~*~AN Romantic Scene Thread~*~ - Page 32

Originally posted by: anotheranfan

Mich... loved the another ending part... it was awesome.. the unspoken confession and the way what they have gone through affects the way they express their emotions.. good job girl.. wish we get something like this tomorrow :)<br>

Thanks so much Priyanka I am glad you liked it.... AN have gone through so much pain, I wanted to show them understanding the other's pain. Thanks once again.

Mich

Originally posted by: mich09

Please note I have added a second ending to scene NO. 8 on page 41.... Hope you all like it.


Mich

k will check dear😳

wow mich................i hope thats wat gonaa happen 2day....................omg its was so lovely.........

Fatima and Michelle just loved your scenes!

Thanks a lot Vaishnavi and Sonali. Glad you both liked the scene...

Vaishnavi the Great Work animaiton is so nice...

Once again thanks so much

Originally posted by: mich09

Thanks a lot Vaishnavi and Sonali. Glad you both liked the scene...

Vaishnavi the Great Work animaiton is so nice...

Once again thanks so much

its my ppleasure............😳

Originally posted by: mich09

Good morning Girls How is everyone doing...

Well last night disappointed with the episode I wrote my own version of the scene and so thought I'll post it first thing in the morning.....




After Susu leaves, Nikki looks at Abhi who is in a deep sleep, goes closer to him and fondly runs her hand through his hair. Moving her hand down to his face and with a slight smile she whispers "Abhi... !" As Abhi leans his face into her cupped hands she smiles fondly and says "Neend mein kitne ache lagte ho, bilkul ek bacche ki tarah".. then with wide eyes she continues " .nahin toh khaane ko daudte ho !" With a sad look she says "Sach mein Abhi, aaj main chahti thi ke hum dono ek doosre se kuch kahe.....kuch sunne....lekin woh susu ki bacchi ne poora kaam bigaad diya she finishes giving an annoyed look. Slowly removing her hand from his face she puts it over his hand lying on his stomach and says in a sad voice "Abhi main tumhe batana chahti hoon ke tum mere liye kya ho" Then slowly taking his hand in both her hands she continues "Jab tum mere paas nahin hote ho tumhari bahut yaad aati hai. Meri nazre tumhe har waqt dhoondti rahti hai......... Jab tum mujhse naaraz hote, gussa hote ho to mujhe bahut dard hota hai". A lump forms into a throat as tears begin to roll down her cheek... Holding his hand with one hand and caressing his face with the other she says "jab tum mujhe choote ho toh mujhe kuch ho jaata hai... main chahti hoon ke sab chod ke tumhari baahon mein sama jaoon'' With moist eyes she looks at him and seeing him still asleep oblivious to what she was saying she manages a bleak smile. Then wiping away her tears she goes to her room, picks up a blanket and on her way back switches off the lights leaving one lamp on. She puts the blanket over the sleeping Abhi. Kneeling down beside him, she bends forward and tries to adjust the cushion his head was resting on.. Abhi moves and in a dreamy voice says "Oh Nikki" Nikki's heart starts beats faster. He turns his face a bit on the left and as it lies on Nikki's hand which was under his pillow, he holds her hand with his right hand. Nikki looks at him and breathes a sigh of relief seeing he was still in a deep sleep. Nikki was unable to free herself as his grip on her hand was too strong She mutters with a fond smile "neend mein bhi dadagiri !". Then sitting down on the floor puts her head on the couch and as she keeps watching him she falls asleep.

Few hours later Abhi opens his eyes. His head felt very heavy and kept pounding. He opens and shuts his eyes trying to get a clear vision. He wonders where he is and as he tries to move he felt something heavy on his hand. He sees its Nikki sleeping over his hand and realises he was still at Nikki's place Watching her sleeping peacefully like a baby, he smiles. He manages to slowly remove his hand from her hand without disturbing her He sits up. His head still felt very heavy and eyes were still drooping with drowsiness. Taking a deep breath, he gets off the couch and goes beside Nikki. As He lifts her slowly in his arms, still fast asleep, Nikki snuggles into his chest. He smiles at her lovingly and tries to put her on the same couch he was lying on. As he puts her down, Nikki puts her arms around him and mutters in her sleep "Abhi, mujhe chod ke mat jao". She then snuggles against him till she finds comfort. Drowsily Abhi smiles and as his head falls back into the cushion he falls asleep cuddling a sleeping Nikki in his arms.

Mich

This part reminds me of the Holi scene where she holds his hand and sleeps tight after consuming bang !!! I loved that part and this too complements it !!
Mich with your scenes u shud really be hired by the creatives !!!😳

Aww Shanti thanks so much....You are being really sweet and kind...glad you liked the scene...thanks once again

Mich

Ok this specially requested by Priyanka

Abhimanyu was wondering how his newly wedded wife was doing. Suman Lata was in town again for a quick visit. He wanted to finish work and find some excuse to leave her sight. He had spent three hours with Suman and her parents in a meeting. They didn't know he had recently gotten married.

" Beta you seem tensed. Do you have other appointments for today?," Mr. Lata inquired.

" You must work really hard, Suman always talked about you when she came home after her first stay here . She loved working with you and Dr. Nikita," Mrs. Lata stated.

Abhimanyu blushed slightly at the mention of Nikita's name.

They started talking about Suman's marriage and how it was difficult to find a nice guy these days. Abhimanyu felt Mrs. Lata's eyes looking at him during the conversation as Suman blushed.

He lurched to a standing position.

" I am truly sorry to cut this short but I just realized my wife is waiting for me. We are leaving for a seminar tomorrow afternoon," he stammered.

The Lata exchanged astonished looks. Suman looked like she was about to cry.

" Aapki shaadi ho chuki hai?," she inquired.

He nodded his head.

" Haan, just a few weeks back," he said as the parents reluctantly congratulated him.

Abhimanyu headed home with sighs of relief. He was happy to finally open the front door to their home. He heard the shower running and a grin spread across his face.

Nikita did not know when to expect her husband home. She cooked a quick meal and then decided to get showered. She emerged from the bathroom in a pink fluffy robe and her hair streaming wet. She felt relaxed.

She reached for her brush and felt someone's fingers coming up to her shoulders. She knew that touch. She quickly turned around causing drops of water to land on his face. He closed his eyes for a brief moment before opening them again. He grinned at her as he ran his hands around her waist.

She blushed.

" I wasn't sure when you would finally get home," she muttered as her gaze went to the floor.

He cupped her chin, forcing her gently to turn towards him. He leaned in closer and kissed her.

" So darling have you eaten dinner?," he whispered.

She shook her head.

" I was waiting for you sweetheart. How was it with the Latas?," she inquired with a sly expression.

He smiled.

" I am just glad to be here with you instead. They were very unhappy to hear I am taken."

She brightened up.

" That's delightful. Now go sit down while I change into something more comfortable," she insisted.

They shared a meal and she couldn't stop giggling throughout everything as he talked about his day.

After they cleaned up they headed towards the bedroom. He picked her up bridal style.

" Yeh kya kare ho?," she exclaimed.

" Something I couldn't do after our marriage. Too many prying eyes," he quipped.

She rolled her eyes and laughed as he took her inside.

sonali.. that was so cute... thank you so much for making me feel better...
married abhi-niki... :) it was really cute.. brought a smile on my face with their cute conversation.. thanks again :)