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Charu

@cz13

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Posted: 19 years ago

#71

hey shriya... dis is amazing 👏

i must give it to u for creating really gud cliffies 😆 😆

update sooooooooooon plz plz plz 😉

CYA
CHARZ 😉

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#72

Part16
Madness Uncensored

Sid: Ashi, tumhaare brain mein koi cavity aa gai hai kya?

Ashi: Hey bhaggu, Sid, cavity brain mein nahi, teeth mein hoti hai, aur doosri baat, tumhe chori nahi nahi, bas thodi si der ke liye Shyla ka cell phone borrow karma hai, use bina bataaye, uske baad uska phone mujhe de dena, main use karke use phone wapas kar doongi.

Sid: Well, agar aisi baat hai, to tum apna cell kyun nahi use kar leti.

Ashi: Duh-uh, Sid, tumhe jo kaam diya hai wo karo, apne brain ko zyaada mat use karo, samajh aai?

Sid: Lekin agar main pakda gaya to?

Ashi: Sid, yeh kaam na actually Meher ka hai, use Shyla ka cell chahiya, par woh Shyla se uska cell mangna nahi chahti, tum uska cell le aao.

Sid: Meher ko chahiye? Well, theek hai, main le aoonga, par agar pakda gaya to tum sab kuch handle karna.

Ashi: OK, fine, par agar Shyla ko iske bare mein kuch pata chala to tum mare. Get it?

Sid: Sufi.

Precap: Will Sid be able to get Shyla's without making the whole Maurya a 'madhouse'? Yes, find out what happens next in d naxt part 'Madhouse'.

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Meeti

@mitts

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#73

thasts too good shriya 👏
U know I just felt that ashi n sid have written this themselves

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#74

Part16
Madhouse

Ashi: Hey bhaggu! Yeh Sid ab tak kyun nahi aaya?

Uv: Wacko, ab who tumhaari har beck & call par to nahi reh sakta na.

Uv & Ashi r in Uv's room, waiting for Sid to come back, who is in Ashi's room, trying to steal Shyla's cell.

Ashi: U psycho! Sid ko gaye huye ek ghanta ho gaya, woh ab tak nahi aaya, mujhe to lagta hai ki usne phir koi problem khadi kar di hogi.

Uv: Fikar not! Woh aata hi hoga. Ashi, waise mujhe nahi lagta ki Raj aisa hai.I mean, main use jaanta hoon, after all, woh mera cousin hai.

Ashi: Uv, I hope ki jo tum keh rahe ho woh sach hai.

Uv: I hope so too, Ashi.

Meanwhile, in Ashi's room, Sid has created a Madhouse.

Sid: Yeh Shyla apna cell apne saath le kar kyun soti hai. Ab main uska cell kaise steal karoonga?

He sees a feather of the windowpane.

Sid: Haan, main isse use kar sakta hoon.

He picks up d feather & puts it in her nose. She raises her hand & slaps him in her sleep. Just then there is a knock on d door.

Arjun's voice: Hey! Darwaaza kholo!
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Precap: How will Sid get away with this, & what'll happen if Shyla wakes up?