My first fanfic - It's all about love

Hi

Hi guys

This is my first fanfic, plzzz tell me how it is

Summary: What happens when Ashi falls for Uv's cousin, Raj.

Read on to find out.

Part 1

Ashi, Uv, Ranveer & Sid r in the shed waiting for Tia, who is as usual, late.

Ashi: Hey bhaggu! Is timbo ne to aaj hadd hi kar di! Hum yahaan aaye hue half an hour ho gaya, aur ye ab tak nahi aayi! Apna 100 kg ka make-up laga rahi hogi. Thakur, tumne use sahi time to bataya tha na?

Ranveer: Haan, Ashi. Humne unhe sahi time hi bataya tha. Pata nahi ab tak kyun nahi aayi.

Uv: Uska cell bhi switched off hai.

Ranveer: Aap log rukiye, hum abhi unhe dekh ke aate hain.

Sid (in a quiet voice): Meher bhi uske saath hogi.

Ranveer dude, main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon

A minute after they have left, Uv starts playing a tune on his guitar & Ashi joins him on her casio.

So guys. Plz tell me if u liked it & if I should continue.