Would You? (25th) , & Goodbye! - Page 7

Originally posted by: noneeM

Gosh! You amazing girl, You! I'm speechless! I LOVED this. I totally love your comments. 😆

And I'll be back.

Shabzie, what an utterly delightful shot! Simply marvellous! Only you can write like this! Only you!
*hide* What am I supposed to say to that? 😆
I don't know how many times I've reread it. I liked it SO much.
RE READ???? :O:O I think thats a first for me to hear. Thanks! :D
It's the magic of your writing. You instantly create a bond between the characters and the reader....and the reader just falls...in awe and love😆 with your writing!
Awww, thanks N!
Both Preet and Meher are so wonderful and their relationship is utterly beautiful! Sigh!
I totally, am bonkers about Meet. *fan girl-y scream*
I loved these sentences:
Hues of red, orange and yellow bordered the vast amounts of green trees covering the rocky boulder of the mountains. If she listened carefully, Meher could hear a bird whistling out into the fading day.
And I couldn't get enough of this one:Doesn't that Cloud look like a Duck??Honestly!!!!ROFLMAO...Brilliant!!!
And I loved:
Meher glared at him. "Jump of the cliff."
"Great. I'll pick you up at 7 tomorrow."
Awesomeness!!!!
LOL - that's so scary, all some of my fave lines in this! :D
Princess Zee, it's been amazing knowing you and reading the wonderful stuff you've penned! I'm going to really really really miss you. All hail PMs😆
*tehe* I'm a princess. *twirls* Gosh, Nita, what would we do without PM's? 😆 Thanks again!
Love:-Nonee