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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

very unique ending.....I didn't expect this ending but it was nice, very nice.....good decision by both parties.....can we have an epilogue? or another new FF? 😛

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Khatija👏. Amazing ending. Very realistic and something that would avoid leaps cos when one of them would come back there would be trust between the two of them.
I hope they will actually will be together.

Loved the story Khatija! well thought of and very smart😃

byebye
Ranjana

p.s. I know I am being greedy, but can we have another story??
Pweeeessseeee

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Hima

@j&b84

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

Khatija very well written finally manage to read all the parts together, sorry can u pls tell me y did jai go way when he know tt he love bani??? i am confuse??

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Khatija Hoosen

@lenmed

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: j&b84
Khatija very well written finally manage to read all the parts together, sorry can u pls tell me y did jai go way when he know tt he love bani??? i am confuse??

Hi, 1st thank you for reading. Today after an entire month I am able to come back to the forum. The reason that he went back. is that he realised that he loved Bani for her sacrifices and personality. He did not love her as a woman, he was going back to realise what exactly he flet for her. He loved her but he was not in love with her........😕does it make sense.

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jayati

@Fishfish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

It is more like a short story, I read it in one go, lot of things left unanswered and the reader should make her own conclusion...Yes a different perceptive of the whole situation.....very nicely written and I am very impressed about your knowledge about Mt Abu :)...love Tin