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Originally posted by: sourpuss
My spot!
You, my dear Shabzie, truly are mistress of tragedy. (I was gonna give you the title of Queen of tragedy, but mistress of tragedy has a much better ring to it, don't you think? Besides, I'm (apparently) the queen of tragedy. 😛) *highfive* Wanna be "Mistresses of Tragedy? 😆I loved the poeticism (is that even a word?!) in this. How he imagines Heer everywhere, and then "She was gone". The way you wrote this, the style and format and all, was just amazing. *worships* Kiss my feet. 😆 Sorry, that was a line in something I read on another forum. 😆 Thanks! :)Love,Bhav (:
Originally posted by: Anhdara13
I love how you keep repeating that one line 'she was gone'. Short but so effective. Thanks!
It was really good. Dry spell my foot, it was really good. And the song, I love that song. *sigh* Get out of your funk already, and write some more. Because I miss your writing. Dude, tell me about it, this song is epic! AWESOME! And I wrote more. And I'm flattered. And I'm rambling. (Again!)
Love,
Radz
Originally posted by: Khushi34
Hey Shabz
That was amazing!!! 😃You know you're really good at this..Loved this one shotThe repetition of "She was Gone" was a really smart idea lol...It sort of added to the feel....I actually liked the font i suits the stroy well..😆😆😆Take carex
I love this song and you made it more sadder than it was in the movie.................anyhoo, awesome writing, very heart wrenching ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89
mine! 😛
And love the title Bhav for Shabz! 😛
*edited*
So that may have dampened my mood... a bit....😠Poor Prem...*sighs while Meera sobs*
But I loved the way you described how he saw her literally everywhere and how everytime he went closer she was gone....as everyone pointed out, that was very very effective...seeing the song on tv nearly every day...almost killed the essence of it for me...but you brought it back! *hugs*Oh my gosh, totally, this song has been playing everywhere! Thanks!
Thanks!😃😳Umm....*confused*....for what?
Love you,
Meera😳
Originally posted by: urworstnitemare
Oh I missed this...reading ur writing. That was awesome really! I loved the repetition you used. And oh it has such a poetic feeling! I bet any person could literally pick this apart and analyze it....dunno why anybody in their sane mind would but still. It had a bit of that symbolism in there too if you get what I mean. Very well done! lmao...its wierd how you ur self think it was bad but to others it was perfect! Don't underestimate urself! *hugs*
-Avi