FF DV-FANNAH(VEER PRIYA)Part 26 updated

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

i think this forum might be locked soon so u must shift ur ff to ff section

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#172

Thanks for the lovely update..⭐️wah Someshwar khdoos papa become a gud papa😃Cannot wait for veer to return noe to priya & they getting married!

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maheen malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#173

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV - FANNAH

Veer & Priya

VEER GETS RECOVERED - PRIYA WRITES LETTER TO VEER:

During the 15 days, Veer gradually recovers from his injury through regular therapy. Now Veer was able to walk with a stick.

The doctor applies bandages on Veer's wounds. His left fore arm & tendon gets stitched, which was really painful for him. It was covered by bandage & his arm was at right angle supported by a strab in his neck.

A drip was inserted on his right wrist & his hand was covered with bandage plus a small piece of cotton was placed on the right side of his forehead covered by a first aid plast. Some marks of injury were still seen on his neck, face & arms.

Winter starts. After all his therapy, Veer was sitting inside his room liting the woods on fire, & thinking of his lady love. Just then, Rahul enters;

Rahul: What are you thinking Veer?

Veer: About Priya. (Rahul becomes angry on listening Priya's name)

Rahul: You are still thinking about her. She is the one because of whom you are in this condition today. (Veer becomes furious)

Veer: Stop blaming her for everything! you cannot deny the fact that because of her, today I am alive. If she had'nt come to save me from that prison, I would have been dead. She is the one who saved me. She got trapped in her father's evil plans.

Rahul: But Veer, you got trapped because of her.

Veer: She is not to be blamed. It was my own decision to go over there, & I can do anything for her.

Rahul: Veer, relax, I am just trying to...(without listening to Rahul, Veer goes outside.)

On the other hand, Priya was sitting on her bed, thinking of Veer's condition. Whenever she closes her eyes Veer's face covered with blood comes infront of her. She cries.

Tears also come in Veer's eyes while sitting on a bench, when thinks of Priya.(I found a song on this situation);

tere bina
tere bina

tere bina
tere bina lagta nahi mera jiya
ab tere siva chale meri saanse na re na
tere bina
tere bina lagta nahi mera jiya
ab tere siva chale meri saanse na re na

mere humsafar phiru darbadar
mere humsafar phiru darbadar
shaamo seher dhoonde tujhko nazar

tere bina
tere bina lagta nahi mera jiya
ab tere siva chale meri saanse na re na
tere bina
tere bina lagta nahi mera jiya
ab tere siva chale meri saanse na re na

tere bina
tere bina
ek pal ki bhi judaai ab sahi jaati nahi
marna jo chaahun agar to maut bhi aati nahi
ho ek pal ki bhi judaai ab sahi jaati nahi
marna jo chaahun agar to maut bhi aati nahi
har dua meri lagti be asar
shaamo seher dhoonde tujhko nazar

tere bina
tere bina
na tamanna mujhko teri
na tere sansaar ki
aye khuda dikhla de mujhko ek jhalak mere yaar ki
na tamanna mujhko teri
na tere sansaar ki
aye khuda dikhla de mujhko ek jhalak mere yaar ki

is zameen par aasmaan par
shaamo seher dhoonde tujhko nazar
tere bina
tere bina lagta nahi mera jiya
ab tere siva chale meri saanse na re na
tere bina
tere bina lagta nahi mera jiya
ab tere siva chale meri saanse na re na

Priya decides to write a letter to Veer;

Veer,

You don't know that how much I was worried for you in these 15 days. Day & night I prayed for your speedy recovery. I was dieing to see you but I couldn't because of my marriage arrangements with Dharam. I just prayed to GOD, that Dharam truth should be revealed as soon as possible. Fortunately, Dharam's truth came infront of my father, the day I was getting married. But still I am not relieved, because I want to meet you Veer, I...I want to talk to you. I missed you like hell. I cannot live without you. Please Veer come quickly.

Priya.

In the village, a man comes with a letter in his hand;

Man: A letter has come for you Veer. (Veer snatches the letter & reads it. After reading the letter, Veer decides to go to the palace at once. But Rahul stops him);

Rahul: Where are you going?

Veer: I am going to meet Priya. She needs me.

Rahul: And we need you.You are'nt going anywhere may be this is her another trick to trap you.

Veer: JUST SHUT UP! I HAD ENOUGH OF YOUR BULLSHIT, BUT NOW ENOUGH IS ENOUGH! I AM GOING TO MEET HER & THAT IS FINAL!

(Rahul was shocked. As he sees Veer talking to him in this tone for the first time)

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#174

Wonderful update👏.Veer is almost fit and fine😊.Priya is very caring and tensed for veer😊 .

Rahul is worried for veer and loves him very much, but he should understand priya and her condition also😊.

Post next part soon😳.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 years ago

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priya

@-.Priya.-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#175

wow drear

wonderful update

thank u sooo much for updating on my req

i think ull hv to pm other readers cz they might not knw about d link

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#176

wow lovely dear thanks for the update..really liked the way veer gave off to rahull hope next part is full of romance & their meeting😳😃 😉 😆 👏⭐️

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maheen malik

@sweet_1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#177

DHARAMVEER

Fan-Fiction DV - FANNAH

Veer & Priya

Veer Goes To Meet Priya In Palace:

Veer gets ready & goes to the palace to meet his lady love. He was wearing dark blue jeans with a V-neck half sleeve shirt & a dark maroon zip jacket. He was having mixed feelings, anxiety, excitement, happiness & tension etc.

Although it was difficult for him to walk with the stick & bandaged fore-arm & it was causing him extreme pain but he continues his journey.

In the palace, Priya was sitting infront of temple with joined hands. She was crying;

Priya: Oh God! my Veer is in a critical condition. Why are you doing all this only to my Veer? He did not harm anyone. You know that how much we both love eachother, then why you don't want us to be united? why are you punishing us? If anything happened to my Veer I will forgive neither you nor myself. I will finish myself.

(Priya gets up, goes inside her bed chamber & sits on the bed. Tears were still rolling down her cheeks. She thinks of Veer & closes her eyes, & sees the flashback of Veer's face covered with blood. She quickly opens her eyes & sees a sharp knife on a table. She walks towards the table & lifts the knife & starts to carve something on her fore-arm. Drops of blood were seen while she was carving. She almost screamed in extreme pain. She actually carves VEER's name.)

On the other hand, Veer was on his way to the palace. After a few minutes, he reaches the palace. He sees guards with weapons in the front door, so he decides to choose a shortcut which was leading to Priya's bedroom.

Priya thinks: Veer, where are you, I want to talk to you, I want to see you even if it is just a glance of yours. Please Veer your Priya needs you. (She closes her eyes in helplessness.) Suddenly, Veer enters the room;

Veer: Priya!!! (Priya opens her eyes. She feels that some familiar voice has called out her name. She turns & sees Veer standing infront of her. She wasn't believing her eyes. She stands up & runs towards Veer & hugs him tightly & cries, clutching his jacket & shirt in her fist. Veer was about to fall back but he manages to maintain his position. He hugs her back & passes his hand lovingly through her soft, long hair. She closes her eyes.)

Both of them didn't know that for how long they were freezed in their positions. After a gap of 10 to 20 seconds. Veer smiles & says calmly;

Veer: Priya, I am here now, don't worry. ( Priya opens her eyes & abruptly moves apart from him. Veer looks at her confusingly.)

Priya: You have faced enough trouble because of me. But now I don't want you to be in danger again. It is all my fault, I am to be blamed for your condition.( Says while crying)

Veer: Calm down Priya... just calm down. It is certainly not your fault, you got trapped in your father's tricks. As far as I am concerned, Priya....till such time I don't get you out of this mess, I will not go anywhere leaving you alone in this hell.

Priya: But Veer...

Veer: (He puts hand on her cheek)The biggest hinderance b/w our love is gone, Dharam is gone. And as far as your father is concerned, I'll talk to him & I am sure that he will agree & he'll not destroy your life once again. (He suddenly sees the wound of Priya, Veer becomes shocked) What is this Priya? How did this happen? (He makes her sit on the bed & kneels down) who did this?

Priya: I did this.

Veer: But why?

Priya: For you.

Veer: For me. Do you realize that how deep this wound is?

Priya: This wound is nothing infront of your wounds. (Veer gets a wet piece of cloth & wipes her blood, & she just stares at him that how much he loves her.)

Veer: I have to leave now, take care of yourself.(He was about to leave when she holds his hand. Veer comes closer to her & kisses on her forehead. Unable to control herself Priya hugs him again.& he leaves)

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#178

Thanks for the lovely update dear good job..Wow priya & veer ka milan...cant wait for their marriage now!😳😃😉👏⭐️

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393507

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Posted: 16 years ago

#179

Wonderful update👏.Veer is almost fit and fine😊

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#180

Wonderful, brilliant update.u written the emotion of Priya very well and her love for veer.She loves him too much and veer also.Both , take pain for each other.Lovely update.Thanks dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 years ago