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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#241

Thanks Rinki - for some reason I have a feeling Radziedi is going to be snapping at an awful lot of people next week. :)

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#242

Hmm...prolly she will. But ah thats why we're here no? to make her mood better 😉

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#243

SHABZ! I'm pretty sure Radz is so gonna look forward to orientation now! 🤣 (Then again, maybe not! 😆 Oh crap, now I'm nervous. And I haven't even submitted my form yet...😕)

Oh, and, um, the only reason the uni didn't put us in the same course is 'cause I put English Lit as my first choice instead of Mass Comm like I originally intended to. Heh. Only because I'm hoping to do a double major in my second year, and that's only possible through Lit!!!

Love,

Bhav (:

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#244

Actually Bhav, you can do a double major in Comm Studies as well. (I might, I might not. I still want to take Lit as well.)

OMG, Shabz, now I'm going to have unrealistic expectations for orientation. *fans self* Hot cafe guy, who looks like my sexy sadoo. Pray for me people, pray for me!

And I may not go for the first few days, I haven't been feeling well. Go figure. I'd been dreading it for so long, now I may actually not go. And if I go, my grandparents don't want me to stay over night. (But if I don't how will I meet Mayank? Hau hai! I need to do something now.)

Shabz, thank you so much! I'm looking forward to it now. *giggle* If Mayank is there, it would make my life.

Love,
Radz

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#245

*giggles* I hope you feel better *hugs* and as always will pray! 😉

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: sourpuss
SHABZ! I'm pretty sure Radz is so gonna look forward to orientation now! 🤣 (Then again, maybe not! 😆 Oh crap, now I'm nervous. And I haven't even submitted my form yet...😕)Hey you got two weeks! Relax! 😃

Oh, and, um, the only reason the uni didn't put us in the same course is 'cause I put English Lit as my first choice instead of Mass Comm like I originally intended to. Heh. Only because I'm hoping to do a double major in my second year, and that's only possible through Lit!!! Thanks for telling me information I really needed to know. 😆 I'm asuming you liked it? So thanks. 😛

Love,

Bhav (:

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
Actually Bhav, you can do a double major in Comm Studies as well. (I might, I might not. I still want to take Lit as well.)*ignoring*

OMG, Shabz, now I'm going to have unrealistic expectations for orientation. *fans self* Hot cafe guy, who looks like my sexy sadoo. Pray for me people, pray for me! I'm praying...I'm praying...😆

And I may not go for the first few days, I haven't been feeling well. Go figure. I'd been dreading it for so long, now I may actually not go. And if I go, my grandparents don't want me to stay over night. (But if I don't how will I meet Mayank? Hau hai! I need to do something now.)Oh you are like me; before something big get all nervous and everything? 😆 You will do FINE! What if you miss it and miss a chance to see a hot guy? 😆

Shabz, thank you so much! I'm looking forward to it now. *giggle* If Mayank is there, it would make my life.No problem - it was lots of fun writing it! 😆

Love,
Radz

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#247

Tadap Tadap

Bejaan Dil Ko
Bejaan Dil Ko
Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya
Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya

His eyes smarted as the train pulled out from the station, taking away Heer from his life. But he knew that one day she would have to come back to him. That their love was too strong to have been killed so quickly. Prem and Heer had defied death. Nothing could stop them from being together. Not even themselves.

She was gone.

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

He walked back into the house, amidst glares being shot in his direction. His gaze lowered, ashamed to meet the disgusted ones of his fathers. Time seemed to have stood still. Turning, one by one, his family members walked out, not wanting to be in the same room as him. He slowly rose his eyes to see Heer standing by the staircase, smiling at him. Tears slid down Prem's cheeks as he drank in the sight of her. He blinked.

She was gone.

Ajab Hai Ishq Yaara
Pal Do Pal Ki Khushiyaan
Gam Ke Khazaane Milte Hain Phir
Milti Hai Tanhaiyaan
Kabhi Aansoon Kabhi Aahein
Kabhi Shikve Kabhi Naalein
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye Mujhe Din Ke Ujaalon Mein

He sat on the plane as it awaited takeoff. Through the film of tears covering his eyes he could see his family sitting rows in front of him. None had wanted to sit near him, with the exception of Meher who seemed to have been silenced by one angry look from Preet.

Looking out of the window, he desperately tried hanging on to Heer. He knew she was somewhere out there, biding her time. Prem's palms pressed against the window as he squinted, making out a tiny frame in the fields past the runway. Heer. Waving to him. He smiled when he made out the smile on her face. He rubbed his eyes and leaned towards to window for a better look.

She was gone.

Teri Yaadein Tadpayein
Teri Yaadein Tadpayein Raaton Ke Andheron Mein
Tera Chehra Nazar Aaye
Machal Machalke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

One year. One year to the day of their marriage. Prem scoffed as he read the marriage certificate again. He didn't need the government to tell him they were one. He had known. From the minute he had laid eyes on her, his heart had acted for the first time in his life, on it's own accord.

Looking out at the full moon, Prem rekindled the connection the chand brought him with Heer. There was a dark mass on the moon and with a start Prem saw Heer, laughing and beckoning him towards her. A smile stretched across his face as watched her dancing. He closed his eyes and for a second he glimpsed Heer, his Heer, her smiling lips, crimson cheeks and demurely lowered eyes. Opening his eyes, he looked back at the moon.

She was gone.

Agar Mile Khuda To
Poochhoonga Khudaya
Jism Mujhe Deke Mitti Ka
Sheeshay Sa Dil Kyon Banaya
Aur Us Pe Diya Fitrat
Ke Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Us Pe De Diya Kismat

He stepped on to Indian soil and he shuddered. The first touch in six years. The country held his relationship with Heer in such value the very feel of the country touched him with Heer.

He saw couples reuniting all around him, girls throwing their hands around necks, simply happy. What he would do for a certain pair of hands around his neck. Colors around him seemed to dim as she stepped out, dressed in yellow, outshining anything in comparasion. Her radiant smiled, brighter then any light in the area was directed straight at him. He struggled to keep his eyes open knowing what would happen if he shut them.

She walked up to him, smiling slightly and slowly extended her hand out to touch his cheek. Prem felt his eyes close as he anticipated the feel of her skin on his. Opening them slightly he was left.

She was gone.

Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat
Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat Hai Yehi Kya Vo Mohabbat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat
Sisak Sisakke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

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So the font is being really weird on me, doesn't look like what I usually post stuff up like but whatever. As long as you guys can read it. This just came to me, no real story line, more of Prem's feelings for the past six years. I've been feeling a lil off as in "writing skills" wise. 😕Hopefully it's a dry spell. Comments or hits of the like button anyone?

--shabz

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#248

My spot!

You, my dear Shabzie, truly are mistress of tragedy. (I was gonna give you the title of Queen of tragedy, but mistress of tragedy has a much better ring to it, don't you think? Besides, I'm (apparently) the queen of tragedy. 😛)

I loved the poeticism (is that even a word?!) in this. How he imagines Heer everywhere, and then "She was gone". The way you wrote this, the style and format and all, was just amazing. *worships*

Love,

Bhav (:

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#249

I love how you keep repeating that one line 'she was gone'. Short but so effective.

It was really good. Dry spell my foot, it was really good. And the song, I love that song. *sigh* Get out of your funk already, and write some more. Because I miss your writing.

Love,
Radz