~~~~~~HUM HO GAYE AAPKE~~~~~ PART 1

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A woman in a house is pacing back and forth:A man sitting at jhula reading some papers

Woman :-aane do aaj nahi chodugi.bahut ho gaya .Aaj to bata hi doongi ki uski ma ko gussa bhi aata hai.bas aaj to aane do.

Man :-kya hua .are kyo pareshan ho.aur itni besabri se kiska intzaar ho raha hai.

Woman :-Aur kaun .ek hi to aafat hai is gao me.Aur mere ji ka janjal.mai to pareshan ho gayi hoon.kab tak sunu.Aaj to use samjha k rahoongi.

Man :-kiski baat ho rahi hai?

Woman:-aur kaun aapki ladli jise aapk lad pyar ne itna bigad diya hai ki wo kabhi badi hona hi chahti . bachho ki tarah poore gao me uchal kood k shaitani karti hai.

Man :-are Kiran kyo meri beti k peeche padi rahti ho.kitni masoom bachchi hai.

Kiran:-aapko to bachchi hi lagti rahegi.per shayad aap bhool rahe hai.pichle hafte hi aapki ladli 18 years ki ho chuki hai.aur use khud k baal (hair) theek se badhne nahi aate,aur to rahne hi do.har kaam k liye mere aage-peeche ghoomti hai.pata nahi kab seekhegi ki wo 1 ladki hai ,aage jake use 1 ghar sambhalna haia.bas saara dimag khel kood me laga hai uska.na padne me man lagta hai aur na ghar k kamo me.

Man: are sirf 18 saal ki hi to hui hai .tum to aise kah rahi ho jaise 80 saal ki ho gayi.seekh jaygei sab aapne aap.jab tak maa baap k yaha hai aish karne do.

Kiran:-haan aaapko kya .aage jab sasural jayegi to tane mujhe hi sunne ko milegi."Maa ne kuch bhi nahi sikhaya" .koi ye nahi bolega ki "baap ne ye nahi sikhaya".to aapko kyo fikar hogi.

Man:-laughs.

Kiran:-aapko hasi aa rahi hai.aapne hi bigada hai.

Then someone comes and looking at kiran's angry face says:-lagta hai meri ladli bhanji k baare me baat ho rahi hai.Kiran tabhi itni khush hoti hai….aaj kya kiya hamari bitiya ne .kiska saman feka ya kisika sir phoda.kisk baag se aam churaye.

Vaise Nishikant where is our ladli.

Kiran(angrily) :-lo bas aapki hi kami thi shyam bhaiya jo aapne hi poori kar di.

Shaym to man:-kyo nishikant ,kaha hai is ghar ki raunak.

Kiran :-kaha hogi ,latki hogi kisi ped pe bandariya ki tarah.kabhi –kabi to mujhe shak hota hai ki kahi hospital me meri bachchi badal to nahi gayi.

Both shyam and nishikant laughs loudly:

Meanwhile A girl with her gang outside a fence of a orchard.trying to climb over the fence and then a mango tree.when she succeed in reaching the top of tree ,she starts to pick mango and throw them so that her frds can catch them .keeper of that orcahrd comes and shouts:Utar neeche utar .Ajj to tere ghar leke hi jauga .itne bade ghar ki beti hok chori karte hue tujhe sharam nahi aati? Chor kahi ki..

Old man was waiting for her to climb down the tree so that he can take her to her father,while she directly jump outside the fence.soon sarrounded by her gang

Gang:-mile kay ,kitne layi:

Girl:-haan sabko to bas aam ki padi hai…kisi ne ye nahi poocha ki mujhe chot to nahi lagi itne uper s ekoodne k baad.aur agar tum logo k chakkar me pakdi jati to mai kisi ko nahi chodti.kisi ko meri fikar nahi.

1 of the frds:-are tum nahi pakdi jati .itna to hame malloom hai.Tum to hamari champion ho in kamo me.tabhi to ham tumhe bhejte hai so that hum aaram se kha sake .

She just stare at her frds :and says I'll not talk to u ,u all are selfish.

Then a boy comes running:-Bani di,bani di

And girl turn: she has an oval shape face ,pink lips,big brown eyes, in which she has kohl applied,long hair tied in two plates.green ghagra,pink choli green and pink duptta which was tied around her slim waist.green and pink bangles in her hands.

Boy was breathing hard due to running:-bani di,bani di.

Bani :-kya hai ,bani di ,bani di hi karta rahega ya kuch kahega bhi ?

Boy:- wo aapk mama aaye hai.

Bani .jumps in joy:kya mamaji aaye hai.tab to bada maja aayega.

Boy:-but aapki ma aaj bahut gusse me hai lagta hai aaj to aap gayi kaam se,

Bani:isme kaun si nayi baat hai.wo to hamesha hi aisa kahti hai,kuch nahi hoga ,sham ko tum log ghar aa jana hum sab maja karege mama ji k sath.

Saying so she runs to her home.

Bani was only child of Nishikant and kiran dixit..Nishikant was a sarpanch of village.bani was aaple of her parents eyes and she was a vry naughty .aisi koi sharat nahi jo bani na karti ho.agar poore gao me kuch bhi gadbad .,koi shaitaini ho to bas samajho bani waha jaroor milegi.she did not concentrate on study at all because all her mind is always busy thinking how to play prank on others,because of this she failed her classes too and now was studying in 12th.

After reaching home she just jumps the wall which was at backside of her house ,she says her moter pacing back and forth with a stick in her hand.she thinks for few min and shouts :--Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

And starts crying .Kiran seeing her only dauther screaming in pain immediately forgets her anger and rushes to her side so do her father and mama .

Kiran (trying to calm Bani) are meri bachchi ,kaise lag gayi.kaha lag gayi

Bani seeing her mother :starts crying as if she is in gr8 pain.kiran too start crying .are meri bachchi ko kya hua chot kaise lag gayi ….and hugs her ,bani put her head on her mother's shoulder and looks towards her father's and mama 's worried face and she winks .they both understand and stops panicking.Kiran takes bani to her room and places her on her bed and leaves to bring haldi wala milk for her ladli.while bani gives hi –five to both the men.

Bani:-Bach gayi.

Nishi:-tune to hame dara hi diya tha.kya acting ki lag raha tha ki sach me teri tang toot gayi.badmash!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shaym :-mai to bas doc ko lene jane hi wala tha.vaise tune apni ma ka gussa 1 min me bhula diya verna wo to aaj teesre mahayudh ki taiyari me baithi thi.bani ,U r simply gre

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Bani:( lifting her imaginary collor):-haan wo to mai hoon ur wo bhi childhood k jamane se.

All 3 laughs.

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I have changed the story line as i didn't rerceive many comments for that .......but ...title is same...Hope U like it......pls let me know ....in form of ur comments

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