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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#231

michelle.. that was wonderful scene ...

on tuesday when i saw limping niki in abhi's cabin i thought there would be something like this but :(

thank god you are here to make us feel better.. :)

keep writing such scenes.. helps in getting over No AN days...

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leaves45

@leaves45

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Posted: 16 years ago

#232

MIch I am nominating you to be on the creative team bec honestly you are doing their job so much better than them.............that scene was beyond words and I am still sighing from how romantic it really was.........Oh how I wish this would happen on the show.👏

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Michelle

@mich09

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Posted: 16 years ago

#233

@ Zainab : I am so glad you liked it. I hurriedly put up the scene (did not even chk the grammar or spellings) because I could not, not fulfill such a sweet request from you....

@Priyanka : Been missing you girl....Along with Ivy you too went gayaab 😭. Glad you liked the scene. It has been playing on my mind ever since I saw the horrible thursday episode.

@Leaves : Thanks so much. Now I am blushing with your kind words 😳 😳

@ Fizza, Fati, saw both your comments in the FC. Thanks so much......

Well for this the credit goes to Zainab for bringing a scene, which was all this while in the back of my mind, out to you all

Thanks once again
Mich

Edited by mich09 - 16 years ago

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#234

here is my new scene!

Abhimanyu's heart lurched when he heard her call his name as she fell. He turned with his heart racing and rushed to her side.

" Nikita open your eyes!"

She did not respond to his voice. He quickly picked her up and took her to the general ward where he was met by Riddhima and a nurse.

" Dr. Riddhima, nothing should happen to Nikita!," he declared.

" Don't worry Dr. Modi, we'll figure out what is wrong," she assured him.

Abhimanyu sat beside Nikita had held her hand, and kept pleading for her to open her eyes.

Suddenly she opened her eyes.

" Nikita kahan dard hora hai?," Riddhima inquirid.

" My foot is killing me," she cried.

" This is all my fault, I am so sorry Nikita," he said softly.

" I will get the x-ray machine," Riddhima stated.

The x-ray confirmed a hairline fracture. Abhimanyu remained beside her afterwards as they awaited for the materials for her cast fitting.

" You never leave me not even in my dream. My life will not be my own with you always bothering me," she mumbled.

" I am here Nikki, I am not going to leave you," he promised.

Riddhima looked at them with a bright smile. A small incident had brought them back together. It was beautiful yet she wondered what had happened to Armaan. Everyone had been trying to reach him all day. She headed off to go call him again.

The next day, Muskaan and Atul were visiting Nikita when Abhimanyu came to see how she was doing. They were just talking and then stopped short when Abhimanyu entered.

" Now look he will give us red marks Muskaan, we should go!," Atul declared.

" I bet Nikita's fall had to be his fault. He is always targeting her," Muskaan declared.

Atul's eyes widened.

" We'll file a compliant, you will go to jail!," he hissed.

Nikita looked up wide eyed.

" What, she just fell. I did not…," he trailed off.

He felt responsible for her fall yes, but he did not need to be imprisoned for it.

" Dekho Atul aur Muskaan, Abhimanyu ne meri madad ki hi. He brought me back to the ward," Nikita retorted.

Abhimanyu smiled. She had kept his trust this time and spoke on his behalf.

" Lekin Nikita, why was he there with you?," Atul inquired.

" It doesn't matter. I love him and I know that he loves me," she blurted.

" Kya? Tum isse pyar karti ho?"

" Yes I do guys. Now if you can please excuse for a few minutes," Nikita requested.

Abhimanyu slid down on the stool beside her bed.

" Phirse bolo Nikki,"

She smiled shyly.

" Haan Abhi I love you," she whispered.

He cupped her chin and turned her face up to face him. He leaned over and kissed her forehead and then her cheek.

"Today I am the happiest and luckiest guy on this earth. I love you Nikki!"

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#235

Thank you adventure-gurl.... Also very sweet scene you've written.

Mich

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Michelle

@mich09

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Posted: 16 years ago

#236

**Scenes written by mich09**

SCENE 3

Perhaps the scene in the hospital could go like this

Nikki being given a painkiller which kind of puts her into deep sleep and she is oblivious of the fact that Abhi sits besides her right through the night holding her hands....

Ridz comes to see Nikki and she tells her that in her delirious state she spoke about her love for Abhi. Nikki asks " Did Abhi hear it too ?" Ridz says yes he heard everything and Nikki is embarassed wondering what will Abhi now be thinking about her ? Ridz also tells Nikki about Abhi's concern for her and he being with her right through the night and only went in the morning for a change in clothes. Nikki doesn't know what to say. She tells Ridz she needs to be discharged soon. However, before Ridz can say anything Abhi enters and says firmly that she will stay in the hospital till the pain decreases and she is able to move much easier. Both of them look at each other, and various past scenes keep flashing in front of them... Abhi sees Nikki telling him, in her semi-conscious state, how he is always with her and Nikki remembers Ridz words how Abhi heard everything and how he sat beside her right through the night. Ridz is watching them staring at each other and thinks she should leave them alone when suddenly they are all bombarded with "Haiye..... Nikkiji". Abhi doesn't even have to turn to know its Suman Lata behind him. He rolls up his eyes in exasperation. So do Nikki and Ridz. SLD stands beside Abhi and says "Nikkiji yeh kya hua jee" Abhi gives a fake smile to SLD and says "SLjee, dekh nahin sakti, aap ki Nikki jee seediyo se gir gayi or fracture hua hai". SLD goes "Hai Hai" Ridz realises that Abhi-Nikki needs some time to themselves and tells SLD "hamein jaana chaiye" Abhi gives Ridz a grateful look while Nikki is all nervous and asks "Ridz tum kahan ja rahe ho ?" Ridz says I have some work I'll catch up with you later. SLD keeps swaying and nudges Abhi saying "Aap bhi chaliye na Abhimanyu jee". Abhi says "aap jayiye SLjee, main aap se baad mein milta hoon" Ridz says haan mujhe tum se kaam hai Suman Lata jee, aap ayiye and pulls SLD who reluctantly leaves not before giving Abhimanyu her flashiest smile. While Nikki tries to hide a smile, Abhi shakes his head and says "Kahan se aa gayi yeh namoona". He then turns to Nikki. Both are looking at each other feeling very awkward. Both wanting to say something but don't know what to say, hoping that the other will say something first. Just as Abhi was about to walk towards Nikki, Muskaan and Atul walk in and ask Nikki what have you done ? how are you feeling. Abhi & Nikki exchange a dejected look. Looking at Abhimany standing there Muskaan goes "Yeh yahan kya kar raha hai. idhar bhi Nikki ki peecha nahin chodta. Atul says "haan yaar" "Aap yahan kya kar raha hai. Dr. Modi ?" Abhimanyu says "aap yahan kya raha hai Dr. Atul, Dr. Muskaan, aap dono ko duty nahin hai kya ?" Muskaan says "Hum apne dost ko dekhne aaye hai aur aap yahan kya kar raha hai?" After a brief pause she says "kahin tum Nikki ko seediyo se giraya toh nahin? Abhi says "What ?" "Muskaan says if you had a hand we will teach you a lesson. Atul says you'll go to jail.. Abhi and Nikki are both shocked. Nikki says "yeh tum dono kya keh rehe ho? Abhi ne" she blushes as she looks at Abhi "mera matlab Abhimanyu ne mujhe waqt par ilaaz kiya warna toh " looking at the surprised look on Muksaan and Atul's face she is unable to finish. Abhi & Nikki share an understanding look. Atul tries whispering "lagta main toh gaya.... doosra red mark milne wala hai" Puting his hands on his hip, Abhi tells him "Yes if you both don't report to duty right now I'll definitely give you a red mark". Both tell Nikki baad mein milte hain and rush out.... Abhi gives them an irritated look.... "one to one namoonas in this hospital". He then turns towards Nikki and going near her bedside "he asks how are you feeling now ?" Nikki is trying to avoid his eyes and says " I am ok" Sitting on the stool beside her bed, He asks "has the pain reduced a bit". Nikki nods her head "yeah a little bit". Just as he was about to say something a nurse walks in telling Abhimanyu he is needed in his office urgently. Abhi & Nikki both look at each other. Abhi tells the nurse he'll just be there and she goes away. Getting up Abhi tells Nikki "We'll talk later. You take care. Call me if you need anything " As he turns, Nikki holds his arm and stops him. Abhi turns in surprise. He looks at her. Nikki says "Thank you" Abhi gives her an understanding look and putting his hand over the hand which is still holding his arm he says "I'll be back soon". Nikki lowers her gaze and removes her hand as Abhi leaves.

Michelle

Edited by mich09 - 15 years ago