapter 16 is so good. at first i was like meh Natalie's boring convo but now i think its necessary for Shabbir to properly say goodbye for his 6 month long girlfriend. it was nice of her to advise shabbir on how to deal with things but wah, I love my sasuma! i was laughing most of the time...her initial lil convo with anjali is hilarious. Mrs Ahluwalia is wonderful. the whole convo between shabir and his mom is awesome. 👏 uve written it so well. i didnt quite like shabir marrying anjali...that soon, but yea Mabel A rocked it. hmm so lets ee kaise shabir apni maa ko manalega...or may be my saas herself will come to know of Shabbir's loev for his bride.

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i must be the worst reader

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of ur FFs Munee...u know why!!!!

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part 17

well Supriya annoyed me big time and it kinda stayed with me throught out the read. didnt like Mabel A either...by the time her son came back home to his house sans his wife n child she is all so cool...saying that she cant stay angry with her son for very long...i dont like my saas.

your writing, top notch asuaully.

i love shabbir-sanaya moments the most in this FF and they were missing here...didnt like it that much but ya...the story has to move on.....

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part 18

very nice update Munee. everything had been so detailedly described asusually..i mean the beach, abt shabbir's feelings etc etc..u do it the best!!! ofcourse. it has to be you! acha so Karan is Anjali's cousin....haha that was good. Shabir mustve given the watchman a bloody nose...haha just for me to have fun imagining it..

damn Supriya im still angry with her....id be even more angrier if she lies to the police...Mr Ahluwalia...is so sweet. bechara shawalia...broke down in tears in his father's arms..aww that was so good to imagine. great job asusual Munee...

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Munee i finished my exams!!!

ok part 19./ i thought i reda it but no i didnt read it until now. it was gooooood. Go Karan!!!! ive always hated Supriya so much bhaag gayi toh bhaag gayi. i hope she doesnt come in the next update. uve chosen a nice name for Shabbir's sister. brilliantly written as always. Missed Sanaya in thsi update.

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part 20.

So that Supriya chick purposely did that~~~ she put shabbir through all the pain, for what? he always loved her!! why does he need to realize how important Anjali is to him....? he already know sit its Supriya who didnt know!!!!!

and how the heck did i miss that info the last time i read this update??? actually i think i know how...but i wont say it,....

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Epilogue:

aww that was so loving of Shabbir towrds Sanaya. that he didnt want children of his blood for a while...

very happy for Anjali. finally the make up girl has a great job at her father's company. lovely family...lovely ending Munee.

im sorry one agin i took so long to finish reading this FF. it was interesting in the beginning but i still am not that happy about how the marriage took place and all and i kinda lost interest in the story line...anyways im glad i read it all, not for the story (coz i read the epilogue much before than the rest of the parts) but for ur writing.

though im not a fan of the FF, i must say the way u related shabbir's professional life...his co stars his chemistry with them....his shootings etc etc that was quite interestingly written. the thing i enjoyed the most in this FF is Shabbir's moments with baby Sanaya.

The man sure deserves an FF on him.....and i miss him. but im getting used to it. guess what, these days Gaurav Chopra is entertaining me~~~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#558

Ha the gist is u found it as reckless as i did writing it. But the thing with love is sweetheart that it can happen in a snap with anyone. And if u know the person u love is the one u want u pretty much stumble in on actions marriage being a primary one. I know the wedding was rushed but anyone in Shabbir's shoes would've done the same. Married Anjali asap cuz he loved her and wanted her in his life. I'm not gonna defend my writing a writer knows a shoddy piece of literature from a good one. While writing this I was half tempted to abandon it but my sense of responsibility nagged me continually and so I succumbed. My heart was not in it but I must thank you for being such a loyal reader. Thanks El I owe u so much.