My first fanfic - It's all about love

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

Hi
Hi guys

This is my first fanfic, plzzz tell me how it is

Summary: What happens when Ashi falls for Uv's cousin, Raj.

Read on to find out.

Part 1

Ashi, Uv, Ranveer & Sid r in the shed waiting for Tia, who is as usual, late.

Ashi: Hey bhaggu! Is timbo ne to aaj hadd hi kar di! Hum yahaan aaye hue half an hour ho gaya, aur ye ab tak nahi aayi! Apna 100 kg ka make-up laga rahi hogi. Thakur, tumne use sahi time to bataya tha na?

Ranveer: Haan, Ashi. Humne unhe sahi time hi bataya tha. Pata nahi ab tak kyun nahi aayi.

Uv: Uska cell bhi switched off hai.

Ranveer: Aap log rukiye, hum abhi unhe dekh ke aate hain.

Sid (in a quiet voice): Meher bhi uske saath hogi.

Ranveer dude, main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon

A minute after they have left, Uv starts playing a tune on his guitar & Ashi joins him on her casio.

So guys. Plz tell me if u liked it & if I should continue.

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breeze_912

@breeze_912

Explorer

Posted: 19 years ago

its really good continue soon
the summary is exciting -ashi falling 4 yuvi's cousin

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janki

@phoenix'87

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Posted: 19 years ago

awesome 👏 👏 👏
please continue...............
i am waiting

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Eloquent

@Eloquent

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

Hmmmm.....summary seems interesting! Nice chapter and your spellings are correct! Please write more! 👏 👏 👏

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Ankita

@kittuu_remix

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Posted: 19 years ago

hey post the next part soon!!!!!!!!!

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

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+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

its really good.....infact anything to do with ashi yuvi and the shed is good....coz it promises that something really romantic is on its way 😳 😳 😳

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ritwika

@tia_5

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

hey do write in more waiting wat happens next
tia

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armaanilicious

@armaanilicious

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+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

hey itz damn good plz continue soon

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Shriya Chadha

@HarshuKiDeewani

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

Part 2

After some time in band practice, they start to pack up.

Sid: Guys, jaldi karo, nahi to wo Mitra devil aa ke humara murder kar dega.

Tia: Oh, Tia itni jaldi nahi mar sakti. Jaldi karo ,jaldi karo.

Ashi: Timbo, tum khud to kuch kar nahi rahi ho, phir hume kyun keh rahi ho.

Ranveer: Shhh, hume lagta hai koi bahar hai. Aap log ladna band kijiye.
Waise bhi hum sab rules tod kar hi yahaan aaye hain.

Finally they pack up & go back to their rooms without getting caught.

The next day, Ashi is outside the school, when she sees this really cute guy who is not from the school.
She starts following him. He turns to her.

Cute guy: Hi, do u know where I can find Yuvraj Dev?

Ashi: Oh, Uv. And u r….?

Cute guy: I am Raj. I'm his cousin. I need to talk to him.

Ashi: Hi, I'm Ashi. I think wo abhi apne kamre me hoga, so raha hoga. Waise bhi wo Kumbhkaran hi to hai.

Raj: Do u know ki boys hostel kahaan hai?

Ashi (in her mind): Yeh kitna cute hai. Main ise us fake He-Man ke pas kyun le kar jaoon? Think, Anvesha Bannerjee Ray, think.
Idea!!!

Plz post ur comments.

Edited by shriya_chadha - 19 years ago