PANKAJ Knows Da Truth Of JYOTHI & BRIJ :FF- p3

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HERE IS THE SYNOPSIS OF THE STORY ACCORDING TO ME FROM THE TRACK PANKAJ KNOWING THE TRUTH OF JYOTHI & BRIJ RELATION ::


Acording to me the story moves this way
I am damn sure that Brij creates misunderstanding & havoc in the relation of Pankaj Jyothi. But when Pankaj knows the truth about Brij & Jyothi, it's very common that any human being who loves someone up to the extent has hidden such an important truth of her life will definitely reacts & question.
Same thing happens with any other persons whoever will be in the place of Pankaj. Jyothi breaks out when Pankaj questions her about hiding her's & Brij's relation & Pankaj losing trust on her & she leaves the house without informing anyone. Pankaj is so disturbed that he didn't even know that Jyothi left the house but when he realize that Jyothi is not seen in the house then he goes out in search of her.
And finally reaches Kalpana's residence, where Jyothi is there but hides when she sees Pankaj & also request Kalpana not to tell Pankaj about her presence there. When Pankaj stresses Kalpana on Jyothi's presence in their house, then Kalpana over reacts get angry on Pankaj & questions him why he behaved badly with Jyothi whom he claims loves a lot & trust her more than him. After listening Kalpana's taunts Pankaj also response her saying that today also he loves Jyothi a lot & cannot live without her.
He also says that he was not hurt & disappointed about the relation of Jyothi & Brij had before marriage but was heart broken about the fact that Jyothi not trusting Pankaj & hiding the truth from him where trust on each other is the foundation of their relation. Then Kalpana feels bad for taunting Pankaj without knowing the truth & accepts that it was all her fault who forced Jyothi to hide the truth as she is worried about her future & which doesn't have any existence of that relation. Pankaj accepts what Kalpana did was for the best for her friend & her future.
But Jyothi being a part of his life couldn't believe him & his love for her & didn't try to tell him the truth. Even then she would have told the truth that wouldn't have affected his love for her and on the top it wud increased respect for Jyothi in his eyes. But now when he came to know that she has hidden such a big truth of her life & not trusting him as broken him into pieces.
He also says that he trusted Jyothi more than himself & always thot that she never does any mistake & this is also one of the reason which has broken him so much but Jyothi is also a human being & mistakes can be committed by human beings only that he couldn't think while questioning Jyothi but now he realised it & is very sorry for all that he said or questioned Jyothi.
He says to Kalpana that after all this also still he loves Jyothi that much only as he use to love before knowing this truth, but he needs some time to forget everything. Then he wud definitely come back to take Jyothi back to their house & meanwhile Jyothi also needs some time for herself .
He is about to leave & while leaving he strongly requests & begs Kalpana to please take care of Jyothi as she needs all the support of her loved ones & not to leave her alone. He also ask permission whether he cud disturb Kalpana by calling her to find out Jyothi's health & leaves from there.
All this conversation is heard by Jyothi, she feels guilt for hiding the truth with Pankaj who loves her so much & has only given her happiness & supported her in every step of her miserable life. She cries & says to Kalpana that she don't deserve to a very good human being like Pankaj.
(((((So this way i don't want pankaj's character to be butchered and be sketched as beautifully as it was but the break up of Pankaj & Jyothi is required coz the story has to move & needs more spice & masala for the track & to show how love exists b/w them even if they are parted etc & etc)))))))))).
Pankaj walking on the road deeply thinking about all the romantic moments spent with Jyothi & also the truth about Brij & Jyothi where he waslost himself so much that he couldn't even realize that a car is coming from back with a high speed blowing horn couldn't be heard by him.
It suddenly rushes towards Pankaj & he meets with a major accident, where his head is injured badly...Then the public gathered there take him to hospital. There the doctor ask the sisters/nurse to take him to the emergency room & ask how patient is related to them who brought him to the hospital.
Then the guyz says that they are no way related to him but only brought him to hospital as humanity & the one who did accident has escaped. Then doctors asks nurse to find out from his belonging whether they can get any info about him coz he needs to consult his family before doing operation.
But suddenly other nurse comes out from the emergency & says that patient is sinking & needs to get treated asap. Then doctors ask her to bring him to OT & asks other nurse to search his belongings & inform to his family members.
Then the nurse sees Jyothi's pic in his vallet & his personal card where she finds the info & contact nos. of Pankaj.
Here in Pankaj's house everyone are very sad about Jyothi & Brij's truth & Choti Maa keeps tauting Jyothi & says that she was warning about Jyothi since beginning to them as she doubts that Jyothi is fond of money & property but wont like Pankaj then the phone rings & Choti Maa attends the call & gets shock to hear this news & drops the receiver down.
Then the other family members stresses her to tell whose call it is & why she is like that. Then in a shocking tone she says that Pankaj met with an accident & he is in the hospital. All the family gets shock & immdly rushes to the hospital.
There they find out at the reception that Pankaj is in OT & rushes there, there the nurses/sisters comes out from OT & goes in with carrying all the things required then Uday tries to find out Pankaj's condition from one of the sister then she says that his condition is critical & can't says anything as the injury is at his head.
Red Light gets off & the doctor comes out & says operation was success, but can't say anything till 24hrs. Here Jyothi is so upset always thinks of Pankaj & feels that something bad has happened to Pankaj & tries to reach him on his cell but unfortunately as his cell was left at accident spot only & it keeps ringing.
Jyothi fears that something bad has happened to Pankaj & starts crying. Then Kalpana comes & consoles Jyothi saying that now she is not supposed to take so much stress as it affects the baby inside & also says that it might be her illusions.
And as Pankaj is little bit angry with her & doesn't want to talk to Jyothi & that might be the reason he was not receiving her call & says everything will be alright. Next day Kalpana goes to hospital to collect some docs of her patients from the hospital & think that she wud study them at home so that she can be with Jyothi.
There she sees Uday accidentally & ask him why is he here then Uday explains her what has happened. Then Kalpana calls Jyothi & informs that Pankaj met with an accident & he is in the hospital, then shocking Jyothi immdly drops the receiver & rushes out to go to hospital.
She wont stop even when Kalpan's mother stops her & ask her what happened. She runs for the taxi, auto etc., but due to heavy traffic & rain she wont get any transportation but even then she runs on the road & suddenly falls down with tiredness & stomach ache. There the public seeing her condition take her to the nearby hospital, there the doctors treats her.
After gaining her conscious she gets up & insists to go out to meet Pankaj as he is in the hospital, but the doctors stops her but she wont listen. Then the doctor says that she has an abortion & now she is not suppose to move from her bed as she needs rest. After listening this news she totally collapse & goes to unconscious state again.
There in the other hospital Pankaj slowly gains his conscious & slowly open his eyes & shock/ surprise to see that now he could able to see as he gains his eyesight back, which was gone due to some clot in the brain vein, & is happy sharing this moment with everyone.
There he also see Kalpana but unable to recognize her & talks about the things that happened about 3 yrs back which happened immdly after completion of his higher education. All the family members including Kalpana are shocked & confused as why Pankaj is talking in such a way. Then they discuss the same with the doctor.
The doctor takes them to the other room sees Pankaj's X-Ray & brain scan report & declare that Pankaj has partial memory loss due to the injury in his brain & gains his eyesight for the same reason. He also that he couldn't remember any thing what happened to him in this 3 yrs, so they are suppose to be careful & never ever try to remind any thing happened in these 3 yrs which may affect his brain & may lead total memory loss or forget about himself.
Everyone are shocked but think that for Pankaj happiness they can do anything but Kalpana breaks downs & thinks about Jyothi & feels very sad that why all such problems happen only in Jyothis's life & how can she convey this msg that as now her husband couldn't recognise her & forgot all the moments spent with her.
Then immdly Kalpana gets a call from the other hospital saying that Jyothi is admitted there. Kalpana immdly rushes to that hospital & comes to know that Jyothi has an abortion & she even more breaks out & hugs Jyothi & remembers everything what happened with pankaj but then she controls herself seeing Jyothi's health state.
Jyothi then insists to says about Pankaj's condition then she thinks that she shouldn't tell Jyothi about Pankaj's partial memory loss coz just now she lost her child & collapsed & if she comes to know even this truth then her health will be totally spoiled.
So she doesn't tell about Pankaj'memory loss & gives Jyothi the good news of Pankaj's gaining back his eye sight. Jyothi is very happy & ask Kalpana to take her to the hospital as she want's to see him. But Kalpana says that this is not the correct time coz just now she lost her child & she is so weak & on the top Pankaj is still didn't excuse her, then if Jyothi goes to meet him even Pankaj couldn't recover fast as seeing Jyothi, which reminds him all that about hiding the truth.
Jyothi thinks what all Kalpana said was right & nothing is important for her than Pankaj's health & stop herself going to meet Pankaj, so at last Kalpana succeeds in stopping Jyothi going to meet Pankaj & knowing the truth of Pankaj's memory loss for time being.
So guyz from here again the new romantic love story of Pankaj Jyothi begins,which i would pen down if anyone of u r interested in my FF.
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The next morning Jyothi suddenly wakes up from bed taking Pankaj's name as she dreamt about him, then Kalpana who sleeps beside Jyothi consoles her saying if possible she will take Jyothi to Pankaj, while saying this Kalpana thinks in her mind that telling lies to Jyothi is the only way to console her coz of her bad health due to depression & ask Jyothi's frogiveness in her mind. Jyothi gets ready & ask Kalpana to take her to Pankaj but Kalpana again avoids but saying that Jyothi's health is not fine, & she also found out from Uday that Pankaj is still in the hospital & he is slowly recovering & needs some time to forget everything that happened between him & Jyothi about Brij's truth.
Days pass but there is not even a ray of hope in Jyothi's health recovery coz she keeps on thinking about Pankaj all the time, seeing her condition Kalpana is so upset. She tried to console her but fails, then finally she thinks that the only way to get Jyothi out of depression is by being with her family (parents house), so she meet Jyothi's father & explains everything to him about Jyothi's & Pankaj's condition. Listening this the family members are shocked & sad why Jyothi has to face so many troubles when she has given only happiness to everyone, then dadi tells Kamal that they wud get back Jyothi to their house & take good care of her so that she can forget everything & lead a normal life like earlier.
Immediately Kamal, dadi & padma reach Kalpana's house & request her/beg her to come back to their house & if she can come back then they can assume that Jyothi has forgiven them & by taking care of Jyothi they can correct their mistakes for which they are directly or indirectly resposible for Jyothi's present condition. Listening all this Jyothi finally agrees to go along with their parents. After coming home Sushma seeing Jyothi in that stage she falls at her foot & ask forgiveness for all her faults & bad behaviour with Jyothi listening to stupid Brij's statements. But Jyothi doesn't response to Sushma, then Sudha hugs her even then she doesn't respond. Sudha & Sushma take Jyothi into her room & lays her. In the hall eveyone decide that they wud take good care of Jyothi & wud give lot of love so that she can forget everything & can come of this depressed state soon.
Everyone in the family start taking care of Jyothi, they chat play & crack jokes, then finally Jyothi response to them & recovers slowly. Kalpana comes to meet Jyothi & feels very happy with the recovering health state of Jyothi. But she discuss with Jyothi's family that they need to do more something like that where Jyothi can completely come out of this depression. Then Sushma suggest that Jyothi likes dancing a lot why can't she join Bagyavidhata group once again. Everyone feels it's a best idea but request Kalpana to talk to Jyothi regarding this.
Here Pankaj is also recovering with the help & support of his family, but he always have the flashbacks of the moments spent with Jyothi's but in negative, where he couldn't be able to see the faces clearly & suddenly wakes up from bed & thinks it's a nightmare. Then the doctor comes for check up & declares that he is completely normal & do whatever he wants but needs some rest as he is still weak. Doc leaves then Pankaj says to Uday that 2morrow onwards he is going to accompany him to the office, then Choti Maa & Uday tells to take rest for now & he can join later on but Pankaj insists to go to office where he can feel good rather than sitting at home is very boring to him. Everyone agrees & pankaj is happy.
Here Kalpana talks to Jyothi about her joining dance acadamey once again where she can feel good & can forget everything, but Jyothi doesn't respond then Kalpana says that she has to do this atleast for the sake of those who are concerned about her & who couldn't see her in such a condition, she has to live & be happy for those people who love her so much & who are connected with her since birth.Then Jyothi agrees to go to dance class & she also thinks in her mind that if she start earning then she can give some financial support to the family & this way she can also make herself busy so that she cannot think of any thing any more...
Here Pankaj start going to office & there even Jyothi starts to her dance academy, while leaving she informs to her mom dad that she also decided to go to Shishumangal where her presence & spoort is mostly required there. They accept her decision.
Pankaj reaches to office & been introduced to everyone by Uday, everyone happily welcomes him with flowers & boquets. He is very happy & leaves to his cabin directed by Uday. Uday offers MD seat to Pankaj, but he refuses saying that he has just joined the office & he doesn't have any knowledge of work how can he take up such a big position suddenly, then Uday assures him that Pankaj is not only intelligent but more responsible person & he is also an elder son of the family. He also says that he is always there to support Pankaj in any matters & insists him to sit in MD chair.
Atlast Pankaj accepts & takes his chair & responsibilities but Choti Maa is not happy with Uday's behaviour.Here Jyothi reaches dance acadamy everyone are happy. Kalpana hugs & says thanks for keeping up her words. Dada welcomes her & says that with her presence the academy has once again got life & he is very happy to see her here. Jyothi after completion of her practices takes permission from dada & leaves to Shishumangaly.
Here in shishumangal Dayal is surprised to see Jyothi there & feels guilty. He says sorry for indirectly being reason behind Jyothi's such condition as once he only insisted her to accept Pankaj's marriage proposal & said that Pankaj is a very good person where she can lead a very happy & joyful life but all that gone in vain & now she has to see all miserable & depressing days once again. But Jyothi says this is not his mistake at all. Infact no one did any thing wrong to her but it's all her bad fate and says trust me uncle am happy with what ever God has given me.
Tears starts rolling from Jyothi's & Dayal Uncle's eyes both hug & Jyothi leave to meets the kids of shishumangal. Every one are happy to see Jyothi & surround her. Jyothi spend some time with the children, she plays with them, tell stories etc & leave to dance acadamy again as she has to practice a lot coz of her long break & for a new show too.
Here Jyothi, Kalpana & other students of the academy practices dance then slowly they hear a guitar music. It was mind blowing they start practising again but got disturb with the music again. Jyothi discuss with Kalpana who might be that person who is playing such a great music, they say that they have no idea who might be the person. Then at the near by area of the dance class there is a small river/lake & a guy is playing a guitar sitting at the river bank who is in a cow boy get up with a hat on his head, just like a movie hero.
GUESS WHO? Hmm he is none other than our hero Pankaj šŸ‘who always like to sit alone at the beach side or river side & njoy the view even that day he was there, playing guitar & start singing the song (according to me "Neele neele amber par chand jab aaye" remix wud be the correct song on this ocassion). It's raining heavly every one leave inside but here Jyothi is very much impressed with the music & his voice & slowly starts walking towards Pankaj. (U know guyz a part from handling business our hero also keeps a hobby of music & singing. hence whenever he feels so much of happiness or sad he keeps playing guitar & sings)
Kalpana stops her by saying that whoever might be the person what we have to do knowing about him but Jyothi can't stop herself as she is so immensely impressed & involved in his music, as she is left with no other way accompany's Jyothi too. Both start walking towards Pankaj but stand behind a tree & listen to his song so that he wud not be disturbed by them.
They try to see his face as they are very much eager to see & meet such a great artist but couldn't be able to see him as he is turned to the other side. Meanwhile Jyothi gets a call from her house asking her to come back home soon as her dadi is sick & need to rush her to the hospital. So Kalpana & Jyothi had to leave immdly with a ray of great disappointment of not been able to meet such a great artist.
Now Kalpana's car hasn't come to pick her up due to some reasons & has to take lift from Jyothi & also wants to accompany her as Jyothi's dadi is sick & need to be admitted in the hospital. Jyothi starts her scooty but it doesn't gets started. She tries a lot but her scooty doesn't start then Pankaj from behind comes & says do they need lift as her vehicle is not working. Jyothi suddenly turns back in anger but couldn't say anything instead keep staring at him coz she recognises him with the dress code & hat on his head that it was the same person whom they have just seen at the river side playing guitar & singing song.
Jyothi discuss the same with Kalpana & Kalpana also agrees with Jyothi but unfortunately they couldn't be able to see his face once again as it's too dark & raining heavly. Kalpana asks pankaj whether he was the same person then Pankaj say yes it was him who likes to sit at the river side & njoy the view & forgets all the sorrows.
Then Jyothi suddenly remembers Pankaj's words said & deeply goes into the thots, here Pankaj ask them to get into the car but Jyothi doesn't listen.
Kalpana slighty shakes her & ask her what happened then she says that she remembered some one, who is very close to her heart. Meanwhile Pankaj says Jyothi to leave her scooty there & inform to the garage person & give him the address so that he wud repair & drop the scooty at her house. Jyothi says ok & all of them leave. Pankaj drops Jyothi & Kalpana at Jyothi's house & leaves.
Jyothi rushes home & ask about dadi then the inform that she is ok now coz a local doctor has been brought to home by Deepu for dadi's check up who said that her BP is high due to that she fainted & he has given medicines & now dadi is at sleep. Then Jyothi gives the keys of her scooty to Deepu saying that her scooty is not working & left it at so & so place so please get it repaired asap. She also ask him to get a taxi for Kalpana.
Next day while pankaj was driving a car he gets a call from Uday discusssing about his presentation with the client for their new project, he was so much involved in that discussion that he couldn't concentrate on driving properly suddenly a puppy comes in front of his car & to save it, he suddenly puts the break where his car tmoves from a gadda & all the dirty mud water falls on Jyothi & Kalpana who were walking beside.
While Jyothi & Kalpana are trying to clean their clothes, Pankaj gets out of the car & runs towards the puppy. He takes it into his arms & check whether it has got any hurt, then Jyothi & Kalpana comes from behind & Jyothi starts shouting on him saying that can't he see the public walking on the road etc & etc., then suddenly Pankaj turns slowly. 🄳 (it's party time guyz, at last our waith is over Pankaj Jyothi came face to face) Jyothi & Kalpana are shocked to see him there, they have no words to say, then Pankaj doesn't recognises them & simply says sorry for what he done & explains them that he couldn't see them as he wants to save the puppy coming on his path. He is extremely sorry for his deeds, then he gets a call from Uday saying that he need to hurry up to office as the clients have already arrived. Pankaj tells Jyothi & Kalpana that he had got to attend an imp meeting so he has to rush up to his office & leaves by asking excuse once again. Jyothi stood out with the shocked face still.
Kalpana tries to distract Jyothi by saying that they need to go to dance class as they are already late & dada may get angry as they need to practice for the upcoming show. But Jyothi is left with the puzzled face šŸ˜•& got disturbed by Kalpana, she keeps on asking Kalpana why Pankaj is behaving like that as if he doesn't know Jyothi at all. Kalpana is tensed to hear this & couldn't be able to answer Jyothi & is so worried, she thinks in her mind now what she have to say about how that Pankaj has lost his momery & couldn't recognise his beloved wife, then how wud Jyothi react on hearing all this thiking this she just keep quite & slowly takes Jyothi to the dance class. Jyothi couldn't concentrate on dance practice as she keeps on thinking about Pankaj's behaviour only, she couldn't understand why he was behaving in such a way. She thinks that might be Pankaj hasn't excused her still for hiding the truth of Brij & her & he doen't want to continue any relation with her. Thinking all this she starts crying & kalpana observes Jyothi comes to her hugs her & consoles her saying that everything will be alright. Jyothi says to Kalpana that she can bear any horrible situation but couldn't bear Pankaj's such behaviour & she can't live without him.
In Jyothi's house everyone are sitting having snacks with a cup of tea & happily discussing about the slow improvement in Jyothi's health & her concentration on her routine life like earlier. Suddenly Kalpana brings tensed Jyothi to house everyone are shocked to see Jyothi in such state & make her sleep by giving her anti stress & sleeping tablets. Everyone comes out of the room & ask Kalpana as what happened & why Jyothi's condition is spoiled again, then Kalpana explains everything what happened. Kamal holds his head & cries for Jyothi why God is giving so much of pain to his daughter. Seeing this Kalpana consoles him & says everything wud be fine & she wud definitely find a solution to his & at any cost she wud unite Pankaj & Jyothi as Jyothi is not only a friend but more than a sister to her & couldn't see Jyothi in such bad state & she leaves.
Here Pankaj gives a solid presentation to the clients, who are very much impressed & appreciate Pankaj for his excellent skills. They immdly sign the deal documents & requests Pankaj to take up this project personally. Pankaj & Uday are very happy & promise to complete their project successfully on time & wud reach client's expectations. Clients leave happily. Uday congratulate Pankaj & appreciates his solid presentation but Choti Maa who is observing all this from distance feels bad as Pankaj is trying to occupy his son's position & slowly trying to rule this company & one fine day becomes the whole & sole owner of the company, thinking this in mind she leaves from there angrily.
The next day Kalpana reaches sishumangal & talk to Dayal uncle, she explains everything what happened the other day & how Jyothi was so depressed & she don't even want to live without Pankaj then ask Dayal uncle's helps as he is the mama of Pankaj, then dayal uncles accepts & says that if he cud help Jyothi from taking her out from this depressing situation it's a great thing for him & he also wants to see Pankaj & Jyothi together once again. But they don't know how to bring Pankaj Jyothi together. Then Kalpana a plan she explains it to Dayal uncle that by any reason if he can call Pankaj & ask to serve the orphans living here for some time then Jyothi & Pankaj meet & can spend time together. This way Pankaj may remember his forgetten sweet memories with Jyothi. Dayal agrees with Kalpana & promises to do up to the extent he can do to reunite Pankaj Jyothi.
Here Jyothi wakes up & again remembers Pankaj's behaviour with her at the road side & starts crying by taking Pankaj pics into her arms. She says that till now she truly loved only Pankaj & she cannot live with him. Kamal & other family members listening this from outside & breaks out into tears & thinks who will save their Jyothi from this disaster. Then Kalpana enters & tell them that they got some good news & explains about the conversation she had with Dayal uncle. Everyone are happy but confused why Pankaj is not able to recoginise Jyothi & Kamal raise his doubt on this to Kalpana, then Kalpana explains everything how he had an accident, got his eye sight back & finally he lost is memory as he is suffering from partial amnesia, who forgot his past 3 yrs of life, where he totally forgot all the moments from he met Jyothi & got married to her etc & etc. Suddenly a door moment sound comes from Jyothi's bedroom where everyone turn & see that Jyothi heard all that Kalpana said about Pankaj & Jyothi burst into tears.
Everyone consoles Jyothi & tell everything will find as God is so kind to her coz she is the most good person & till date she has only supported & helped everyone, so God won't do wrong with good people. Jyothi wipes out her tears & requests Kalpana that she wants to see & meet Pankaj immdly.Kalpana says ok but she says that for each & everything time has to come, now this not the correct time, if the correct time comes she wud definitely take her to Pankaj & till then she has wait & pray for Pankaj. Jyothi agrees with a little sigh of happiness.
Suddenly the most worst character Brij enters their house & shouting on everyone, uttering bad words, tauting Kamal & his mahaan family where one daughter left her husband & other's duaghter's husband has kicked her out & they are living on the earning of their daughter. Everyone gets angry & deepu catch hold of Brij's collars tries to drag him out of the house, but Brij takes out his hand & gives a strong slap saying that he doesn't know how to treat his brother-in-law.
Seeing all this Sudha turns out to be Devika & shouts at them to stop all this non-sense. She says that she is fed up of all these. It's been like a fish market always one or the other issues in this house. She moves towards Brij throwing her dupatta a side & leaving her hair loose, she gives him a strong big slap & ask him that he was the same person who was forcing the girl Sushma by twisting her hand outside the disco. That day only she wants to teach him a lesson but he saved coz Uday stopped her.
Everyone are shocked to see Sudha's such bold & strong behaiour. She warns Brij to get out of the house & never turn back other wise she wud call police for torturing a women who wud have a bitter punishment. Listeneing this Brij leaves. Then Sudha/Devika goes to her room changes her dress into minis & comes out. Everyone are even more shocked to see her in this get up. No one has words to say anything. Jyothi then goes to Sudha & asked why she is behaving in such a way & what is this dress. The she says Jyothi that what her problem is & she is like that only & loves to wear such clothes & also says that she is not Sudha but Devika & do not ever call her as Sudha. Listening all this Jyothi including everyone are confused & they don't understand why Sudha is behaving in such a way & Jyothi argues with Sudha saying if she is mad or what then Devika gets angry & gives a big lecture to Jyothi that she is not suppose to talk to her in such a way, Jyothi gets angry give her a tight slap, then Sudha/Devika comes back to her senses as Sudha & seeing her dress & all the family staring at her makes her more tensed & asks Jyothi what happened, is anything happened to her, she feels something is wrong with her & starts weeping, Jyothi hugs her & says nothing happened as she is alright now she can go to her room & take rest.
Kalpana who watches Sudha's weird behaviour is shocked, then Jyothi asks what wud be the reason of Sudha's such different behaviour & everyone are worried so much, then Kalpana gives a supporting shoulder to Jyothi saying that she wud take care of Sudha as she is suspecting a case of split personality but can't confirm untill she does some tests & consult a senior & eperienced well-known doctor. Jyothi & all agree with Kalpana.Jyothi goes inside to check Sudha's condition who is cooly sleeping, here Kamal discuss with his mom saying that why all problems are occuring in the life of his kids only, first Sushma then Jyothi & now Sudha, he curses his fate & says why God is testing him so much when he never harm anyone. Then dadi says every thing will be alright & "Baghwan Ke Ghar Mein Dher Hai Lekin Andher Nahin".
Here Pankaj & Uday come back home, sit along with his parents having tea with snacks. Uday starts explaining them how Pankaj has given a solid presentation & keep on appreciating his skills, Pankaj stops him but he wont & says that he want to celebrate as this is the biggest day for them in getting such a huge project from such a well reputed MNC company. Everyone are so happy & are in a party mood but Choti maa is in a bad mood as she is worried about Pankaj getting more & more attention. Everyone leave to the party, there Uday meets Sudha/Devika again. He goes to her & ask for a dance, seeing all this Pankaj asks whether she is her girl friend then Uday in a shy way replies yes she is. Then Pankaj ask to further develop his relationship with her & why don't he talk with choti Maa in this regard, if he is so interested in her.
Uday says that choti maa knows everything but put a "confused face "šŸ˜•, then Pankaj asks then what's the real problem then Uday explains everything about Devika's weird behavior & how she is not so interested in developing their relationship as he wants. And he is unable to decide whether he can continue his relationship with Devika or not. Pankaj supports Uday saying don't worry he wud talk to her on behalf of him & try to convince her, saying this they leave from the disco.
The next morning Dayal Mama calls Pankaj, He is thrilled to hear his voice & ask him how did he remember Pankaj after a long time. Dayal Mama says that there are fews orphan children in Shishumangal whom they are giving donation needs a moral support & blind training as he has undergone such situation/stage. He request Pankaj if he can make out his precious time for these helpless kids whose needs their support . Hearing all this Pankaj feels bit touched & agrees his proposal & says that helping such children is a God given gift to him & he wud really feel great to help such kids.
Here Jyothi starts to her dance class, meanwhile she receives a call from Kalpana asking her to bring Sudha to her hospital so that she can conduct few tests. Jyothi calls bagya dada & Dayal uncle to inform that today she may be able to come as she has to Sudha to the hospital.
Then Dada accepts, dayal uncle also accepts with a little disappointment as Pankaj wud be visiting Shishumangal today & Jyothi cannot meet him.
Jyothi takes an auto to the hospital, but it stops in the middle. The auto driver tries a lot to repair it but fails, then he informs Jyothi to take another auto as it cannot be repaired now. Jyothi tries to stop all the auto rickshaw but no one stop. Suddenly a car stops & moves back a little bit. It's none other than our Pankaj, he opens the door & ask whether she need lift.
Jyothi denies but Pankaj anyway convinces her & both Jyothi & Sudha sit in the car. He tries to talk to Jyothi by keep asking questions, as so what's her name where she works & about her family etc & etc. But Jyothi doesn't answer any of his question & on the top she says that she cannot disclose her personal info to strangers, then with a small smile on his face Pankaj introduces himself as Pankaj Vashist, the elder son of Vashist family & MD of their company & says now he is not a stranger any more & she can talk to him but still Jyothi keeps quite.
Pankaj who has a boring time try to timepass himself by whisling the same tune which he sang (Neele Neele Amber Par). Jyothi suddenly remembers the guy played guitar & sang the song very sweetly might be the same person & she asks this to Pankaj. Pankaj with a cute smile agress that it was him only but is not a very good singer & just sings as an hobby. But Jyothi says that he is not that bad singer inface she was impressed with his music & his voice as she heard him singing while practising dance which is located nearby the river where he was there the other night.
Slowly & finally Jyothi introduce herself to Pankaj & the finally the hospital arrives, Jyothi & Sudha get down & thank him for his timely help in giving them lift..Then Pankaj leaves saying it's his honor to serve her & says that his duty is to give her lift coz the other day also he has only given her lift while it was raining heavily & her scooty stopped working. Jyothi smiles & both say bye to each other & leave to their respective ways.
Jyothi meets Kalpana & out of happiness she explains everything what happened & says that the stranger who sang at the river bank is none other than Pankaj.Then
Kalpana also feels happy & ask Sudha to come inside the room for the tests. kalpana & other senior doctors starts the tests like hipnotism etc & etc & in these tests they discover that Sudha is haunted by split personality so whenever she cross the limits of sorrow she turns to Devika who is so cool, brave & bold, who doesn't care about anything & want to lead an independent life...Kalpana is tensedhearing all this but somehow make up herself strong & decides to inform this to Jyothi. She comes out & explains everything what's wrong with Sudha & what was the reason behind Sudha's such weird behaviour.
Jyothi is shocked to hear all this, but Kalpana consoles Jyothi saying that science has developed a lot & has great treatment & medicines forthis problem & not to worry. She also informs that Sudha doesn't know about Sudha's other personality & she doesn't even remember what she does when she becomes Devika. She tells Jyothi not to discuss anything about all this with Sudha as she is not so strong to take it up. Jyothi & Sudha leaves home with a great diasppointment on the face of Jyothi.
At home everyone ask what happened to Sudha & what doctors said, then Jyothi says nothing has happened to her. Sudha will be alright by taking the medicines & ask her to go to her room & take rest as she is not feeling well now. When Sudha leaves she explains everything what Kalpana said & starts crying.
Everyone are so worried & Kamal blames dadi for Sudha's condition, she is the one who made Sudha so coward & tensed by taunting her always for no reason since childhood. Sudha has become so weak that she cannot carry even small things well & always lead a feared life etc & etc . The arguement continues b/w Kamal & his mom. Then Jyothi shouts to stop them & request them that this is not the time to fight instead they all have to stand by Sudha, support her & give her lots of love for her speedy recovery & bring her out from this problem.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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whew.. such a long thread.. give break in between the paragraph to make it to read easy.. it is too straining..

But very creative..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i love it...happy for pankaj and his eyesight but sad for jyoti....you should definitely continue..it's a great story šŸ‘šŸ‘...keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey thanks for the compliments & suggestions too, if i can get same response i wud definitely continue the track. Kaash creatives of Jyothi wud have checked this forum & read our FF to get an idea how to take up the story line without butchering the characters....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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one more thing...can you please edit the title and write with small letters....captions are considered shouting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeah i know this rule but again thot to highlight the title there is no other option left except mentioning it in caps. Anyways i respect ur suggestion & doing as u wish. Thanks once again for correcting me...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was fantastic...I can't wait for the next part.. Do update soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww.....i was proper imagining everyfink.....wow ur great
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey very nice track , but i would prefer the child to be alive so that this child track will play a role in bringing jyoti and pankaj together. Iit can be like jyoti finally comes to know of pankaj's memory loss and decides to leave him for his wellbeing,she leaves udaipur and goes somewhere else and through her dancing she gives concerts and brings up her child, then there can be a leap of 3 to 4 years where jyoti again comes face to face with pankaj and again their love track starts
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely
you should be a story writer

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