FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated

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Nima

@nims23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

ohh god..it ws soo painful update..it reminds me DV episodes..in which jayvardhan n agni tortured veer...n that ice scene... when my nonu worked continuously for so many hours... 😭

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maheen malik

@sweet_1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#162

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV-FANNAH

Veer & Priya

VEER'S CRITICAL CONDITION:

It was evening, when Priya comes to know that Veer is in the palace' lock up, she becomes anxious to meet him. But she was waiting her father to go as he was standing beside the pillar. The moment Someshwar was out of sight, she runs towards the prison as fast as possible, to save her love. She reaches near the prison, but sees a figure of a man standing infront of the prison door. He was Dharam, with the keys of the lock up. Priya was shocked;

Dharam: Priya, what a pleasant surprise? (says with a cunning smile & he acts like he doesn't know the reason, why she was there) by the way what are you doing here?

Priya: Dharam, open the door, I want to go inside.

Dharam: For whom? ... ... oh .. for Veer. Priya, I would have loved to open this door but, you see your father has told me not to open this door till morning. And one more thing, it will be useless to go inside because your Veer is half dead, he has been cruelly beaten, do you know by whom? by me. So better luck next time.

Priya: Please Dharam, Veer needs me, my heart knows that he ... he needs me, I beg you open the door. (says while crying)

Dharam: Ok you are begging infront of me so much then I will open the door but... on one condition.

Priya: I can do anything. (replies in anxiety)

Dharam: Anything? (asks her with raised eye-brows) Ok then, kneel down touch my feet & say that I won & your love lost, say that you don't have the power to defend your love & after Veer completely dies you will remain a faithful servant to me. Come on.

Priya reluctantly kneels down & says all those sentences which Dharam told her, but as she was about to complete her sentence, Dharam was called by Someshwar. Dharam gives i-am-so-sorry look to her & goes from there while playing with the keys.

Priya: DHAAARAAAMM!!! COME BACK!!! VEER NEEDS ME ... VEER NEEDS ME.. & I LOVE HIM... (She shouts at the top of her voice)

At night, when everyone was sleeping, Priya was lying on her bed thinking of how to get the keys from Dharam. She gets out of her bed , walks to Dharam's room. She opens the door carefully & starts searching for the keys, she sees the keys on the side table. She quickly grabs them & runs towards the lock up. She reaches there & unlocks the door.

When she enters the room, it was dark only some rays of moonlight could be seen. She was desperately in search of Veer. As she comes a little further, she collapses with a pole. When she looks harder, she sees Veer, still kneeled down on the floor with his hands & feet tied with metal chain & bleeding from all parts. She bursts out crying & hugs him, she opens the hands & feet. Veer falls down. Priya manages to find a piece of wet cloth to wipe Veer's blood. She puts his head in her laps & starts wiping his blood all over his face;

Priya: Get up Veer, look, your Priya has come to save you. Get up. (Veer doesn't reply he was unconscious.She just stares at him & cries by seeing his condition She remembers Veer's words " REMEMBER ONE THING PRIYA THAT THE COURSE OF TRUE LOVE IS NEVER SMOOTH".)

She wipes her tears & decides to write a letter to Rahul in which she narrates everything & tells him to take Veer back without wasting time.

On getting the letter Rahul comes with his companions & takes Veer back. But he stops & turns;

Rahul: My friend, had to pay a very heavy price for his love. You royal people don't care of the poor people like us. You only care about yourself. Its only your fault. If something happened to Veer I'll not forgive you. (He leaves)

In the morning, Veer is taken to the hospital;

Doc: He is in a critical shape, he needs to be operated as soon as possible or he'll die. (All are shocked. After a surgery of 2 hrs doc.comes out of operation theatre.) He is out of danger, but right now he is unconscious & not in a position to get up. The wounds are very deep. There has been a large blood loss in his body due to heavy injury, give him maximum fluid. He needs a complete bed rest of half a month. Then I'll tell you further what to do. Till then, take special care of him.

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Megha

@meghaparti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

Thanks for the update...ohhh that was a painful update 2 sweetie...I wish veer returns soon & punishes dharam for his deeds & make Someshwar realise how wrong he was about small people!😳😭 😉 👏⭐️

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 16 years ago

#164

What painful update but u written it beautifully.U shown priya's pain very well.Dharam is so cruel .He pay for it soon.

Thanks, ki Rahul save him from there.Now, hope veer will returns soon and take priya away from there and save her love.

Pls post next part soon dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 years ago

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Rashi

@Rash2cool

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Posted: 16 years ago

#165

lubly update....
please post next update soon 😔
veer is serious..can't take it 😔

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sarika

@kiran99

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Posted: 16 years ago

#166

lovly update wating for ur next part

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maheen malik

@sweet_1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#167

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV- FANNAH

Veer & Priya

DHARAM'S TRUTH GETS REVEALED (ii):

The same day, in the kingdom of Dehli, Someshwar was sitting on his throne & was talking to Dharam, with a furious expression on his face;

Someshwar: I don't understand, that how did Veer get out of the prison?

Dharam: I don't know uncle.

Someshwar: What do you mean, you don't know? I gave you the keys so that you will take care of them, but you lost them. Amazing, just amazing!

Dharam: I am sorry uncle, I kept the keys on my side table before I went to bed. I don't know who came to my room to get the keys.

Someshwar: What do you mean by sorry? because of your silly mistake, Veer has run-away.

Dharam: The most important thing to think about is, that how did Veer manage to run-away from the prison? because when I left him, he was cruelly beaten. He was not even able to get up from his place.

Someshwar: What do you mean to say?

Dharam: I mean to say that maybe someone has helped Veer to escape from here?

Someshwar: But whom?

Dharam: Come on uncle, don't you know? your daughter Priya.

Someshwar: What? but how can you say that?

Dharam: Last night Priya came to the prison to get the keys but I refused to give her the keys maybe she took the keys from my room. Both of us know that Priya loves Veer & she can go to any extend to free him. So she is the one who freed Veer from the prison.

As both of them were talking, Someshwar sees her daughter coming out of her room, from upstairs. He calls Priya;

Someshwar: Priya, Dharam told me that you helped Veer to escape from the prison, is this true?

Priya: Yes.

Someshwar: Why did you do this? I am warning you, that you can get punished from me, for this brash act of yours.

Priya: I did the right thing, & I don't have any regrets. Now, no matter what happens, any punishment will not affect me, no matter how severe it is. I love Veer & I'll defend him till my last drop of blood.

Someshwar stares at her daughter furiously;

Someshwar: Stop this stubbornness.

Priya: It is not my stubbornness, it is my challenge.

Someshwar: Oh so you are challenging me! ok now I have decided that you will marry Dharam. And your marriage preparations will be started from tomorrow. That is final. (Priya was speechless)

After Someshwar was gone Dharam gives a cunning smile to Priya;

Dharam: You lost Priya.

Priya: We'll see who wins & who loses.

15 days pass in all arrangements. The next day was marriage ceremony but the same day Dharam's minister comes & tells the truth aswell as the evidences about Dharam. Someshwar was furious & sorry for what he did to her daughter's life. He decided to trap Dharam. At night Dharam arrives at the kingdom wearing groom's dress. But he was confused by seeing the empty hall. Someshwar arrives;

Someshwar: Welcome Dharam.

Dharam: Thanks uncle.(He looks here & there.) whats the matter, no one is here I mean you haven't invited anybody.

Someshwar gives him a punch;

Someshwar: You cheat, you liar, you betrayed me,your minister told me each & everything about you. I trusted you blindly & ignored my daughter. She cried & I didn't care of her. You destroyed my daughter's life. (Someshwar beats him cruelly & orders his guards to throw him out)

Edited by sweet_1 - 16 years ago

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Nima

@nims23

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#168

woww.....
dharam's truth is revealed....thank god.....
nice update... 😊

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#169

What an update dear👏.It's superb,wonderful and brilliant update👏.Dharam's truth reavels😊.Oh that's very good😊.Now, Someshwar realise his mistakes😊😊.Oh minister bahut acche hain, jisne saare proof de dia Someshwar ko😳.

Post next part soon dear😊.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 years ago