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Posted: 16 years ago
hey just read the missing parts really nice....hate bani's in law...jai still loves bani...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenaKhan

hey just read the missing parts really nice....hate bani's in law...jai still loves bani...



Thanks for reading..Bani's in -laws are the symbol of Indian double standard and matter of convenience..that's all..





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Posted: 15 years ago
Dear friends ,I was injured but busy during last 3 months..sorry for discontinuing the fiction. Now I have plenty of time for my fics..so..the fics will be updated time to time.




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PART 22

LONDON MET MUMBAI


"Ranveer Riyaaz Khan...interesting .."..

Jai ki is baat ka jawab Ranveer ne kuchh is tarha dia.."Mr.Sisodia..there is nothing interesting..surname Khan hai..toh zaahir hai mere Father ek Muslim hain..aur Ranveer naam..meri Mother ka dia hua hai..she was from a Hindu family."

Jai ne muskura kar kaha.."So..Father Muslim..Mother Hindu..what about you Mr.Khan?Aap kyaa hain?"

Ranveer ne kaha ,"I am a British Indian."

Jai--Impressive indeed Mr.Khan..but I am so surprised Mr.Khan..k London ka basa basaya business chhod kar aap India me..

Ranveer--Maine apna business chhoda nahi hai Mr.Sisodia..bas..usko wind up kar k India me settle hona chaahta hoon.


Jai--Yehan ek British Indian ko business karne k lia mere jaise proper Indian Businessman ki zaroorat kaise padi?I mean..Maharashtra Government khud aap ko back up de sakti hai..agar aap chaahe toh..after all you are a British Indian Business Magnet..


Ranveer--Yes..you are right..main bhi bewakoofon ki tarha aapke saath waqt barbad kar raha hoon..well..I must leave now..


Jai--Relax..aap toh bura maan gaye..Mr.Khan..yehan ka environment aisa hai..aapka imtehaan legi..well..humen aapke saath kaam kar k khushi hogi..welcome to the group..

Ranveer--Thank you..

Jai--Yehan aap kahan thahre hain?

Ranveer--Filhaal ..Taj me..accomodation ka intezam hote hi shift hona hai..

Jai--Please don't mind Ranveer..jab tak aapka ghar taiyyar nahi ho jaata..aap mere kisi bhi ek makaan me reh sakte hain..naukar ka intezam ho jaayega..

Ranveer--No thanks Mr.Sisodia..

Jai--Main kuchh nahi sunna chaahta ..we are now business partners..

Ranveer--Mr.Sisodia.,.

Jai--Please.,.I insist..

Ranveer--Well..aapka bunglow kitna bada hai?

Jai--Matlab?

Ranveer--Usme ek room mujhe mil sakta hai?Kuchh maheeno k lia..jab tak main apna bunglow kharid na loon..

Jai--You are joking..

Ranveer--Mazak ki shuruat kisne ki Mr.Sisodia?


Jai--Well..maine socha tha aap mazak kar rahe hain..but ab serious ban gaya hai maamla..fine..infact..main bhi yehi chaahta tha..k aap ko apne ghar le jaaoon..

Ranveer--Aap k gharwale kuchh nahi kahenge?

Jai--Nahi..

Ranveer--Aapki Wife?

Jai--Woh filhaal Mumbai se baahar hain..jab lautegi..main samjha doonga usko..main shaam ko car bhej doonga Taj Hotel..aap tab tak check out kar lijiyega..



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"Munna..ek anjaan aadmi ko kaise ghar pe laa sakta hai tu?Tere saath kaam karega..theek hai..par Bani ka pata nahi chal raha hai..baahar k logon ko iska pata chalna..yeh tujhe theek lag raha hai?"

Mausi bakbak kie jaa rahi thi..aur Jai naukraon ko instructions de raha tha..k kis tarha Ranveer k lia kamra sajana hai..Lunch break me ghar aa kar Jai waapas nahi gaya Office..Ranveer k swaagat k lia ghar pe rook gaya..

"Munna..kuchh sun bhi raha hai?Aur yeh sab kaam ki dekh rekh tu kyun kar raha hai?" ..Mausi ab vaakei me gussa ho gayi thi.

Jai--Toh kyaa karoon?Ghar pe mehmaan aanewala hai..yeh sab toh ghar ki Bahu dekhti hai..agar woh is waqt ghar pe nahi hai..toh zimmedari meri banti hai na?

Mausi--Munna..tujhe ho kyaa gaya hai?

Jai--Toh kyaa karoon?Aap bataiye..aap ko samajh me nahi aati baat?Mujhe yeh ghar ab kaatne ko daurta hai..Bani nahi hai..aap aur main..Ranveer aayega..kuchh din humare saath rahega..khaalipan nahi rahega..tab tak Bani bhi waapas aa jaayegi..


Mausi--Par yeh Ranveer..is ladke k baare me tu jaanta hi kitna hai?

Jai--Mausi..insaan ko pehchaanne k lia ek hi mulakat kaafi hoti hai..aaj pehli baar aamne saamne mila hoon..par usse mil kar laga k mera bahut apna hai yeh ladka..bahut kareeb hai mere..ladka achha hai..aur chor daku nahi hai..London me iska bahut bada business hai..India me shift hona chaahta hai..

Mausi--Munna..tu paagal ho gaya hai kya?Bani nahi hai ghar pe..khalipan bharne k lia.. yeh ladka..Jai..tujhe hosh bhi hai?Chal maan lia..yeh aayega..par ek na ek din uska ghar taiyyar hoga..tab?


Jai--Tab Bani hogi..

Mausi--Bani ko agar aana hota..toh woh jaati hi kyun?


Jai--Mausi..Bani jab chali gayi thi..pahle..tab bhi aapne yeh kaha tha..par woh waapas aai na..?Is baar bhi aayegi..kyunki jo hua..meri ghalati nahi thi..haan woh waqt aisa tha.. haalaat kuchh aise the..jo gunah maine kia nahi..main uski saza bhugatne ko taiyyar bhi nahi..


Mausi--Aisi kaunsi baat hai..Munna..jo toh mujhse keh nahi sakta?


Jai--Jo hai aapke saamne hain..come on..mujhe bahut kaam hai..

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Jaijeet Sisodia..yeh naam Ranveer sun chuka hai..kai baar..peechhle kai saalon me..apne Dad se is Sisodia Parivar k baare me jitna kuchh suna hai Ranveer ne..usse yehi pata lagta hai..k pahle darje k ghamandi aur matlabparast log hain..par Jaijeet k baare me alag se kuchh pata nahi kar paaya Ranveer.Aur Bani se jitna pata chala by chance..usse toh yeh lagta hai k Bani ko mohabbat bhi nahi hai..naa hi nafrat hai is admi se..par jo hai..woh bahut gehra hai..Bani se rubaroo kuchh nahi poochha Ranveer ne..par apne Dad se jo suna..usse Ranveer ne ek andaza toh lagaya..pure maamle Jai ki baat nahi aati..matlab.. Maa Baap ne rishta tai kia..Jai ne chup chaap shaadi ki..aur jab Bani ko nikala gaya Sisodia House se..tab Jai nahi tha..in fact uske baad Jai kab waapas aaya..is baat ka koi pata nahi..hairani is baat ki hai k Jai itne saal kyaa kar raha tha?Aur us waqt woh us tarha ghayab kyun ho gaya tha?Yeh bahut si baatein hain..jinhe jaanna zaroori hai.Jaijeet
Sisodia kaisa insaan hai..yeh jaanne ka mauka usse mil kar hi milega..

London me reh kar Ranveer ne Jaijeet Sisodia k baare me kaafi kuchh pata lagaya tha..


Teen saal pahle jab Jaijeet Sisodia New York gaya tha,Ranveer Riyaaz Khan bhi New York me hi tha,..Peter Morgan k New York Branch k saath Sisodia Groups ki ek deal final hui thi..Wall Street Journal me is baat ki charcha bhi hui..in fact US Based Indians ne is joint venture k kaafi shares par invest bhi kie the..Jaijeet Sisodia k interviews bhi lie gaye
..news papers aur news channels par bhi woh interview deliver kie gaye.


Ek Indian Businessman..jisne tees saal k umar me BSE aur NSE k sensex par uchhaal laa di..jab k Sisodia Empires ko National Level par exposure issi Jaijeet ne dilvai..usne Peter Morgan jaisi Company k saath yeh deal final ki..kum badi baat nahi thi yeh..

Upar se Jaijeet Sisodia single tha..American Indian Hindu Families toh the hi..us business summit me aaye Indian origin k bahut se log the..jo ek business marriage k zarie Sisodia Empires k saath humesha k lia rishta jodna chaahte the.Indian Community me Jaijeet Sisodia bahut hi interesting topic hua karta tha..


Ranveer is Jaijeet naam ki paheli ko suljha nahi paa raha tha..Ranveer London toh waapas aa gaya..par..kahi na kahi..woh Jaijeet ko apne dil se nikaal nahi paaya.Bani se usne is baare me koi baat nahi ki.Bani jab India gayi..tab Ranveer ko yeh khayaal toh aaya tha...k Bani Jaijeet se milegi zaroor..par..Ranveer ne is baat ko ehmiat nahi di.Lekin jab magazine me Jaijeet Sisodia ki shaadi ki baat chhapi..aur Mrs.Jaijeet Sisodia k roop me Bani ki tasveer dekhi Ranveer ne..tab uska dimaag khanka..usko laga..doodh ka doodh aur pani ka pani hona chahie.


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Ranveer ka khubsurat chehra aur uski muskurahat dekh kar Mausi khud pighal gayi.. Ranveer ko bahut pyaar se apne paas bithaya..Ranveer ghar ko dekh raha tha..achanak Ranveer ne poochha ,"Mrs.Sisodia..I mean..aapki Bahu nazar nahi aa rahi hain?"

Mausi samajh nahi paai k kyaa jawab de..fir unhone kaha ,"Woh..kaam k silsile me baahar gayi hai..Vakil hai Bahu..toh uska toh aana jaana rehta hi hai is shaher se us shaher..Bani bahut pyaari hai..Bani..matlab meri Bahu..Jai toh ek pal k lia usko nazron se door nahi kar sakta..par Bahu ko jaana padta hai..apne kaam k lia.."

Ranveer--Ohh..bahut pyaar karte hain..

Mausi--Haan bilkul..aur aaj kal..main bhi pareshan hoon..Bahu ko bachcha hone wala hai..aisi haalat me itni bhaag daur theek bhi nahi..



Ranveer k saath baatein karte karte Mausi ko waqt ka hosh hi nahi raha..

Jai apne kamre me aaya tha..kuchh zaroori kaam tha..achanak se..kamre k land line ka phone baja..


"Hello.."

Koi jawab nahi..

Jai ne fir se kaha ,"HELLO"..

Is baar bhi koi jawab nahi..

Jai ko kyaa laga..usne kaha.."Bani..sahi pehchana na maine?"

Bani k saanson ko Jai sun raha tha..Jai ne kaha ,"Bani..tum is tarha chali gayi..kyun?Fir se kyun chali gayi?Pahle jo hua tha..Bani..I can explain..agar tum yeh sochti ho k us waqt main kaayaron ki tarha muh chhupa k baitha tha Delhi me..ghalat sochti ho...jo hua..usme mera koi dosh nahi tha..main tumse contact nahi kar paaya.Bani,meri majboori thi kuchh ..Bani..ek baar puri baat keh leti..aur mujhe sab kuchh kahne ka mauka deti..is tarha kyun chali gayi?"

"Mera tumhara ek saath rehna mumkin nahi...Victor.."..roti hui awaz me Bani ne kaha ..

Jai ne kaha ,"Namumkin nahi hai Bani..Bani..jin haalaaton me humara rishta joda gaya.. haan..main maanta hoon..mere Mata Pita ka mann saaf nahi tha..unka swarth tha..par yakeen maano tum..main..aur mera pyaar..dono sachche the..meri niyat me koi khot nahi thi Bani..meri mohabbat jhooti nahi thi Bani..maine humesha tumse pyaar kia hai..aur tumhi se pyaar karta rahoonga.."


"Victor..please..leave me alone.."

Jai ne jawab dia.."Bani..zindagi sab ko dobara mauka nahi deti..yeh humare kismat me tha k hum mile..issi lia..hum mile..Bani..aaj jab sab kuchh theek ho sakta hai..toh kyun yeh bachpana kar rahi ho..aur agar narazgi mujhse hai toh mujhe saza do...khud ko takleef mat do..please..I beg you..Bani..zindagi ka koi bharosa nahi hai Bani..please..laut aao.. jaisa tum chaahogi ..waisa hoga..I promise..is baar aisa hi hoga..is baar koi takleef nahi hogi..Bani..please....ek minute..."

Jai ne peechhe dekha..Ranveer khada tha.."Mr.Sisodia..raat k 10:30 baj chuke hain.. Mausijee bula rahi hain..dinner k lia.."

Jai--Yes..I am coming..you carry on..

Ranveer chala gaya..Jai ne kaha ,"Hello..Bani..haan..woh ghar pe..Hello.. helloooooo.. Bani..Bani....!!"

Phone kat chuka tha.."Munnaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh.."..Mausi bula rahi hai..bahut zor se..Jai ko neeche jaana pada..


Table par bahut se item saje hue the..

Ranveer--Mausijee..main kal hi yehan se nahi jaa raha hoon..kuchh din yehi rahoonga.. so..aap ek ek kar k..roz pakaiye..aur khilaiye..ek din me main itna nahi khaa sakta...

Shobhna--Beta...is umar me nahi khaaoge toh kyaa karoge?Meri umar me kuchh khaa nahi paaoge..Doctor log sar khaate hain clinic me..aur Munna ghar pe chaukidari karta hai..


Ranveer--Waise..mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai..abhi bhi..dopaher ko Mr.Sisodia k office me usne mila..aur ab unhike ghar me baith kar ..unke saath khana khaa raha hoon..life is so uncertain..isn't it Mr.Sisodia?

Jai--Haan..Ranveer..zindagi ka koi bharosa nahi..har pal badalti rehti hai..kab kaunsa rookh le..pata hi nahi chalta..hum yeh baat jaante hain..par asal waqt par yeh baat bhool jaate hain..

Ranveer--Aap toh serious ho gaye..

Jai--Nahi..sach baat hai..agar sab log is baat ko samajh le..toh duniya aur bhi haseen hoti..aur zindagi aur bhi aasaan..

Ranveer--Anyways..congratulations..Mausijee se pata chala..that you are going to be a Father..kyaa socha hai aapne?Beta hoga Beti?

Mausi--Jo bhi ho..ek dum tanduroost ho..bas..aur kuchh nahi chahie..


Ranveer--Fir bhi..aapki wife ne yaa aapne koi naam toh socha hoga?

Jai--Well..abhi tak toh nahi..ab aap aa gaye hain..aap hi sochiye..do me this favour..


Ranveer--Certainly Sir.

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Ranveer apne kamre me jaa chuka tha..Shobhnajee Jai k kamre me aai..Jai Bani ki ek photo ko dekh raha tha..gehri soch me dooba hua tha..uske kandhe par haath rakha Mausi ne..Jai ne poochha ,"Aap ..soi nahi ab tak?"

Mausi--Tu is tarha bechain ho kar jaag raha hai..mujhe toh neend aane se rahi..bata..kyaa baat hai?


Jai--Bani ne phone kia tha Mausi..

Mausi--KAB?

Jai--Jab aap aur Ranveer baat kar rahe the..phone aaya tha uska..ro rahi thi..

Mausi--Hum sab ko pareshan kar k..khud ro rahi thi..kyaa hai yeh sab?


Jai--Woh bahut dukhi hai..Mausi..aur kyaa baat usko khaaye jaa rahi hai..main jab tak jaan na loon..mujhe chain nahi aayega...


Mausi--Usko dhoondega kahan?Tune London me pata lagaya?Ho sakta hai..Bani wahi chali gayi ho..

Jai--Nahi..uska passport toh yehan hai..woh India me hi hai..aur bahut paas hai..zyada door nahi hai..phone par awaz itni clear thi..zyada door nahi hai..

Mausi--Toh saamne kyun nahi aati?

Jai--Wahi toh baat hai..kyun chali gayi?Main pata kar k rahoonga..aap jaaiye..so jaaiye.. raat bahut ho chuki hai..



Shobhnajee chali gayi..


Jai k mobile par ek unknown number se phone aaya..

"Hello"..

"Mr.Sisodia..Dr.Batra here.."

"Yes Doctor..yeh number.."


"Mera naya number hai..bhool jaata..issi lia abhi phone kia..k aap aainda se issi number par phone kare..agar zaroorat ho toh.."


"Thank you Doctor.."

"Filhaal..aap .."

"I am fine Doctor..zaroorat padi toh main call karoonga aapko.."


"Main yehi kahoonga k aap..Delhi aa jaaiye..aapko re-examine karna hai..kaafi din ho gaye.."

"Par yehan ek emergency hai..main kuchh dino baad..."

"Aap ki sehat se badh kar aur koi emergency toh nahi ho sakti.."

"Yes Doctor..main koshish karta hoon..kitni jaldi aa sakoon.."..yeh keh kar Jai ne phone disconnect kar dia..












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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi
I hope you are doing well now. And wow you have done such a lengthy update too. I hope you are not exherting yourself.
And as for the story. Is Ranveer really a good person out here or has he come to seek revenge only. And Jai why has he got to see a doctor. I thought only Bani had problems because of the baby. Now don't tell me they are going to reunited in death or something like that. Or was his ill health the reason behind him taking so long to reach mumbai.
Quite interesting to note that Bani still seeks comfort in Jai. So when will she come to teh fore front. And will Jai guess where she is hiding.
Waiting for your update. And once again take care.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ananya
hope u are recovering well
but bani is also suffering
then why she is baheving like this
hope jai finds bani soon
and what this ranver has in plan
hope he will not destroy jais business
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
Edited by jeenal20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi, as much as I would love to read your FF, I'm not fully versed in the

language. Don't worry about it, just take care of yourself and all the best.

C.



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi hope you are feeling better now
loved the part pls cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
any.....yaar you updtd after so long i have forgotton the story line now....
but hey im glad your feeling well now...dont stress your self too much....
like others even im curious about what happens nxt in the story...plzz cont...

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